Da Jokah Vs Bowelle
 

rules:
5 to 20 lines
no d/r...hate or crew votez
no bite / recyclin
u spit first
due 30 mins afta chekin aight
be easy wun...

checkin in ..holla back wun..be ez

check in home boi and drop be ez..

........................................bowelle checken in ..................

these ryhmes are gut punches in a roy jones fight/
I got the crowd entertain like brayn mcnight/
Like Jahov and J-lo Im topin the chart/
you mouth may be poppin but all u poppin is tart/
I have the power to give our take life at the tilt of my finger/
U got power with your toung " dingle berry ringer/(got that term from a redneck)
I don't just fuck sluts like semore butts/
but I leave girls sweaken like a truck with no struts/
Im a ferrari u a honda but a car is a car/
diff between us is a like a rook and star/
If u think my ryhmes aren't the illist then test it/
I got two glock and making a mutual investment/

....................uppin for da jokah....................................

first off ya rhymes are as shitty as "Bowelle* movement//
man talk bout fingas..he got dem fat wuns he got a duece bent//
aight dis will be a easy win like ummm lemme see..5-0//
yall getitn record deals but they from dem jive hoes//
and ppl want u to stop..just like dem fifty hitz//
Iam "HOT" like wun of dem fuckin missy hitz//
but she aint good her self either...like u//
like dis battle and ya bitch u cant pleaze her..quiet tru//
i stay livin wit da red bandanna in ma pockit//
and stay holdin da glock..pulled out ready to cock it//
throwin shit at chu well yellin so i cant here u say "STOP IT"//
u gettin ya shit from rednecks and a fat hill billy//
erace ya name like umm who was it..oh yeah milly vanilly//
dont remeber who dat was..like dem niggas wit chu//
go tell ya moms that i threw punches and a nigag hit chu//
u thinkin tha ur shit hot and gettin bigga like steriods//
hitin this nigga from err were ..got dis nigga peranoid//
i open up shots..like dem doctors open up wounds//
have u all wrapped up in ya own shit like ca-coons//
ill give u back ya garbage and u can eat it like ra-coons//
cant get fat beats so u end up playin dem spoons//
i *semore Butts*.. in ma crib then dem but doctorz//
hey hey hey...stop talkin.. get da glock out and cock yurs//
1...2....3...4...5...DRAW..BOOM oh shit i killed anotha wun//
i done u a favour and i went easy on anotha wun//
just for u aint i fuckin nice...shit dont lie..u kno iam nice//
finished da battle easy..ur lucky u didnt pay tha price...//

wun be ez

uppin fo votes on diz muh fuckah aight wun be easy

umm dis battle was wun sided jokah killed dis nigga

opener-jok
structure-a tie
punchlines-jok
creativity-jok
multis-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-jok.......he merk u bow real ez ya verse was 2 basic

my vote-jok..

RETURN DA FAVOR DA LINK IS MY SIG

opener-jok
structure-tie
punchlines-jok
creativity-jok
multis-none
personals-Jok
enjoyed-jok

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=126008&page=1


hit that shit up an ill vote cause mothafuckas dont be returnin no votes like they say

da jokah took diz one

Punches Flow Complexity he had all dat good shit

Vote Da Jokah

Bowelle, yo dawg u got betta since last battle Fa Real


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ok break down

bowelle lol ummm lmfaooooooo man brah shit was awful ya verse was basic it was an open mic piece more then a battle verse u just talked about ya selfd as much as u did him shit was weak man elevate on ya punchs an try an learn how to use personals just go peep soem shit in tutorials and that shit help u elevate


jokah um your shit was more complex then his that opener set up line lol was better then his whole verse more wordplay and creativitie but still lacked consitentcy in ya verse work on ya punchs an stay bringin hard punchs in ya verse and not fall off sometimes nice spit though

vote jokah

a yo from ma opinion jokah ripped dat nigga but i cant vote cuz we in da same crewso i'll holla atcha niggaz lata much respek ~1~

joka ripped him cant vote though from the same crew

Flow - Tie, Both Yall Had Equal Flow's. Both Flowed Pretty Good.

Punches - Da Jokah Had More Punches, Bow Aint Really Have Any Worthwhile Ones.

Personals - Da Jokah, He Had More Creative Personals. Bow Aint Really Come Wit Any Heat In This Area.

Multis - N/A, Niether Kat Had Many.

Structure - Tie, Both Had Good Structure.

Creativity - Da Jokah, His Verse Was Pretty Original While Bow's Was Mad Basic And Lacked Any Kind Of Creativity.

Overall - Aight, I Felt Like Bow's Shit Was Too Simplistic And He Didn't Come Wit Enough Ammo For Da Jokah. Jokah's Shit Was Kinda Long And Drawn Out, But He Definitely Beat Bowelle Wit More Hard Hittin Lines.