MaRVOLOUSJ1009 VS Fourmost..*VOTE*
 

aight umm 10-12 lines...nothin more....ya verse is due 30 minutes after u check in nun of dat u spit first shit....so come check in dunny

Ight Checkin In But I Ain't Spittin First Either So You Better Follow The Deadline

dogg u not understandin after u check in u got 30 minutes da drop and da same with me so since u checked in u gota spit or u get dq'ed

Yeah Im Gonna Post But You Made The Call So You Droppin In 30 Min Too!

Ight I Dropped First Cuz This Cat Scared To Drop First And Get Merked But It Aint Gonna Matter, You Better Drop Within The Next 10 Mins, Cuz Ya Had Over 30 Mins Alredy

stretched my bars a bit so i never spit the full amount

Sparkin Beef Wit Provokin Verbs/ Ya Barkin Without Teeth 'n' Can't Understand Those Spoken Words/1
Left Beggin On Tha Street Chokin On Bum's Nerds//Gaggin On Mans Meat Like You Smokin Tha Herbs//2

/Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4

/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like ya Jew Waitin For Ya Fatality/5
//Ya Diss Full Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Fiya//Bring Back To Reality As I Make Ya Clique Retire//6

I Will Lyrically Injure Marv 'n' Make Ya Look Like A Starved Draqueen Named Ginger/7
Showcase You On Jerry Spinger Unda Tha Title My Asshole Is Where He Stuck His Finger/8


Explanations:
line 4- in britian cigarrettes are called fags/Cape Passero A Spanish Ship The Was Destoried In Battle
line 5- no discrimination towards jewish people

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-

im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)

rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar"-

its nothin talk badd dunn u'll be recievin dem shot & die be4 u flee 2 da cops- when i post somthin whut u readin is hott,jay if u dont believe dat he's hott-dogg i'll put da "pump in ya mouth" like i was waitin 4 ya "wezzin da stop"-you come da queens? dogg datz like "lil kim spendin a weekend with pac"-

Ight Bring On Tha Votes, And Explains Like This
Multis-
Flow-
Punches-
Personals-
Creativity-
wordplay-
overall-

uppin....can ya niggaz pleez vote and stop sleepin...

Multis- marv
Flow- both
Punches- both
Personals- four
Creativity- marv
wordplay- four
overall- TiE...but i would go wit..fourmost..

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Both brought a decent amount of variety to hold there own, but marvolous took it jus the way he wanted to leave with a win, so he is with my vote a lot more fluent n what he was gettin across, keep it real peace..

Vote: MARVOLoUsJ1009

wow how was this even a battle


marv killed him the first 6 lines shut shit down my nikka killed it whit that shit

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-

im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)

rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar

lmaooo real sick an seriuos

lmaoooo thank u dunn sik just madd cuzz we aint lettin him in da crew but its nothin

aight here we go

Multis-both..but better wuns from marv
Flow-four
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-marv
wordplay-both
overall-marvolous took this ..but good battle

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Multis- even
Flow-even
Punches-mar
Personals-mar
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-four

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Multis-both
Flow-four
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-marv
wordplay-both
my vote-marv

Fourmost

Sparkin Beef Wit Provokin Verbs/ Ya Barkin Without Teeth 'n' Can't Understand Those Spoken Words/1
Decent 6/10

Left Beggin On Tha Street Chokin On Bum's Nerds//Gaggin On Mans Meat Like You Smokin Tha Herbs//2
Ok But Strechted 5/10

/Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
NO!!!^^^ NO!!!! 2/10

//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4
Ok Decent 6/10


/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like ya Jew Waitin For Ya Fatality/5
NICE!!! 8/10

//Ya Diss Full Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Fiya//Bring Back To Reality As I Make Ya Clique Retire//6
5/10

I Will Lyrically Injure Marv 'n' Make Ya Look Like A Starved Draqueen Named Ginger/7
NO 3/10

/
Showcase You On Jerry Spinger Unda Tha Title My Asshole Is Where He Stuck His
Finger/8
Good Finisher 6/10


Break DOwn

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
66/120.


