kamikaze killa vs. lyrical distruction
 

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no crew, dr, or hater votes

go ahead and spit first since i set it up ill b waitin to post my shit when ur done

ok checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ight iill post if its gonna take u forever

U no you’ll see me comin thru yo hood strapped wit my glock
Pull it out, roll down the window, and take out the whole block
I spit so hard I don’t need no mic check
When im shootin up your hood u betta hit the deck
U think you gangster but really u just crazy
Ill kick it in yo face and make yo eyes go lazy
If u get in my face u just crossed the line
But lyrical destruction u musta lost yo mind
Thinkin u can beat the great k ta da z
By the time u spit 1 verse Ill be on #3
I only take 5 minutes to drop a track
But it takes u 5 minutes to put on yo contacts
Nigga u cant see what im spittin
Im reppin white dice wit this shit that im rippin
U should be proud u stood up to kamikaze killa
But put it this way your fasier in the thrilla in manilla

yo kamikazi your extreamly lazy, strap your self with dynamite to creat a real kamakarzi/
your wackness RB playa, i'll melt you down wid my thermal rays/
you an't no comparison to me i'll lift you in da air like a baloon ride/
fuckin drop you in mid air, wid the baloon popped deflating/
i'll rip your brain out, picking at it with your muthas tea spoons/
im a writer-hate-fags-fighter, putting you in a kitchen ready for blending/
if i had a microphone id rap it sevral times till your neck shoots outta sockets/
chop you up, like spagetti, wrapped up in cleanfill, leaving you outside as a frezer in the cold/
your wacker than michel-jackson, gettin the same surgion as him to give you a face lift/
left your gums half open showing yellow teeth gleaming/
girls turn around to slap you for bein so damn ugly/
all you are pitty, you get mudered like the simpsons in itchy and scratchy/
this guy an't got no friends, when it comes across boyfriends that depends/
he's upset with his no win leage, like never gonna change, all ways gonna be dat way/
come to terms wid it, instead of livin it, before i drive my right foot up ur ass/
i'll lift the ground to fall you down from it, pick up a layer burry you beneath it/
Last verse, take a deep breath now relax, take it like a man, your destroyed/

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ight lets get sum fuckin votes on this holla back wit ur pick

kk- man you need to ver away from that gangsta shit that wont win you battles dun period man that was weak no punches at all man ok you need to work

Ld - had a lil bit more expirence bu tyou also need to work on punches they were harder than his i must admit thoug

v/LD


return the vote- links ar in my sig can you vote thanks

ight ight im down 1 but its still cool....uppin them votes!!!

uppin the votes on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i know im in kami'z crew... but big kountry are u crazy... kami completely dominated.... im not crew voting or anything..but seriously ld didnt even rhyme

ok ok well lyrical distruction you needa get you drop to rhyme somehow
or you will never win a battle, since your drop didn't rhyme that screwed
up your flow & it was a lil hard to read.......Kamikaze I wasn't feelin' your
drop much either but you came out on top because of your flow/punches
& your drop was much easier to read....

do a honest vote on my battle the links in my signature

uppin the votes ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lets get some votes on this ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote on this shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lets get some votes on this ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lets get some votes on this people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LD u need to get ur verses to rhyme and try to flow a bit better. peep the tutorial forum they got loads of good advice. ima vote KK cuz he rhymed and had better flow. in the future try to get more punchlines in there tho. peace.

ps please vote in my battles, they in my sig. thanks!

aight lyrical and kamikaze lyrical ur verse was better it had good personals but the punches were weak u should come harder in future battles but in this one it was okay to use weak punches. kamikaze u shouldnt talk abput shootin up hoods and all that nobody wants to hear that stuff anymore thats all fading.u didnt really have punches if u did they werent great and u need some work.

v/lyrical
drop a vote and pm me wen u do and after u do that ill poll my vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130756

they was both hot...but kamikaze, i wouldnt go wit him cause that '5 min to drop a track, and 5 min to put on yo contact' was too close to lil flip's ' 15 min to drop a track, half a min to load my gat'
-and i dont think u bit(kanikaze) but i hate bitin, and yo name is the same as twista's album...lol

oh yea...v/lyrical destruction......................

vote lyrical distruction for better punches but it was an iight battle

punches-ld
personals-ld
struture-kk
lyked most-ld
best verse-ld
winner-ld
pz out
plz return fav on battlez in sig