MC lj VS Kre-z
 

Aight, you go first.
Usual rules

so u decided cum an 2 battle me,who u fink u iz Kre-z , u suck at rappin bucha fink ya good, fuck ur shit dont no y ya sud, u fuckin up allready just by battlin me, go back to mummy an huddle up on her nee, o wait sorry shes out on da streets doin her rounds,runnin from da police legs apart not bound,im guna fuckin kill ya in dis battle u see, den its not just ur mummy runnin ull be legin it away from me, ill kick ya ass make ya look like rite lass, scared of people who walk past, in case its me ull shit ya self, ya see ma lyrics flow unlike urs, im outa ere dont 4 get ur go!!!!!

inabit.x.x.x.x.

My shit dips like chronic
It leaves ya dazed
I spit fire mutherfucker
Bitch it leaves you blazed
Insane bitch I beat you wit ma first two bars
THe MC in ya name stand 4 ya mamas car
Theres nowhere to run yo you ain't got a haven
'Cause this was prophesised in revalations

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Newb get a crew then change ya name
naw afta this battle change ya mutherfuckin game
Change ya aspirations cause ya losin
Any good at makin beats
good then stick to producin

Send me three Pms saying ya don't know what to do
I'm ya teacher, Its time 4 me to fuckin school you
First thing to do is actually to WRITE A RHYME
Naw you ain't a noob, you ain't got no spine

What is this incorrect shit
Bottom group for english, I'm correct right
Fink, naw I think you think ya tight
Ayo listen to ya rhymes they shit aight

Unable to read ya shit
Put ya fuckin strap-on back you dike
Ayo L I got a question
You ever been smacked wit a mic

Just by writing that weak shit you already lost
How you gon win when you sound like eddy grammar from New York
It ain;t time for these weak ass lines
Cause my shit is tite
I'm like an eclipse all you gon see is nite

this was an insanely whack battle...
mc lj...so u decided cum an 2 battle me,who u fink u iz Kre-z , u suck at rappin bucha fink ya good, fuck ur shit dont no y ya sud, u fuckin up allready just by battlin me, go back to mummy an huddle up on her nee, o wait sorry shes out on da streets doin her rounds,runnin from da police legs apart not bound,im guna fuckin kill ya in dis battle u see, den its not just ur mummy runnin ull be legin it away from me, ill kick ya ass make ya look like rite lass, scared of people who walk past, in case its me ull shit ya self, ya see ma lyrics flow unlike urs, im outa ere dont 4 get ur go!!!!!

there was no punches whatsoever in this non rhyming piece of shit

The only personal was....go back to mummy an huddle up on her nee, o wait sorry shes out on da streets doin her rounds,runnin from da police legs apart not bound,

no flow whatsoever...
Overall I give you a 3/10

Krez...ya shit was not much better but at least you had structure and basic shit

Punches-My shit dips like chronic
It leaves ya dazed
I spit fire mutherfucker
Bitch it leaves you blazed

Flow...was aiigh
Overall I give you a 4/10 and my vote

need honest votes on my battle vs Plustwo...yall better since I judge yall shit

oi mcin dont av 2 rhyme
dey goda fit 2 geda so dey combine
dey goda go wit da beat an bring up da heatso dat every person is off there seat
movin on da floor jamin with der feet.

fuckin call ma rhymes u fucked up man ho
y beta fuckin stay so fuckin low
so low datt ya nose is touchin da floor
wat u fink u own me fuck u ill smack your face against a door
break ya face i wont be grace
i wudent take it as a race
nice an slow id torcher u
lyriclay be abusin u
her u cry ou in pain
da more pleasure i gain
da more ya cry the more i blast ya brain
den it guna start to rain
rain ya blood god u be in so much pain
ill kick ya ass an frash ya fast
u wont no wat hit u but u no it will b your last.

den ya mama screams o fuck u killed ma baby
so i tell her dat u went fuckin ass wipe crazy
tryin 2 rap but gettin no wer
i fink its time dat i declair
u do that shit all 4 a dare
coz ur lyrics well dey so so shit an bare.x.x.x.x.

^^wow...I thought you couldnt be any sorrier, yet you prove me wrong...tell you what...lemme go smoke real quick..when I come back...maybe it will be somewhat decent...lol



Gone on smoke break

o yea Black Thief like u cud do any beta y dont ya go bak to wer ya belong still suckin ya mums tit,
an wers Kre-z gon wat he smokin his dads leangth or summat

anyway dis girls outa ere 4 now.x.x.x.x.

99 problems but a bitch aint one^^....hit me!

wat so ya cant fink ov ya own lyrick so ya goda copy sum 1 elses at least im original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**yawns**
**sprays some BitchBeGone! around him**

omg u guna try an play lets rit bullshit den at least get it rite!!!!!!!!!!.x.x.x.x. :gfy:

Anybody else voting???????????????????????????????????????

Krez had betta structure, punches and personals,
mc lj your verse was pretty weak, no punches really and 1 personal definatly not good enuff to win so my vote goes to....

Krez

Aybody else voting????????????????????????????????

uppin for votes...........................................

um idont how to explain this one both ofo you need to elevated some thing bad um but i got to give this one to krez just cuz he had better punches and you posted not one but to wack ass verses so grow up and get better

v/ kre

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Ok lets see I believe that kra-z came in with some good rhymes. and man o man their where no good punches but with his rhyming so well I give him my vote. voe kra-z

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One more vote and I can get this shit closed come on don't sleep on this shit people!!

I need one more vote to get this shit closed, people vote!!!!!!!!!!

Aight MC lj, why would u even bother wasting our valuable time if ur gonna drop something thats SO painfully weak? Don't rap anymore, it aint for u.

Kre-z, some of that shit was nice, but its clear ur on a learning curve, u will improve, lj will not hence my vote goes to you.

lj, no no no.

Yo furious you didn't vote. People I need one more vote to get this closed, come on people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

Kre-z that was dope...keep up da good work boi...make sure ya vote on ma battles too aight?? look out for mC RIOT