MaRvoLousJ

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-
Nice !! 8/10


im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)
okk 5/10


rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar"-
OO SHIT thas hott 8/10


its nothin talk badd dunn u'll be recievin dem shot & die be4 u flee 2 da cops- when i post somthin whut u readin is hott,jay if u dont believe dat he's hott-dogg i'll put
da "pump in ya mouth" like i was waitin 4 ya "wezzin da stop"-you come da queens? dogg datz like "lil kim spendin a weekend with pac"-
decent 5/10


Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 7/10
50/80



Four Most Comes away wit my Vote

V/FourMost

lol how the fuck

50/80 is a way higher percent then 66/120

lmfao damn marv now i see how u lose

Uppin, Wut eva my punches were just as hard or harder than his, and i had more multi-s, but i hear wut ya sayin wit the 50/80 and 66/120 shit, but i think dudes ratings are off a little anyway

Multis-tie
structure-marv
Flow-marv
Punches-marv
Personals-marv
Creativity-tie
wordplay-four
opener-marv
closer-marv

v/marv becuase his verse had the better punches and personals and that is obviously what gets you the win

cityboi.......your a fucking retard.......you said marv took the punches and personals and you gave four the win because he had the creativity and wordplya.....you fucking stupid mand.,.....only way he would have wun that way is if everything else was tied.,......you shouldnt even be alllowed to vote


but anyways hit this up wit an honest vote
my first ever battle

Multis-tie
Flow-marv
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-four

v/Fourmost

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Multis-marv
Flow-fourmost
Punches-marv
Personals-fourmost
Creativity-fourmost
wordplay-marv
overall-ima give it to four but not by that much

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Multis- tie
Flow- tie
Punches- marv
Personals- none
Creativity- four
metas- four
overall- fourmost

overall this battle was pretty dope, my fav lines from each:

fourmost-
Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero

dope vocab n concept

marv-
im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-

nice wordplay there

Multis-four
Flow-marv...four Had Some Stretched Bars In His Shyt That Fucked It Up
Punches-marv....first Three Bars Were Killa...fours Were Good To Though But Damn..them First Three, Whoo
Personals-aint Catch None
Creativity-four Got This...i Aint Know Wut All That Cape Perro Shyt Was About...but U Explained It And U Killed Marv In That Category
Wordplay-four...marvs Punches Were Hot..but The Word Play Was Kind Of Off
Overall-marv Won This Cuz The Important Shyt In Battles Are Punches, And Marv Jus Came Wit It

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125426
CAN YALL RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP VOTES ON THIS

Multis-marv
Flow-fourmost
Punches-marv
Personals-fourmost
Creativity-fourmost
wordplay-marv
overall-ima give it to four but not by that much

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return the favor links are in the sig hi them all up

Yo I Thought Marv Spit A Decent Verse Not His Best But It Was Aight Needed More Punches In It I Thought Im Not Gonna Say Format This And That Cuz Dudes Been Here Long Enuff They Know How They Want There Shit

But I Thought Four Was Lil More Onpoint With Delivery And Wordplay Just Had Em This Time I Thought But Close Enuff To Assume That Marv Could Win The Next Battle Between Em....

lmaoooooooooooooo awww man dis gon be my last battle on da frontlines u niggaz cant vote 4 shit

Wtf...muhfuckas Cant Return Fuckin Favors...i Voted Right Didnt I...can U Go Vote On My Shyt

marv
Multis-6/10
Flow-6/10
Punches-7/10
Personals-6/10
Creativity-6/10
wordplay-7/10
overall-38/60-I think you7 needed to actuallu work on it i know u thought and probably will win this battle...but...even if u know u gonna iwn wihich u might not or will need to actually attemtp to rhyme it...Nice tho

Four
Multis-5/10
Flow-6/10
Punches-6/10
Personals-6/10
Creativity-7/10
wordplay-6/10
overall-36/60-I think you did pretty good for going againist someone wit marvoulousj skillz..u might need ot elevate a little..maybe go againisnt someone on ur level ur rhyming level is right under mj tho...nice flow

Vote-mj

ight dis iz wut i believe...

flow: fourmost
Punch: fourmost
multi: same
vocab: fourmost

Marv:
Marv...I know u could do hella betta...but for somereason u didn't???did u go easy on dis person????well your shyt also didn't flow well..ur punches weren't ass good...N ur vocab was pretty weak....well you win some n u loose some..

fourmost:
Ight...ur shyt waz pretty good...i've never seen u on dis site before..but forealz..ur pretty good....u had nice vocab..nice punch...and ur shyt flow good...umm....your punch was like way better den marvs....im also pretty surprised dat you went up against marv...cuz marv is probably known az a vet...you could jst say you got lucky in dis one cuz i don't think marv tried...

vote: four most