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LyricalMethod 05-24-04 12:05 PM

LyricalMethod vs. PoTeNtIaL
 
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LyricalMethod 05-24-04 12:06 PM

checkin in.....................pussy..............im tired of battlin nb's

LyricalMethod 05-24-04 12:46 PM

after this battle, you won't be able to put your mind on this/
cuz the only shit you'll be good for is the special olympics/................................

verse:

i can't lose cuz im 1 of the clumps/(get it)
talkin shit, i'll sqeeze off one time and make your dick look like a thumb/

i ain't a vet but yet i can rest, cuz my punches fly everywhere like a verbal tec/
i can care less if you spit hard, cuz even if you had toxic breath, BITCH, you couldn't breathe death/

and i am the best, i ain't the rest/
cuz i'll rip you haulter top to expose your breast/(PUSSY)

you goin under ,craka hold your breath/
i got yah verse chokin like its blowin meth/

you way 2 wack, you can't be black/
the only heat you hold is your is your thermis in you back-pac/

im NEVER wack, you must be smokin crack, cuz the only way you winnin is if vanilla ice comes back and votes on that ^^^^^^/

its ova jack, u can't fight back/
im disabling your verse's connecting like i fuckin repo rap/

i got the gear, im bout to break the mold/
you structure is lookin fukin stupid like 2 left toes/

im way past froze, im spittin sub-zero floes/
my verses's tighter than brazilian's and fuckin speedo's/

you don't deserve a win, like strobe im revokin it/
you better off askin lyrical destuction to let you in/



weak verse but should be enough

LyricalMethod 05-24-04 12:47 PM

uppin for your verse pussy....................................

PoTeNtIaL 05-25-04 12:06 AM

damn from alldat shit u wuz talkin i wuz expectin more.....alot more......fuckin aggot....

This is the movin of the wack n uve been forced into exile/ Wanna be “noticed” but only way is if I “copy yo style”

verse

Rhyming’s a science and “method” wuz “formulated” by a bad “hypothesis”/ If “rhymin wack” is a treasure then yo rhymes is “priceless” !!

He’s got no rite -to- compete like drugged-up athletes / Only time he feels “instant heat” is when he’s close-to-defeat

He can only win one way, but den he’d forfeit to deceit/ His rhymes couldn;t get “recognition in his autobiography

If you “think before you speak” then no one would “hear your voice”/ How can you be “destined to rhyme” when you was “ducking the choice”*

He in love wit his “clit” and lyke the “love struk” he bein pussy-whipped/ Im constructive criticism, but the way he “breaking rules“ he’d never “take-a-tip”**

Saying “i mus not be blak, im wak” bitch color doesnt decide skill/ Cuz im leavin ya name green lyke billz an uya rhymes bein thrown stull aint comin ill***

You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card”


His punches “cummin up short” lyke a “6 n 9” pulled out by an elf/ He wanted to dis “a pussy and a rookie” so he started dissin himself****


Hittin “below the belt” neva risin with a level lower den “missy elliot”/ How am i gonna disagree when he ADMITS all his spit nuthin but rhyme shit


Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****


*he duked da chosen one
**one of da tipz seyz dont have lyrical in ya name
***his font name is green
****called me a pussy and a rookie...69......6 and 9 aimed by a midget falls short.....

*****a movie dat got loota awards....


This is the movin of the wack n uve been forced into exile/ Wanna be “noticed” but only way is if I “copy yo style”

verse

Rhyming’s a science and “method” wuz “formulated” by a bad “hypothesis”/ If “rhymin wack” is a treasure then yo rhymes is “priceless” !!

