Illmaticstatic Vs. GreenMartian
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U can say what chu want but neva seen the green deamon,
Laughin loud filled ur girls mouth with green's dirty seman, Eyes red constantly cause i cant stop the smokin, My style raw potent im not suprised ur choking, how u write succesfull lirycs when peps cry when u joking, pokin in cocain quick like shogun spread blood flash of ma katana workin, Farming goods shine u off with a thousend carrots, drop pursuing internet pirecy on shoulder wearing fake parots, Spark a blunt an insent elevate the concetration, How u gona spit u havin trouble keping a conversation, Dirt shake u off ma rotation, 5 plantations im fuckin rich thats why i made the sperm donation, congratulation cutin ur corps up worst than ma first patient, Why u call this freestyle sound like ur verses pre-writen, I left the battle when i was finished felt like ma ass was bitten, Legendery, how can bitches call me cow when i don't eat dairy, goin out vilont make ur rear look more purple than bluebarry, life ordinary mind further than my home galaxy, Close ur wounds bledding all on tha floor hee is a pad from maxi, |
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i only bothered to read half ya verse cause u only got half ass skill ill cut ya tounge in half but then ill be holding all of your skill You actually posted about to be toasted and im surprised your still standing And you boasted that you’re a martian but your punches aren’t landing i 'm rippin this tame-hoe, flippin his gay-flows, dealin defeat like I was cutting off his toes its just how the game-goes martian bitch couldn't match me if we was wearing the same-clothes truthfully ya verse-is-fake not original just like everyone else here you impersonate im goin from worse-to-great. but to ever even step to me was your first-mistake call u cow? I hop-on-the-saddle ride away sayin fuck-the-beef like stickin my cock-in-the-cattle and by puttin your lyrics 1st.the only way you could've ever been on top-of-this-battle ya judgement is done decisions-deminished.green martian-is-finished da only tyme u gone see a -w- is when ya vision-is-mimicked |
i stayed within the line limit barz a lil stretched but multies make up for it
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illmatic got this bc his structure was better and plus martian used the same stuff in two different battles... that not right vote goes to ill
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To me i think green martian had this, cause his verse was more intresting. To me illmaticstatic's opening bar wasn't that good(Skills twice)!!!
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Ok; heres what i Thought:
I just was not following that rhyme Martian, I couldn't get the flow, might have been me, but I didnt follow. The punches were good, a little weak but good, Whats with the farming theme anyway, that doesn't go down well anway. I really liked the verse, Illmatic' 'i 'm rippin this tame-hoe, flippin his gay-flows, dealin defeat like I was cutting off his toes its just how the game-goes martian bitch couldn't match me if we was wearing the same-clothes' That just won it for me, great verse, vote IllmaticStatic |
Wow thsi was one sided. I wish I could vote on this. Sorry Illmatic but theres that thing ya knwo so I can't vote on this.
But Green Martian are you from Alabama or sum shit like that? Whack assed lyrics n shit.... |
yeah you can vote unless u are now in ill intentionz
anyway uppin for votes oh you taling bout lyrikal assasins yeah i get you we are old crew members so i guess you cant vote any ways UPPING FOR VOTES i will return the favor |
This Is A KO, One Sided!Martian Ya Verse Was Kinda Weak Man, Felt Ya Were Lost In This One, No Established Flow and kINDA weak punches, Illmatic...... Ya Verse all in all was pretty good, decent puncjes with established flow, that right there takes it, I Believe This Is A Ko
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Open-Green Martian ur verse jus fadded after diz, ill didnt like it
Closer-Green horrible closer u should be shot for dat shit, nm, well Ill took diz one Flow-Green urs got choppy but ill had some nice flow Orlignality and Complexity-i would go about even on diz Overall ILL jus came, green u like brought it in the begiinnign and forgot da rest Vote ILLmaticstatic |
This Is A KO, One Sided!Martian Ya Verse Was Kinda Weak Man, Felt Ya Were Lost In This One, No Established Flow and kINDA weak punches, Illmatic...... Ya Verse all in all was pretty good, decent puncjes with established flow, that right there takes it, I Believe This Is A Ko
yo dont forget to return the favor links are in the sig hit them up and all of them Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Copied someone elses feedback |
aight uppin for votes lets get this battle over with
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Opener - Green [he had this one]
Flow - Green [shit was ok] Complex - Draw Punches - Draw Closer - Green Overall Vote - Green Martian Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Aight, lets get this battle over wid...
Opener - Neither were very good, but i'd have to go wid Green. Punches - Illmatic takes this one easily, they were much harder. Multis - Illmatic.... does Green even have any? Which brings me to another point, i had trouble following green's verse, doesn't make much sense.. Flow - Illmatic, like I said before, trouble with Green's verse. Originality - Both were about the same. Complexity - Illmatic takes this, with his multis and flows, Vote=Illmaticstatic Keep elevating peeps! |
Aww, shit it won't let me vote i don't have enough posts...
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please poll vote put this guy away he had no chance |
UPPIN for the last vote lets put this guy away..........
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U can say what chu want but neva seen the green deamon,
Laughin loud filled ur girls mouth with green's dirty seman, ^^ that does not seem like a battle verse dawg...it's like ur just flowin...its a good flow...but the punch doesn't hurt him..DISS dawg..DISS Legendery, how can bitches call me cow when i don't eat dairy, goin out vilont make ur rear look more purple than bluebarry, life ordinary mind further than my home galaxy, Close ur wounds bledding all on tha floor hee is a pad from maxi, ^^ Structure is too stretched...shorten lines...u had basically no punches...this was a song i only bothered to read half ya verse cause u only got half ass skill ill cut ya tounge in half but then ill be holding all of your skill ^^ That pretty much wins it...it's at least a PUNCH thrown and landed Vote: Ill...actually dropped a battle verse 1 |
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