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KiNg SoLo .::VS::. anxiety
this bitch wants a quick battle
fuckin got his pre-written ready but anyway 5 min spit. 10 lines max. no d/r no hate no crew no feedin spit bitch!!! |
King Solo? does that mean that youre the best and only?
All im seein is a man who's depressed and lonely... Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues... Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it... this guy really thinks he's great, even gave himself a crown... challenges me... then for a while he doesnt make a sound... we all know you were writing, you made it quite blatant... saying i pre-write... get an excuse thats not ancient... yep i did... i admit it... actually, i was doing homework... and you pre-write, why else would you make me go first... you're a fag... you know i have finals, then you take 15 minutes to accept... |
can i vote?
hehehe...i'll be fair...holla back 1 |
Only if I can vote......I promise to be fair too, but I am in anxiety's crew....
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i took so long to accept bitch cuz i was busy
u aint the only battle i got goin bitch cuz unlike u i'll challenge a few ppl cuz i aint a pussy here's my spit You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety This only because ure the President of the pre-written society He thinks that he’s a vet with that Open Mic award on his shelf Talkin about newbs tryin to be vets, dude u talking bout ureself Knowin that ure gonna lose this battle anxiety is wat u suffering Regretting the acception cuz u battling the fuckin tougher king Just sayin u can beat me is crazy, u been sniffing too much glue Moaning about wack crews u just sad cuz no crew wants you He only bitchin cuz he knows he ain’t getting nominated again The RB Awardz cud go for years cuz another one u’ll never attain!! there give me longer and i would have linked ure ass in every line |
King Solo? does that mean that youre the best and only?
All im seein is a man who's depressed and lonely... ^^ pretty funny there...good opener Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues... Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it... ^^umm..decent...i change the tense of words to rhyme...but this sorta doesn't work..decent...eh this guy really thinks he's great, even gave himself a crown... challenges me... then for a while he doesnt make a sound... ^^ dats funny...lol we all know you were writing, you made it quite blatant... saying i pre-write... get an excuse thats not ancient... ^^ decent...not great...jus eh yep i did... i admit it... actually, i was doing homework... and you pre-write, why else would you make me go first... ^^ nice personals...but focusing on prewriting for your entire verse...iono...decent closer You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety This only because ure the President of the pre-written society ^^ Thats funny...good opener...more --ish on prewritten... He thinks that he’s a vet with that Open Mic award on his shelf Talkin about newbs tryin to be vets, dude u talking bout ureself ^^ haha..dats hot..and tru...good diss yo Knowin that ure gonna lose this battle anxiety is wat u suffering Regretting the acception cuz u battling the fuckin tougher king ^^ boooooooo...i don't think acception is a word Just sayin u can beat me is crazy, u been sniffing too much glue Moaning about wack crews u just sad cuz no crew wants you ^^ dats funny..yo...nice punch He only bitchin cuz he knows he ain’t getting nominated again The RB Awardz cud go for years cuz another one u’ll never attain!! ^^ blah...decent closer Breakdown Flow: TIE Rhyming: TIE Disses: KING Metas/SImilies: NONE Vocab: TIE Punches: KING, but Anx. had some good ones Funniness: KING def. Hardness: KING Vote: KING |
aight n-sight voted
so i think enygma shud be allowed to vote honest but no one else from ure crew and i'll let the admins know that this one vote is allowed |
ok
anxiety- u had gud structure n gud flow...thats bout it
u had punches n personals but ya set-up and wordplay made them weak... u need more creativity n cum more complex..... 2 of ya lines didnt rhyme so work on that also....... kingsolo-u came harder than him wit punches n personals flow woz more complex but tite..... gud structure u beat this cat with beta wordplay n creativity in ya punches overall king came harder wit beta punches n creativity vote-king solo |
took more than 5 minutes... Say hello to a DQ my good friend... Dont cheat if ur gonna accept... Oh... and like NSight said, say writ, not wrote, makes it rhyme...
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I thought this was an OK battle.....
