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T lite 05-25-04 09:54 AM

T lite vs. Big Kountry
 
10-15 lines
No crew.....hate...DR votes....



Check... :thefinger



spit to it man :thumbup:

Big Kountry 05-25-04 07:02 PM

check in ......................................

*mic turn on* *turns to the Crowd and raises the mic to lips*

Big Kountry 05-25-04 07:25 PM

you gotta post your, .....wins to get jucied,
cuz i would to if i knew...
.... "little noise was produced",
im the dude to make..... t-lite insane,
cuz theres nothing you can say..
...that will make your 15 ko's change,
Im straight evil, watch me haunt this man,
Kid i'll leave u swimmin blood..
.... like a baby's sonogram,
Holding supersoakers, only way dude'll have a gat to spray,
And say t-lite is garbage right?...
...Even your names leaning that way!,
t-lite a male? I saw a pussy when I flipped on da light switch
I’m sure we’ve all figured out by ya style....
.... that uz a white bitch!!!

T lite 05-26-04 11:54 PM

I'ma drop soon, I ain't been home...been busy wit softball sorry........~1ne~

T lite 05-27-04 12:25 PM

Kountry Fella, go on and get ya facts straight,
Cuz you’re more fucced up than retards on liquid lactates // :laugh:

You wanna see a tense situation, then keep fuccin’ wit my patients //
I’ll leave you 6 feet under like Dead Bodies in Manson’s basement // :thefinger

Ever since birth, I’ve been Destroyin’ the Lyrically Weak //
You’re just anutha knotch on my belt, so take your Verbal Defeat // :thumbup:

When I speak….shhh…..They say Silence is bliss //
All you’re speakin’ is nonsense, to Decease & Decist //
:shoot:

Dawg, you had no structure lol....You only spit like 7 lines so I'll spit about eight... :spit:

BTW, I'm a girl lmao, so there went ya whole verse haha, all ya pussy lines and shit oh well.... :gfy:


Votes up

Big Kountry 05-27-04 02:44 PM

yo there is 10 lines you just cant read and my strucher needs no help you litteracy does uppin for votes

smartzz 05-27-04 02:59 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126748 can ya vote on dat battle 4 me

Big Kountry 05-27-04 03:00 PM

drop a vote here frist

smartzz 05-27-04 03:03 PM

t lite got hiz punches were harder good battle

:) 05-27-04 03:16 PM

ok weak battle im telling you.. big kountry won this shit though i felt like he came with better lines and punches... t lite had some basic disses about leaving somene under the ground.. that shit is weak and unoriginal..i felt like kountry won this battle because his disses were harder the personals that he threw in his verse attacked t lites charachter well

vote- big kountry

:) 05-27-04 03:21 PM

aiight i spent time voting on your battle now hit this battle of mine up with a vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130253

50hater_killer 05-27-04 03:26 PM

Even tho I can not vote yet and I faced Kountry I think he opened up is lyrcis crazy so vote goes to kountry.

:) 05-27-04 05:10 PM

wtf man you didnt even return the favor? .............

Big Kountry 05-27-04 05:14 PM

i did go check

Big Kountry 05-27-04 08:23 PM

uppin plz. vote man plz.

Mad Dog 05-28-04 05:43 AM

Aight battle both of ya Big had t-lite on the structure and it was tied between the punches both came at each other real hard. Wordplay again really hard to tell so again a tie, No multies i could see Personals could do wit improving on both accounts.

But ima give this to Big Kountry tho it was a tight battle

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-28-04 05:58 AM

Country's structure was a lil off, but I could still follow it.... Plus, structure don't really mean shit anywayz as long as it has good punches...

Anywayz...

