Lot V Ktrin
 

6-8 bars
House Rules
Spit First, i am not wasting a verse on a shook herb.
Due 12 tonight... if not possible tell me.
Those are the rules... Abide or DQ.

Good luck

due tomorrow night... no later.........................

Ok...i will not be on any later then 1030... shit went down and i gotta leave then... so i will post my verse tomorrow...You can wait until tomorrow or post yours tonight.

So many gay ass mother fuckers I've merked,next victim.......Liqour of Tears/
That bitch ass that dickrides like a pornstar,and loves a mouthful of pears/
My rhymes are so hard,you write it on paper and roll it up,it turns into a bat/
But don't worry,you tough,you got shot 9 times by a gun that only goes splat*/
Reading your verses or poems are annoying,like sand goin in your pants/
If I write your poems on my palm,then I bassically holding shit on my hand/
U lost the tiny amount of skill you had...cause you all over people's nuts/
Why'd I bother with you?,my mom could beat you by saying "no,if,ands,or,buts"/


*splat in 2nd punch means he got shot by a gun that many boys have.........

So many gay ass mother fuckers I've merked,next victim.......Liqour of Tears
That bitch ass that dickrides like a pornstar,and loves a mouthful of pears
My rhymes are so hard,you write it on paper and roll it up,it turns into a bat
But don't worry,you tough,you got shot 9 times by a gun that only goes splat
Reading your verses or poems are annoying,like sand goin in your pants
If I write your poems on my palm,then I bassically holding shit on my hand
U lost the tiny amount of skill you had...cause you all over people's nuts
Why'd I bother with you?,my mom could beat you by saying "no, if, ands or buts"

Ok... Ill key it up real quick for y ou.. Im glad you dropped :)

It took you 3 days to drop those lines?
Oh thats right, Your mom makes you get off at 9*
And you say your an underated Emcee
But noone rates you in the first place, so how can that be?
I am fearing a little cause I'm facing last months rookie
Wait, Rookie of the month is what you were SUPPOSED to be
get some boxing training, You're punches need it
Cause i've been hit harder by a quadrapalegic
Are you hinting at something...
Cause gay references is all that comes out of you.
Sacrafice him like performing voodoo, You know what Screw you
Pretty sad when your Pet has a higher winning percent then you do*



*His mom made him get off because he had school :)
*Pet=Rapperz



Ok Get some votes it... Very quickly keyed... :)

k trin - decent verse....u had some good concepts just not enough wordplay to pull off the hard hitters....like the shit on my hand was pretty good.....sum lines were played....decent verse though....elevate on werdplays and personals.....good drop......keep elevatin....

lot - that closer killed it....dayum....decent verse too....stretched lines....could tell u didnt go hard....he had better flow....u had better personals and punches....he had metas....but ur closer won this for u....that was hot.....

good battle though...

vote - LoT

i think k-trins verse was weak it had no originality...good flow decent structure and good punches but mostly played and unoriginal...you should elevate some more cuz this verse you showed nothign interesting at all...

overall: 4/10

LoT: i think he won this with his 2nd and 3rd bar good personals in those 2 bars and punches strong flow and decent structure good originality...overall you had a strong verse and you deserve this win


this wasnt a hott battle tho i wasnt feelin it that much but LoT gets my vote cuz his verse jus appealed to me more i dont think k-trin came that hard

vote: LoT

~!1!~

uppin

uppin tooo

Uppinn

Aiyo Check Dis...

KTrin - Your Verse Was Aight, But Your Structure Lacked and Your Punches Weren't Hitting As Hard As LOT's. You Had Punches (That Lacked Word Structure) and Had No Personals. Your Flow Was Aight, Just Elevate Man.

LOT - Ya Verse Was Aight, Seen Betta From Ya. (THE OLD RB.com Structure Is Wack..Lose It!!)Newayz..Nice Personals You Used In Your Punches Against Him and Your Flow Was On Key. Nice Metaphors and I Liked The Line About Guadrapalegics. LOL...

Nice Drops From Both, Props To Both Emcees.

Vote - LOT For More Personals And Better Punches

~R~

^ how the fuck can you say the Old RB structure is whack? It's not the Old RB structure, it's called a fucking structure. For a verse. The type you can rap too, over a beat. You see, when each line has 20 sylabbles, then your structure is stretched and whack, and it doesn't matter what fucking site you are on.

word.. that is my keying structure.. i only use the fancy lookin shit if i am taking a while to write it... UPPPPP

im uppppin...................UPPPPPIN... and shadow while you were in the thread why didnt you vote :)

^ can't vote on crew battles..

uppin

this battle was not that great both could have hit harder....ktrin ur lyrics seemed kind of childish and stuff dont get me wrong sum of lot were also childish......but who cares battles are for people to elevate...well ktrin ur flow was decent and ur wordplay was aight not great ur structure was ok the thing i didntlike how u reposted it....overall c-
lot ur verses was better in all aspects stucture wordplay and so on...i liked that llline about the dogg who has a bigger winnin percent them him that shit was comedy...so my vote goes to lot

since i voted leave some feedback i crhyme sindicates latest open mic release called we wont stay down the link is in my sig

Damn.... someone close this ish..... UPPPPPPPPPPPPPIN

hmmmmmmmmmm i wonder who won lol
ok lot merked u without trying k trin u need 2 work on ur flow tears and pear doesnt rhyme and the rest was 2 basic work on ur vocab i didnt c anywords in there that were big i also want u 2 work on personals and vocab and creativity
ok lot good flow vocab and personals ur structure could use a little work though and thats about it
so lot u didnt try and u still won good job u just came harder funnier more personal and more complex