He’s got no rite -to- compete like drugged-up athletes / Only time he feels “instant heat” is when he’s close-to-defeat

He can only win one way, but den he’d forfeit to deceit/ His rhymes couldn;t get “recognition in his autobiography

If you “think before you speak” then no one would “hear your voice”/ How can you be “destined to rhyme” when you was “ducking the choice”*

He in love wit his “clit” and lyke the “love struk” he bein pussy-whipped/ Im constructive criticism, but the way he “breaking rules“ he’d never “take-a-tip”**

Saying “i mus not be blak, im wak” bitch color doesnt decide skill/ Cuz im leavin ya name green lyke billz an uya rhymes bein thrown stull aint comin ill***

You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card”


His punches “cummin up short” lyke a “6 n 9” pulled out by an elf/ He wanted to dis “a pussy and a rookie” so he started dissin himself****


Hittin “below the belt” neva risin with a level lower den “missy elliot”/ How am i gonna disagree when he ADMITS all his spit nuthin but rhyme shit

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****

*he duked da chosen one
**one of da tipz seyz dont have lyrical in ya name
***his font name is green
****called me a pussy and a rookie...69......6 and 9 aimed by a midget falls short.....
****a movie dat got loota awards....

dun talk shit unless u got tha skillz to bak it up....pussy ass muthfucka....

PoTeNtIaL 05-25-04 12:08 AM

mah bad posted mah verse twice....................

PoTeNtIaL 05-25-04 11:45 AM

oh yea 4got to explain y he dissed himself...he sed he had an "ice cold" flow.....uppin

PoTeNtIaL 05-25-04 02:57 PM

uppin for votes...................................

PoTeNtIaL 05-25-04 10:42 PM

uppin for votes...................................

J Gutta 05-25-04 11:11 PM

aight lemme break it down

method u gotta elevate if u want "POTENTIAL"
but ye p took this with flow,,,structure..punches personals and every thing els
nice battle yo
my vote:potential

holla at ma two battles in ma sig return tha vote aight peace be easy..wun

PoTeNtIaL 05-26-04 11:15 AM

1-0................................uppin..........

PoTeNtIaL 05-26-04 03:51 PM

Uppin.............................................

PoTeNtIaL 05-27-04 02:15 PM

someone please vote on this.......................

Lil Slippa 05-28-04 06:52 AM

I CANT VOTE YET CUZ I AINT BEEN ON IN A MINUTE but when I get the chance Iwill. My fault LyricalMethod for missing the battle and Naw I aint pre writing.
:laugh2: :thumbup:

Lil Slippa 05-28-04 06:55 AM

I probably want be on for a lomg while again because of traveling with AAU Basketball.

PoTeNtIaL 05-28-04 01:13 PM

uppin les finish this.............................

PoTeNtIaL 05-30-04 05:27 PM

cmon kan someone vote on this.....................

SLUT! 05-30-04 06:27 PM

my vote goes to...........ummm....Lyrical

Lyrical you had better punches but you still need to work on your punches so that they hit harder try rewording them and work on your structure a lil bit man......pc

Lil Nae2 05-30-04 07:17 PM

damn good ass battle but my vote goes to PoTeNtIaL just cause he had a way betta wordplay and punches den da otha cat his verse flowed betta to everythin was on point

v/PoTeNtIaL
you if you aint gotta a crew check out lyrical legends
holla.

Recluse 05-30-04 07:27 PM

method for talking all that shit you got merked

punches:p
flow:p
struture:p
wordplay:method
personals:p
overall:potential

can you guys return the fava and vote on my battles the links are on my sig thanks

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Sik Wit It 05-31-04 12:01 PM

Structure = Pot
Wordplay = Meth
Punches = Draw
Flow = Pot
Personals = Draw

Overall Vote = PoTeNtIaL

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

PoTeNtIaL 05-31-04 04:28 PM

easiest pussy i ever merked....fuckin fag.....4-1.....one more vote to finish this.......thanks to all dat voted.....illl return the favor....and i lil, im a fre agent......uppin

