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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 04:03 PM

DangerousMyndLunatic Vs. ATMOSPHERE *Femcee Battle Duke It Out* Votes Needed
 
5Lines Min
10Lines Max
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No D/R
No Hate
No Crew
No BullShit
No Unexplained
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ATMOS Is Dropping First
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Drop After She Is Checked In..!!!
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20Min To Check In??
After That
20Min To Drop..!!

HoPe 05-26-04 04:19 PM

checkity check check..

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 04:32 PM

You Have Less Then 10Min.. BabeGyal

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 04:49 PM

Time Is Killing You' You In Member Mugshots?? WTF lol!! C'Mon

HoPe 05-26-04 04:51 PM

I thought I had 40 minutes to spit??well here's my spit!!!

hahaha..im battlin this one bitch and looky it's you//
I know alotta more men that has more pussie then you//
Girl listen...
I'll give u 60 minutes to spit while I jst stay and wait here//
Cuz 20 min. of ur borin shyt literaly sounds like shakespear//
No wonder u did a no-show in a battle against valor and blacks shyt//
Cuz you know your rhymes sound like garbage and I'd might as well trash it//
Jst imagin you've sed ur spit to da croud but still nobodys clappin//
Thats how you gonna feel wen you loose so get ur wack rhymes and start packin//
If you ever become a bitch you won't get one dick, believe me//
Cuz no guy would want ta get near you afta they've seen me//


good luck

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 04:55 PM

Checckin In' ..!! *Lmfao* .. Nice Verse' ....

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 05:07 PM

You say you throw punches, but swing like a 'Girl',
Come out of your mind, you aint Queen of the World,
Lack class and substance when your flows Drop,
You should start a 'Hoe-Stop' and open your own Shop,
Hold the mic like a phat cock, no one hears what hear what ya Say'n,
While you gargle utter shit that you later Sprayin,
Like a manure spredder, you just toss out Shit,
Aint A line you said worth a responce Bitch,
But it's typical that a scary hoe still living in a 'Fairy-Tale',
Don't stress the head, Lossen up the 'Pony-Tail', (LoL)

Im Through, Take It As It Is, lol!!!!!

Its All Over With'
Now it rains, It pours, no more retor or your evicted from This,
Come back with something real and fuck the Plagerist,

HoPe 05-26-04 05:16 PM

lolz..aight..good shyt good shyt girl..come on ppl..uppin this shyt!!!

Triple_N 05-26-04 05:28 PM

Decent spits nothing great by both, Breakdown for Atmosphere

hahaha..im battlin this one bitch and looky it's you//
I know alotta more men that has more pussie then you//

Weak opener 4/10

Girl listen...
I'll give u 60 minutes to spit while I jst stay and wait here//
Cuz 20 min. of ur borin shyt literaly sounds like shakespear//

Weak punch but nice try 5/10

No wonder u did a no-show in a battle against valor and blacks shyt//
Cuz you know your rhymes sound like garbage and I'd might as well trash it//

Weak again 4/10

Jst imagin you've sed ur spit to da croud but still nobodys clappin//
Thats how you gonna feel wen you loose so get ur wack rhymes and start packin//

Weak!! 4/10

If you ever become a bitch you won't get one dick, believe me//
Cuz no guy would want ta get near you afta they've seen me//

Made no sense 2/10
Overall: 19/50

Breakdown for Dangerous a.k.a disasterpiece

You say you throw punches, but swing like a 'Girl',
Come out of your mind, you aint Queen of the World,

Decent opener 5/10

Lack class and substance when your flows Drop,
You should start a 'Hoe-Stop' and open your own Shop,

Weak punch 4/10

Hold the mic like a phat cock, no one hears what hear what ya Say'n,
While you gargle utter shit that you later Sprayin,

ok punch 6/10

Like a manure spredder, you just toss out Shit,
Aint A line you said worth a responce Bitch,

Filler 4/10

But it's typical that a scary hoe still living in a 'Fairy-Tale',
Don't stress the head, Lossen up the 'Pony-Tail', (LoL)

Ok punch 5/10

Im Through, Take It As It Is, lol!!!!!

Its All Over With'
Now it rains, It pours, no more retor or your evicted from This,
Come back with something real and fuck the Plagerist,

Decent closer 6/10
__________________

Overall: 30/60
All in all both of you came pretyy weak in this one dangerous jus came a little better sop she gets this battle in my opinion
Vote: Dangerousmind

PoLiFicK 05-26-04 05:39 PM

nice battle yall didnt do a cat fight likes dat lol nice drop both of u can be femcee of da month both came wit some oustanding shit and came wit stressing linez 2 get at em

DML-came like a real vet will come u kno try 2 make it look easy and u played yo cards good but atmosphere came at u like she wanted u but u had a nice drop nice punches nice personals and killa flow...

bestline-You say you throw punches, but swing like a 'Girl',
Come out of your mind, you aint Queen of the World,

i was really feelin dat strong start off nice 10/10

closeline-Now it rains, It pours, no more retor or your evicted from This,
Come back with something real and fuck the Plagerist,

nice shit like dat like dat 10/10 nicee

worsteline-none

atmosphere-u came at dis vet tite as shit liked yo drop personals was funny link was correct punches was hott and flow was consitant verse on pint

bestline-hahaha..im battlin this one bitch and looky it's you//
I know alotta more men that has more pussie then you//

lol nice start good laugh 10/10

closeline-If you ever become a bitch you won't get one dick, believe me//
Cuz no guy would want ta get near you afta they've seen me//

descentcy-10/10

worsteline-none heaa

DML

open-10/10
punches-8/10
flow-8/10
consitant verse-9/10
vocab-7/10
close-10/10
overall-8.3/10

atmosphere-

open-10/10
punches-8/10
flow-8/10
consitant verse-9/10
vocab-7/10
close-10/10
overall-8.3/10
same stats so tie but imma go 2 da most laughs

