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SmArTzZ V$. Jae uh-oh
15 barz max
no dr votes no hate votes explain votes |
G'l
....ima demolish thiz lil fag and rip him to pieces,and leave him wit no hope while iz rap skillz decreases// believe it,i may be conceded,but beatin me u wont achieve it// u new to thiz my level u wont reach it//...but.... i'll torture u and dismantle ya body into sections,and add it to my collection// and spit heat making u burn till u my complexion,i came frm death thiz my ressurection// a chain saww massacre tragedy,i didnt kno a liitle bitch would wanna battle me,itz a catastophe// i trash emcees,and break ya neck if u laugh at me// read abidurys u'll se JAE UH_OH died of a death caused by smartzz fatality// ya poor soul,stop u dead in ya tracks while u aim 4 ya goal// and if i see u in the streets talkin ill aim 4 ya nose,cuz u juss sellin ur self out like hoes// and every one knows....ul/ neva be nuttin// so stop frontin,talk now but face to face u wont say nuttin// and i dun wanna hear no excuses,but the kid iz roofless// loose thiz battle?i refuse thiz,and if u became famous no1 would listin to ya music// so juss erase u off the list,and let u get lost in the mist,but 4 now ill juss end u off ur DISMISSED// |
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and thiz one...........................http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126714
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any time now......................................
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is da other cat gone spit or what, how long does he have
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the verses were due yesterday he knew da...he mite get d'qued
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iight hes d'qued i win shit man he not postin his verse so i win
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close thiz battle
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dq thiz kid hes neva gonna post his verse close thiz battle please
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my bad i been gone for a minute..smartzz you know the deal already...im postin right now..
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enough of da games,shots "rippin ya up when i aim"//
at ya chest cavity,wantin battle me?you not "livin up to ya name"//(not smart) im wantin the fame,you gay, you wantin "other fags"// you battled a few dudes,but besides me,all them others wack// ya raps is sorta trash,so when i see ya verse..i catch "two Z's" like the last few letters in ya tag//(smartZZ) listen i "hate-yall-niggas,that "hate-on-niggas", when you aint got no "CHANCE OF GETTIN SIGNED" like "RAY-CHARLES-PICTURES"// you broke,in a day i "make-four-figures"// thats what this nigga makes in a year// u saw the next level?im takin it there// put the "8th" to ya ear..n leave yall "disciples" all holy...you would swear that jesus was here!// too easy.... my bad for the delay i was stupid busy...... b easy |
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and big gaz vs plustwo |
iight finally uppin 4 votes
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iight lets go uppin four votes.....
be easy |
uppin 4 votes
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this battle was ill. both of u guys came hard with some ill punches and rhymes. ima give it to jae tho, he had more personals and humour involved in his verse so v/jae.
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dont forget to vote on the poll tho dogs................
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nice battle both yall..i gotta go wit jae uh-oh he had betta punches and nice flow..good battle smartzz
return da favor wit honest votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129293 |
Smartzz got this one...had harder punches, flow was aight, & the structure was ok...JaE....work on yo shitz man...keep elevatin...
v/ sMaRtZz |
my vote goes to J, better punch lines, and i foud humor in it, ya know? arite return the favor plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719 Peace. |
iight uppin .............2 more votes....first to 5.......i guess since it isnt a ko
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