Anxiety's Verse King Solo? does that mean that youre the best and only? All im seein is a man who's depressed and lonely... Nice opener..... Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues... Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it... Nice personal, but could have been worded a little better.... this guy really thinks he's great, even gave himself a crown... challenges me... then for a while he doesnt make a sound... Another good personal.... we all know you were writing, you made it quite blatant... saying i pre-write... get an excuse thats not ancient... LOL.....he's got personals for days.... yep i did... i admit it... actually, i was doing homework... and you pre-write, why else would you make me go first... Good way to end it..... Anxiety came with a pretty good verse. His punches were hitting and almost all of his lines were personals. He did take the prewriting a little too far but I think it was due to the fact that he had to spit in five minutes. Flow was definately there and his punches were definately felt...... King Solo's Verse You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety This only because ure the President of the pre-written society Nice personal....but the punch was hardly felt He thinks that he’s a vet with that Open Mic award on his shelf Talkin about newbs tryin to be vets, dude u talking bout ureself I think you are trying to get too personal and your punches are suffering from it Knowin that ure gonna lose this battle anxiety is wat u suffering Regretting the acception cuz u battling the fuckin tougher king No punch there....just filler Just sayin u can beat me is crazy, u been sniffing too much glue Moaning about wack crews u just sad cuz no crew wants you Fake personals are wack.....he's in Crhyme Sindicate He only bitchin cuz he knows he ain’t getting nominated again The RB Awardz cud go for years cuz another one u’ll never attain!! Didn't really rhyme or make too much sense.... King Solo's verse was OK too. His punches didn't hit as hard as Anxiety's did but they were there. He had personals but they were kinda gay but the verse flowed well from beginning to end...... Vote - Anxiety |
breakdown:
anxiety: King Solo? does that mean that youre the best and only? All im seein is a man who's depressed and lonely... ^^nice punch and wordplay good opener 7/10 Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues... Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it... ^^1st line str8 2nd is weak 4/10 this guy really thinks he's great, even gave himself a crown... challenges me... then for a while he doesnt make a sound... ^^good punch consistent flow 7/10 we all know you were writing, you made it quite blatant... saying i pre-write... get an excuse thats not ancient... ^^it was nice but i jus wasnt feelin it 6/10 yep i did... i admit it... actually, i was doing homework... and you pre-write, why else would you make me go first... ^^strong finisher but not too hott 6/10 overall: 30/50 (60%) king solo: You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety This only because ure the President of the pre-written society ^^nice flow strong punch good opener 7/10 He thinks that he’s a vet with that Open Mic award on his shelf Talkin about newbs tryin to be vets, dude u talking bout ureself ^^hottest bar in battle good personal 9/10 Knowin that ure gonna lose this battle anxiety is wat u suffering Regretting the acception cuz u battling the fuckin tougher king ^^nice bar good punch 7/10 Just sayin u can beat me is crazy, u been sniffing too much glue Moaning about wack crews u just sad cuz no crew wants you ^^another good personal nice shyt 8/10 He only bitchin cuz he knows he ain’t getting nominated again The RB Awardz cud go for years cuz another one u’ll never attain!! ^^weak finisher wasnt feelin it 3/10 overall: 34/50 (68%) vote: king solo i think the 2 personals king solo used clenched this battle for him...anxiety you didnt really use any personals you just rhymed off his name you had a hott verse but not hott enough to win....king solo you had some good shyt but work on ya closers ~!1!~ |
anxienty is that how you win dqin people come on now..u egt no respect that way..jus cause u was gon lose dont mean u gotta dq him
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Get Uppin The Votes On This Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Favour Will Be Returned!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
ansity- need some work on stucher i need some work on my spellin ok man you need to up this shit man to long to wanna sit through and read no enough punches ethir the personals sux man
king- links in the rap just take away from the rap it self you need to be more consisten it was hard to check what you ment then find the flow again but the personals were goog v/king retuen the favor the links in the sig |
Hmmm wow i thought u were Good An.....King dominated Every catagory in my View wasnt much of a challenge..
Punches-KS Personals-KS Flow-KS Structure-KS Overall-KS Ks=6.5343/10 An=5.434/10 |
ok
anxiety Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues... Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it... i didnt like the way that flowed it didnt seem good to me your punches didnt hit that hard and your flow was not good you also lacked personals not good you spit pretty hott overall on this verse i give you a *7* below average for you ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- king solo good punches hit hard good personals and you backed your punches up with links that prove there facts your bestline:You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety This only because ure the President of the pre-written society ^ u started out hard and it was good your whole verse was made better because of this overall *8* my vote: king solo |
8 mintues or 5 mintues. The difference is he took almost twice the time.
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limit was 5 minutes. You took 8. Why would you still want more time? |
god man
stop cryin cuz ure losin man how r u respected when all u do is bitch and moan if ure getting beaten |
^^^..good point..
I could see if it was unfair...but all those votes are explained...he's crying because you took 8 minutes instaed of 5..pssf..that's asanine Driving 55 MPH or 57 MPH...no difference This was a good battle tho |
Aight this is how i broke it down
Multis-tie punches-King personals-Anx flow-tie creativity-King overall-King V/King Solo Kinda tight battle both had good structure and wordplay but King got it in my eyes |
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