T lite 06-01-04 01:38 PM

Rate Lines 1-10

after this battle, you won't be able to put your mind on this/
cuz the only shit you'll be good for is the special olympics/ 5...Average at best

i can't lose cuz im 1 of the clumps/(get it)
talkin shit, i'll sqeeze off one time and make your dick look like a thumb/ 4...wtf

i ain't a vet but yet i can rest, cuz my punches fly everywhere like a verbal tec/
i can care less if you spit hard, cuz even if you had toxic breath, BITCH, you couldn't breathe death/ 5...Decent again

and i am the best, i ain't the rest/
cuz i'll rip you haulter top to expose your breast/(PUSSY) 4...WHACK

you goin under ,craka hold your breath/
i got yah verse chokin like its blowin meth/ 3...WHACK

you way 2 wack, you can't be black/
the only heat you hold is your is your thermis in you back-pac/ 4...Again Terrible

im NEVER wack, you must be smokin crack, cuz the only way you winnin is if vanilla ice comes back and votes on that ^^^^^^/ 4...Ehhh

its ova jack, u can't fight back/
im disabling your verse's connecting like i fuckin repo rap/ 3....BAD

i got the gear, im bout to break the mold/
you structure is lookin fukin stupid like 2 left toes/ 3...Somewhat Humerous

im way past froze, im spittin sub-zero floes/
my verses's tighter than brazilian's and fuckin speedo's/ 5...Comedic

you don't deserve a win, like strobe im revokin it/
you better off askin lyrical destuction to let you in/ 4...NO

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Rhyming’s a science and “method” wuz “formulated” by a bad “hypothesis”/ If “rhymin wack” is a treasure then yo rhymes is “priceless” !! 6...Nice Thought

He’s got no rite -to- compete like drugged-up athletes / Only time he feels “instant heat” is when he’s close-to-defeat 5...Decent

He can only win one way, but den he’d forfeit to deceit/ His rhymes couldn;t get “recognition in his autobiography 5...Decent

If you “think before you speak” then no one would “hear your voice”/ How can you be “destined to rhyme” when you was “ducking the choice”* 5....

He in love wit his “clit” and lyke the “love struk” he bein pussy-whipped/ Im constructive criticism, but the way he “breaking rules“ he’d never “take-a-tip”** 6...

Saying “i mus not be blak, im wak” bitch color doesnt decide skill/ Cuz im leavin ya name green lyke billz an uya rhymes bein thrown stull aint comin ill*** 5...Decent

You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card” 6...Better


His punches “cummin up short” lyke a “6 n 9” pulled out by an elf/ He wanted to dis “a pussy and a rookie” so he started dissin himself**** 7...lol


Hittin “below the belt” neva risin with a level lower den “missy elliot”/ How am i gonna disagree when he ADMITS all his spit nuthin but rhyme shit 4...Decent


[u]Obviously Potential Took this battle......Lyrical, ya need hella help on ya punches and complexity.......

Vote: Potential

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****

T lite 06-01-04 01:41 PM

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****6

PoTeNtIaL 06-09-04 02:46 PM

UPPIN, cmon 2 votes............................,....

PoTeNtIaL 06-09-04 06:15 PM

up...............,................................ .....

PoTeNtIaL 06-10-04 12:03 AM

up................................................ ..

PoTeNtIaL 06-10-04 12:04 PM

uppin............................................. .

PoTeNtIaL 06-11-04 12:41 PM

uppin............................................. .......

damaged1 06-22-04 02:04 PM

pretty decent battle ..

Potential come a little harder but wasnt really feeling all his punches.
Method came ok but the punches were played.

overall: Pontential

da pimp 06-24-04 09:49 PM

I vote for potential because he is a cutie
and because I want to be potentially hoppin on his nuts
I love you potential

PoTeNtIaL 06-27-04 10:33 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppp............ ........

Wordz AhGod 06-27-04 11:01 PM

Str8 Up, first thing I wanna say is...

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyricalMethod
You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card”


I thank god He used that joke on Method rather than me.LoL, my opinion is that Method underestimated his opponent and made basic punchlines. he did'nt put a good effort in this battle as far as his wordplay and vocab goes. I could'nt read the entire verse befor I got board and said "next".
When I began reading Potentials intro, I was think damn, this nigga is on that, He ripped em wit an intro, Oh shit. then his verse started and it was a swurvy line on a bargraph, at times he had his ups and downs. Mostly ups wit his punches and metaphores. his openner was kinda corny but he came back up in the shit that followed. He had good personals against Method and his crew which is always a good thing to do in a battle.

V/ Potential


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