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Eclapt Vs. HELLonEARTH
Aiight newbie biatch heres da lowdown
no d/r hate crew or any of dat bullshit 10 lines No feedin (You want to feed got to MCDOnalds) 5 votes to win Check in And I'll spit by 24 hours later. After i Drop you got 24 hours to drop. Can't lay it down tonite goin to werk soon. THats it ~Third Degree~ |
y a ni99az need to hurr up n battle shyt ya take madd long lolz jp but battle already fa realz
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You need to stop free posting before I get strobe on this thread
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My Spitt
Aiight heres ma freestyle
Ridin "Mens Cocks" the only way you could be an "MC"// Like throwin beer cans, ya punches don't land cuz there empty// Call ya self "Al Gore", because you won't win this "Lyrical election"// Ya weak and ya ain't straight, like a Dysfunctional Erection// So Ya made ya first crew, Whos dick did you have to suck?// ya flows Like kids before "puberty", you don't know "fuck"// Ya lines are "Short", and they more than a "little bit"// Do you battle with cottonmouth? CUz u never spit shit// Mah Rhymes like "Car Crashes", I be givin you Whiplash// Pourin Bleach into da garbage cans, you just white trash// Aiight that took like 2 minutes ( a new record 4 me) PEace and Props |
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I got this bitch worried no doubt & I've been here a week Duke beat 5 shitty heads & gets excited about a winning streak ^^Things like that prove to me you're a fag craving cock Homo gets angry over head cause somebody fucked his thought FateForum.com never devoloped talent so why flaunt that image This is just a lyrcal scrimage you flipped the coin now ya finished Fuck Ill Intentionz ya phoney lryical assassins aint holden a clutch Kid has to learn the hard way..but shit...get off whats above my nuts Damn you jumped to conclusions shouldn'a called me out.. ...from G-town to east coast I like to smoke herb.. ^^Once i'm at 5 votes..you'll understand what i'm talking about |
This battle was aight..but what killed it is the mistakes
Personally I rather read some wack or filler lines then to read someone throw in a line that isn't part of a bar (ex....from G-town to east coast I like to smoke herb..) or a line that doesn't make sense b/c it was forced (ex. ya flows Like kids before "puberty", you don't know "fuck"//) I read that like 10 times and it still didn't make sense...I know what you were TRYING to say but damn! breakdown Personals: Eclapt 5/10 Punches: Eclapt 5/10 since you only had one good punch Quote:
Structure: Eclapt 7/10 Flows: Eclapt 5/10 both yall could def. improve..HeLL ON EARTH your flows was aight, but why don't you take longer than 2 minutes if you don't want to lose v/Eclapt |
I don't understand, both had pretty good flow, but neither had any good punches. In my opionion HellonEarth had the best flo, so my vote goes to him.
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Eclapt...straight up betta and way mo' skilled. Aiyo..those rhymes were ill...other dude was too simple
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aiyo man now vote honesly on dizz battler hurr
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127208 |
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hellonearth won this betta verse period
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Hell had this one...better punches...& structure
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um ok
E- man you had no personals or punches sorry battle period man ok that was a weak showing agianst someone who will take advantage of the man ok hell- no need to explian personals punches- that was just a one sided battle v/ Hell Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok in my opinion both of ya'll had pretty good drops but I would
have to say I thought HELLonEARTH had better punches, flow, structure & all that therefore HELLonEARTH gets my vote in this battle don't hate on me for sayin the truth! |
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hell on earth becuase he had better punches and rhymes so my vote hell on earth.
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oookayyy
HELLONEARTH ~ur flow was good,ur punches hit decent,u had a few personels,but ur structure was crap,so u must elevate on structure,everything else seemed good.....okay ECLAPT~u flowed a little off ,ur punches were ok.ur structure was wack also,and i didnt see any personels....so work on finding personels,and get a better structure okay,and try to work on ur flow also v/hellonearth |
dis battle wuz ight i guess i mean they wuz ight hell had betta punches and overall flow so daz where my vote goes
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Both of you cats were cool, but i will have to narrowly give this one to eclapt, the line "homo gets angry over head cause someone fucked his thought" was one of the best line i have heard in a while. SO he gets my vote.
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Aiight 2-2 uppin fer votes on dis battle
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good battle
Eclapt i know your new and not trying to hate but take this advice. When you battling say shit that would piss you the fuck off, gotta throw more and harder punches, Hell on Earth threw hard shit dissin ya dick but need to use better metaphors both of ya.
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HELLonEARTH u got my vote
HELLonEARTH: u plain out greased this dude. ur punches were aight. structure o.k., and fuck personals u dont need to know shit about the nigga. u had really good sim, and metas in there ur best line i think with a decent punch: Call ya self "Al Gore", because you won't win this "Lyrical election"// Ya weak and ya ain't straight, like a Dysfunctional Erection// weak opener: (it was lame) Ridin "Mens Cocks" the only way you could be an "MC"// Get sumbody's attention Eclapt: u did not get my vote 'cause: u need to get to writin before u start postin again. no lie homie. just need to elevate. lines and structure was horrendous. i actually got bored reading urs stuff. there were no punch lines. overall to be honest i was not just feelin it dawg. my v/ Hellon Earth |
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i say hell on earth took this battle dawg he had better punches that hit harder than eclapts did it was a good battle though
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