Killah Bwoy Vs Black Thief
 

lets go 2nd round :)

10 lines
45 mins to spit after check in
no d/r cv or biting
good luck

aiight my bad...Im at work...had to do some shit...


Checkin
Round 2**ding Ding**

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence

Theres my 10 lines fam

** self destruction in reference to his crew Lyrical Destruction

lol oh no you dont want it like that patna lets go..uh

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-


No More Nigga..NO MORE

Upping!upping!votes Please!

and the line
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-

his av said all up in ya crib and he changed it :) muwahahah good luck playa

lol...who me?yeah uppin for votes...

Killah stop swaying.......................................

what the hell does that mean ^ LOL.....................

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
decent personal, not an amazing opener though.
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
this is decent but its not a great reference to his crew lyrical destruction, especially when theres a cat runnin around on these boards with the name self destruction
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
Decent wordplay, but ur structure is off now..
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
this was a good punch, i giggled
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
this closer was iight, decent wordplay, this verse was nothing spectacular nor the best I've seen you spit, but it was better than most the crap you read on here- props.

Killa
Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
weak opener, i wasn't really feelin it.
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
Didn't really feel this punch, however it was personal so that should be takin into consideration.
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
Not really feelin this punchline, but the first line was a good setup
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
This made me chuckle, good play on his name strong setup...i like it.
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-
I flowed this verse without sayin the word "Night" and it was a nice multi, and made the punch hit stronger for me... decent closer but nothing spectacular either...

Ima have to say this was a pretty close battle, I liked a couple of Blacks bars and I liked a Bar or Two of Killah's, I think in terms of personal references you tie, in form of punches you tie, in form of wordplay you tie, in form of structure I give it to Killah Bwoy, Flows pretty close too so Ima give to Killah by about three tenths of a percent.. good battle yall stay up.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125461

i'm feelin killa's shit. so my vote killa. but i cant vote. theres no poll. lata!

I thought this was a tight battle both peeps put in a decent verse props to ya 1st off.

Black Thief:
U had a good verse i thought i werent gonna feel it at first coz of the structure but i enjoyed readin it nice to flow wit and hard hittin punches decent opener and closer.

Killah Bwoy:
Again another good verse well retaliated decent punches personals ok structure and good wordplay used by ya decent opener and closer.

V/damn its hard coz it was a close battle but ima vote Black Thief nice battle though keep it up

i thought kiilla got thiz puches hit harder it waz an iight battle

word fuck i coulda had couple votes oh welll .......uppin

Upping this shit

Uppin this battle....dont sleep on it yall and leave links to yall battles

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!

^^ flow is pretty good as well as the rhyming...but, this is too simplistic in my opinion...your punches were not landing hard on Killa...it seems like you were just talking to him than battling him

son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
^^ not bad...but could be more complex in set-up with metas/wordplay

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-

^^ pretty hard here...but personals shoud be explained if voters wont' know what they mean


Vote: Killa...more complex/harder hitting verse


1

word...its cause if i explain peoples are gonna start complaining and bitching..and sayin how dumb it is too explain your shit lol

uppin............................................. ...........

THis was a pretty good battle... Killah Bwoy done it again... nice return to ya battling..

Heres the break down....

Black... You had a good spit..Nice Punches.. Flow, Multis.. and structure...Overall Imma give you an 8 outta 10...

Killah.. you had a good spit.. better punches and personals.. nice flow.. Overall imma give you a 9 outta 10...


OVERALL - Vote goin to Killah Bwoy here... good spit the both of you... hard to descide here...

Upppin this bitch for more votes...leave links to yall battles too.Uno

Opener: Killah
Punches: Killah
Structure: Killah
Flow: Draw
Personals: Draw
Closer: Black
Overall Vote: Killah Bwoy

:S okkkkkkkk.........................UPPIN........... ...

Im gonna have to say killah bwoy one this 1 he came 30% much harder then black thief did :

Black Thief:you had ok structure.wordplay needto wordk on it:No Personal,or multies

Killah Bwoy:You just did good in all area of this battle

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
7...basic wordplay, but gud personal!!
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
8...strong personal there!!
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
5...dude NO!!! that was weak as fuck!!
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
6...aight personal i guess, not really strong!!
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
6...naw dawg, that was a weak closer!!


POINTS TOTALS

Black Thief - 32/50
Killah Bwoy - 36/50

V/ - Killah Bwoy

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
7...nice opener, gud wordplay!!
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
6...pretty funny i guess, but cud have been better!!
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
6...not that gud, ok wordplay i guess!!
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
8...lmao!! funnly line, i liked it!!
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-
9...nice closer!!! had me laughin and it was a gud personal!!

^^^well the points totals may be in the middle...don't know how they got there but u get who i voted for aight!!!

breakdown:

black thief:

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
^^good opener nice personal 7/10
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
^^another good personal 7/10
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
^^2/10 your weakest bar
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
^^first line was good 2nd was a lil gay decent personal 5/10
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
^^bad closer wasnt feelin it 4/10

overall: 25/50 (50%)

killah bwoy:

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
^^good personal and punch decent opener 7/10
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
^^str8 bar not too hott 6/10
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
^^lol funny line but not a good punch or personal 6/10
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
^^lol funny shyt here 8/10
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-
^^good closer..decent wordplay 8/10

overall: 35/50 (70%)

vote: killah bwoy his punches came hard in this battle and structure was better...black thief took it in personals but killah took this battle overall

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would appreciate a honest vote from someone on my battle wit t-strom in EFL

killabwoy took dis wit perfection he had more creativity in his verse 2 go along wit his flow and punches more than black black u had some descent shit but killa juss out done u usin creativity.......

killabwoy-

bestline-Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-

nice

worsteline-none

black

bestline-still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!

nice

worsteline-none

black-8/10
bwoy-9/10

killah winz