Greenmartian Vs Me
 

U Challenged, U Spit First

10-20 Lines
No D/r
No C/r
No Hate

As i step in the sceen tha curtan drops, never liked dealin with cops, but ma faith was surtain, spinnin wheels constantly u could say they where curly, destruction hit powerfull earth in its first stages, only 200 yeahrs ago streets witnessing mages, gorrilas locked up in cages, fuckit have patiance discover tha nations, i get day by day on ma head payling up complications, operate tha patians, take over invasions, cover her face with a flag on diffrent occassions, only let ma soldier out at hideout stations, turned 19 today my occupation involves transporting medications

i dont know if i should space my shit but whatever

This Is A Battle.....dumbass

Nigga Stop Wit The Real Shyt, Hop Off That/
U Wanna Sound Like Pac, But Ur More Like Nas On Crack/
Im Typin This And Askin Myself Y Am I Battlin U Dog/
Ur Out Of Ur Place, Like Ur Structure When U Battlin Ur God/
Oh, U A Fuckin Adult, Im Only Thirteen/
How U Use That Rap On Me And U Dont Kno Wut Ya Words Mean/
And We Can Tell When U Wrote This, U Were Jus Thinkin Of Meaningless Shit That Rhymed/
Cuz Part Of Ur Verse Is Garbage And The Other Part Was Missed Spelled The Rest Of The Time/
Nigga I Aint Gotta Go Hard, Cuz U Got No Punches/
I Knew U Were Garbage U Pmed Me Cuz U Didnt Wanna Make Challenges In Public/
See Im The Underated Champ Awaitin The Parade/
U The Laughin Stock Of The Whole Board, And U Havnt Been Here One Day/
Me Alone Can Knock Out Ur Whole Team Out Like Atomic Bombs/
Ur A Failure, Fuck U, I Feel Sorry For Ya Moms/
Im Done, Nigga I Dont Kno How Much U Can Manage/
Look Like This Green Martian Jus Got Knocked Backed To His Planet/

green martian=
i don't no wat you were thinkin but this is called a BATTLE
and i dont even have anything to say bout you spit...0/10

gottaasswhoopin4u=
Damn long ass name....lol, j/k
but honestly you should have saved that hot verse for sum1
who is worth it i like ya structure, punches, and wordplay
staup and keep advancin.....7/10

vote=gottaasswhoopin4u

^^^^^^thx but doggy u aint poll ya vote.....poll plz....uppppppin

thanx but u aint poll..........uppiin plz vote, and leave links if u want a favor returned

greenmartian: well shit basically your structure made the verse very
unreadable, your flow I wasn't really feeling too much.......your punches
never in the verse hit hard..... vocab not near good at all......

gotaasswhoopin4u: well you wasted a perfectly good verse on this
cat, structure was way better, flow was better than martian,
punches hit him harder than the punches he did & your vocab was
good.............you merked this cat

vote: gotaasswhoopin4u

drop a honest vote on my shit like I did on yours:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

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iight iight...

First off, this dude GREEN MARTIAN aint even come at this dude Assswhoopin he was talkin about his life while he should be offendin the other opponent, he's talkin about
"turned 19 today my occupation involves transporting medications" but that has nothing to do with battling a person..yes that line is a lyric but this is called "rap battles" not "rhymin speeches" iight..

who started off better was--whoopin4u because it was very true
who had the best ender--whoopin4u i dunno bout martian but he was in a whole different perspective talkin about his job
punches--whoopin4u because MARTIAN aint got no punches
personals--whoopin4u no personals for martian
multies--didnt see nuttin..

oh chea...forgot to say who was the winner....ummm..this is a tuffy...

VOTE: GOTTAWHOOPPIN..

gotsstawoppin4u, got this 4real. Greenmartian i seen u do better, in this battle your shit was garbage compared to gosstawoppin4u, cause i know u can do better!

Vote:gotsstawopppin4u

Man Ill Return Favors...............idk Kno Bout Dude...but Vot Muh Fuckas

Man Ill Return Favors...............idk Kno Bout Dude...but Vot Muh Fuckas

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Damn
..........................i Ppl May Not Be Interested In A Noob Battle But Fuck....can Sumone Fuckin Vote Bitch Asses

vote you fuckin bloodclot ass sluts............................................. ............

What The Fuck................this Is Prolly Gonna Go Down In History As The Longest Battle Open

Muthafuckin Bitch Ass Muthafuckas Uppin This Muthafuckin Battle

green martian= damn....dunno what u were doin..but it was aight a little bit

gottaasswhoopin4u= you had some pretty good punches in there & wordplay

vote = GoTaAsSwHoOpIn4u

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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lets see i have to go with gotaass becuase his lyrics was crazier, and he rhymed much better, and his closure put this place to shame so my vote goes to gotaass. peace and oh yea check this battle out plz thnx..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734

got ass gotz my vote, he had some punchlines in there, and it was a decent rhyme, U know? arite im out, peace./

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ok gotass nice job man nice spit nice flow was good

otha guy wat the hall u doing on this site man get off this site ur spit was just horrible omg

vote-gotaasswhoopin4u

GAAW-You beat him becuz you cAME HARDER AND STRUCTURE
everything else wa nah...Work on some thingds though
but the rest was aight..keep elevatin

GM-Have structure and punches to you battle
yuou lose becuz of dat....

b/GAAW

return the fav please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

Yo This was a pretty easy battle to decide, The first guy didn't come with a battle verse- no punchlines or disses its just plain to see that all gotasswhoopin4 u had to do was actually post a couple verses actually attackin his opponent which he did
fav bar;
See Im The Underated Champ Awaitin The Parade/
U The Laughin Stock Of The Whole Board, And U Havnt Been Here One Day/
you had a couple decent lines in this post, just work on ur structure in the future... please return the fav.... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...56&page=1&pp=15