PUNCHES-Country (t-lite had some aiight ones like da retards drinkin lactates line, but I think Country's hit harder wid da shit like... Kid i'll leave u swimmin blood.. like a baby's sonogram<<best of battle, my opinion)
FLOW-Tie (Both pretty easy to follow)
MULTIS-Tie (Weren't really many in either verse from what I could see)
PERSONALS-T-Lite (Felt em more, coz she threw Country's shit backk at em and went on about his structure & shit, but don't get me wrong Country had a good personal or 2. I was jus feelin T's more)
Complexity/Creativity-Country (punches were more creative, but barely)
OVERALL VOTE- Country

This one was close. I had to read it a few times b4 makin an honest desicion. It could go either way. Good job to both MCz, and congrats to whoever gets da win! Plz return da favor for me wid da link in my sig. Good lookin...

SUPERVILLAIN 05-28-04 06:18 AM

my vote is for t lite.

kountry, you were bested in his match. t lite came with a better flow, stronger punches and a smoother structure. she got you this time..........just continue to battle and elevate.........then go after her again later. nice shit lite...one.

s.v.................c.s.

iamthatdude87 05-28-04 06:31 AM

yo this battle was aight but not great.....kountry ur strucure was horrible i got lost like 3 times had to read it over stuff....ur punchlines were ok too but could of came out harder..the only one i like was u callin her a bitch...but for real i think u were on the lower edge in this one....T lite ur verse cool u had a totaly better stucture then country and ur punches i think were alot better then his....both u keep at elevate more but my vote goes to t lite

iamthatdude87 05-28-04 06:32 AM

oh yea i voted so all i ask is some feed back on Crhyme Sindicates Latest Release its in open mic and its called "We Wont Stay Down" the link is in my sig holla

Big Kountry 05-28-04 07:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by T lite
Kountry Fella, go on and get ya facts straight,
Cuz you’re more fucced up than retards on liquid lactates // :laugh:

You wanna see a tense situation, then keep fuccin’ wit my patients //
I’ll leave you 6 feet under like Dead Bodies in Manson’s basement // :thefinger

Ever since birth, I’ve been Destroyin’ the Lyrically Weak //
You’re just anutha knotch on my belt, so take your Verbal Defeat // :thumbup:

When I speak….shhh…..They say Silence is bliss //
All you’re speakin’ is nonsense, to Decease & Decist //
:shoot:




Votes up




does any one see any personals in there cuz i dont oh she said my name right i guess thats a personal.......................... not

come on upin htis shit

LyricalMethod 05-28-04 08:33 AM

T lite your right his structure was fucked but you spit bull shit in 6 of those eight lines.
Big Kountry no good punches but you had enough personas to get my vote. Big Kountry tighten up your structure, punches and wordplay. T lite don't cut your verse off just to make a a point.

vote=Big Kountry

.::N-Sight::. 05-28-04 11:43 AM

you gotta post your, .....wins to get jucied,
cuz i would to if i knew...
.... "little noise was produced",
im the dude to make..... t-lite insane,
cuz theres nothing you can say..


^^ not feeling the structure of your lines...it creates a choppy flow

punchwise...it was okay...could be more creative


Holding supersoakers, only way dude'll have a gat to spray,
And say t-lite is garbage right?...
...Even your names leaning that way!,
t-lite a male? I saw a pussy when I flipped on da light switch
I’m sure we’ve all figured out by ya style....
.... that uz a white bitch!!!

^^ Again, work on your structure. You are attempting to diss duke. BUt, the punches don't land that hard. For example, the supersoaker line could have hit harder had you reworded it and included some nice wordplay action.

Decent drop


Kountry Fella, go on and get ya facts straight,
Cuz you’re more fucced up than retards on liquid lactates //

^^ Whats with the smiley faces and graphics...ugh..leave em out...its annoying and gimmicky..punch was BLAH


When I speak….shhh…..They say Silence is bliss //
All you’re speakin’ is nonsense, to Decease & Decist //

Dawg, you had no structure lol....You only spit like 7 lines so I'll spit about eight...

^^^^ Punches are not landing...and the last part was tru...but thats verse feeding...and verse feeding is only acceptable when the rules allow it

blah...elevate both of u..add some complexity to your lines in the form of vocab, metas, wordplay, and more creative punches

Vote: BIG...at least an attempt at a battle verse


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