DML-9.4/10
atmosphere-9.5/10

winner-atmosphere

HoPe 05-26-04 06:09 PM

thanx ppl...uppin this plz

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-26-04 08:15 PM

Good Looking Out Triple_N !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Upppin 4 More Votes' Yall Quit Sleepin

young beezy 05-26-04 08:35 PM

this battle wasnt anything serious both da verses was aight but ATMOSPHERE was only talkin bout DangerousMyndLunatic not being a girl
DangerousMyndLunatic had better punches and structure atmosphere had a nice flow as well but i was feelin DangerousMyndLunatic verse better
v/dangerous

Midas 05-27-04 12:16 PM

Ova all, this was an aight battle. Yall both did yall's thang but only one can win (damn I feel like I'm on Elimidate!), so I gotta give this to Dangerous, Atmosphere your verse was straight, but DML killed you with her first verse. Yall should have a rematch mos def. Dangerous u betta watch out next time if there's another battle, Atmosphere's hungry and if you underestimate her u might get eaten. Stay up. One

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lyrical distruction 05-27-04 04:05 PM

danger had better punches and was more smoother rhyme consistant that the other player because she kind of made the punches hit hard by nice vocab and quite big blows from her filler wordplay and mettas. So im gonna give this vote for this reason.

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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-27-04 08:10 PM

Good Looking Out Ya'll... Thanks For The Votes' ..!!!


Upppppppin 4 Votes' .. C'Mon Ya'll Don't Sleep On This Shit' ..!!!!!

Lil Nae2 05-27-04 08:37 PM

dangerous had dis her punches was way betta den da otha chic her flow was betta to good battle

v/dangerous

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[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 05-28-04 04:56 PM

Uppppppppppin 4 Votes' .. Explain Your Votes..!!

C'Mon People...........!!

SPuLâ„¢ 05-30-04 01:38 AM

ok, this was a tight battle between two hot girls. lol
:cool:

DP aka Dangerous, aiight you had a nice verse. I liked yo ish. Good job. You had some nice punches in there and shit. You had some very hard hittin' ones there too. Your flow was decent, but I felt it went off in a few spots. But other than that it was a really good verse. keep droppin', yo.

Atmosphere, yea nice drop, girl. I was feelin' this ish. You had some hot punches in there. Most hit pretty hard in it. Your flow was awesome. I loved it. It was goin' throughout the whole verse. You had a nice opener and I liked your closer too. Good job.

This was a tight battle, but I think I have to give this to...

Atmosphere. Both did very good and have my respect. keep droppin' both of y'all. PEACE OUT

.::N-Sight::. 05-30-04 12:48 PM

hahaha..im battlin this one bitch and looky it's you//
I know alotta more men that has more pussie then you//
Girl listen...
I'll give u 60 minutes to spit while I jst stay and wait here//
Cuz 20 min. of ur borin shyt literaly sounds like shakespear//

^^ Good flow..up multi syllables....decent imagery...but the punches hit harder than Danger...

Danger...u were aiming ur disses right at ATM, but they lacked creativity and complexity, which (along with personals) wins battles..


Rhyme Atm
FLow Tie
Punches Atm


Vote: Atm

Sik Wit It 05-30-04 01:43 PM

Atm = 32/50
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

Dangerous = 31/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

Both did good...but Atm bearly had this one...good battle to both Femcee's....

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HoPe 05-30-04 03:39 PM

uppin this ppl

Killah Bwoy 05-30-04 04:59 PM

hmm i give this too...dml her shit was better and she had better vocab atm ur shit was good too but it was still on the 1st grade stuff but im feelin both of ur verses but like alwayz only one can win

dml:
flow:8/10
punches: 6/10
meta's 8/10
personals 9/10

atm:
flow 6/10
punches 7/10
metas 0/10
personals: 7/10

vote dml

HoPe 06-01-04 11:18 AM

uppin pplz....jst 2 more votes for each person....come on..stop sleepin plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BigTony.Self 06-01-04 11:41 AM

Atm
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 5/10


Dangerous
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10

YO i thought it was an interestin battle not much on the metaz but yall punched so for that i enjoyed
DML-seen betta from ya but overall a decent drop
would like to see more metaz from ya and creativity
ATM-thought u did well but i lost ya flow a bit
prolly just need to clip a few words out for more
fluency but overall it was close .......
Wouldn t mind seeing yall go back at it in a TOPICAL
overall DML took it good luck yall

Tha Untouchable 06-01-04 02:30 PM

lol

decent battle

atmosphere
ya flow waz good but ya blowz were weak. i could tell u ain't a fundamental femcee it sounded like u had blowz but i read and anaylze, but it waz decent.

dangerousmyndlunatic

better, i liked ya flow and had more blowz that landed. yourz waz equal 2 atmosphere (cauze both of u'z femalez). good though

opener-dangerous
structure-dangerous
blowz-dangerous
closer-dangerous

dangerous winz as u can see ^^^

good one atmosphere, don't need 2 work more


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