Boaty vs cityboi
 

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Get it crackin

Aight homie, you up...................................

we can do dis when i get home at4 cuz right now i am in my summa class so holla back

Aight, if you do it tonight then im not gonna be able to spit til tomorrow cause I gotta go to my cuz's graduation in Jacksonville

well 4get it i ain't worried bout my teacher we can get it on and poppin

i had jus finished my ryhme and it deleted so i will do it again in a sec
my bad yo

Yo wanna rap on sum sideways shit have you spittin thru da wire on sum kanye shit.
U tryin 2 see me in dis battle u bout to get dismantled bitch ass boi u jus got handled
Battlin iz not gonna be hard i'm gonna tear you apart than rip out ya heart
See me in da streets boi u betta catch ya feet cuz u in too deep tryin 2 get it wit me
I wonder how u would act if i run in ya crib and split ya wig than burried u wit ya kid
All da ryhmes i spit iz fire 500 degrees and higher melt ya skully and make u retire.
Dis guy iz crazy u fuckin wit a grown man cut u up and leave u bloody in a garbage can
I guess u didn't know I wuz da heart of da street,boi to me u jus anotha piece of meat
B4 i end dis battle i'm gonna let u know shits real and it'z time 2 kill
Be honest kid u knew u couldn't win ya odds of winnin are like Pamela Anderson bein a virgin again.

Aight, I got you

Listen up bitch cause Ill look back on this and say "I wrecked em"
Ill have your girl playing soccer cause she'll want me to bend her over like Beckham
Read a book bitch cause this battle is like "of Men and Mice"
Ill even give you a rematch just to prove that lightnin can strike the same place twice
This rap shit aint workin for you, give it up while you can
My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan
Bitch youre flow is played out, battlin yous a waste
Ill knock your ass out like Tyson and leave your mouth without taste
Im sorry you underestimated me, Ive got more than you thought
You should start bitin off my battles cause thatd be the only thing thatd make your shit hot

Uppin............................................. ....

cityboi iaint like da structure of ya verse but ya lyrics was hot but it was funny how u said u in summer school then said "Dis guy iz crazy u fuckin wit a grown man" u aint have a lot of punches but it was good

boaty
ya flow was good and so was ya verse u had a lot of punches 2, ya best line was "My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan" that was aight

niether 1 of u had any personals but my
v/boaty

yo dis battle was off da meter and both MC's get mad respect but i felt dat city came hard wit his but no doubt boaty did his thing 2 but my vote goes 2 city

v/city

cityboi- i didnt really like your structure u had some punches in there no personals punches were hittin aight flow was aight

boaty -ya flow was good and so was ya verse u had a lot of punches no personals but your punches hit harder and you had betta structure

best line was "My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan" that one was pretty

basicall with harder hittin punches v/ boaty

HoLY shit boaty rippd this mutha yo this wasnt even a battLe


Listen up bitch cause Ill look back on this and say "I wrecked em"
Ill have your girl playing soccer cause she'll want me to bend her over like Beckham
Read a book bitch cause this battle is like "of Men and Mice"
Ill even give you a rematch just to prove that lightnin can strike the same place twice
This rap shit aint workin for you, give it up while you can
My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan

-just nasty

Yo Citys verse wasn't all that bad it had ight punches(lil weaker) but established a sense of flow. Ya Should Throw In Some Multis And Strengthen ya punches 'n' personals

Boaty Ya Verse Had Harder Hittin Punches and personals, Which Ya Held Down Pretty Good, Ya flow was wstablished as well, and seemed to have the better verse, good battle overall

vote boaty

cityboi- i didnt really like your structure u had some punches in there no personals punches were hittin aight flow was aight

boaty -ya flow was good and so was ya verse u had a lot of punches no personals but your punches hit harder and you had betta structure

best line was "My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan" that one was pretty

basicall with harder hittin punches v/ boaty


yo return the favor links in in the sig hit them all up

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Boaty got this quite easily City u really need to work on your structure coz i had to read ur verse twice to get the rhyme scheme it needs to elevate also you had no wordplay except for the Pam line which wasnt all that good. Try improving your wordplay and punches the personals are there but could do with improving to better luck next time dawg but boaty got this due to the experience.

V/Boaty

Boaty had better punches, structure and personals.Boaty won this obviously, here's why:



this guy didn't spit nothin close to as hott as these two lines where. i don't know alot of niggas who watch soccer. i can say im black ass hell and i still watch soccer. Beckham is a beast.hot shit boaty. keep it movin lil nigga. nice win, return the fava.

vote=Boaty