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PoliFlick Vrs Ravage
callin out polidick
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10linez drop u bitch...................................
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10 linz
damn this bitch is only 13, i cant even swear//
or his momy might get mean, hunt me down bare// But it might be like a dream, when a bitch stair// me and my homies gana tagteam, slap n pull hair// to the bitch is screamin for air// take the dick like ur sis there// cant hunt me down cause u cant pay the bus fair// dad dont give a fuck cause he never did care// its almost 10 pm, best go to ya room up stairs// here bitch dont forget your fuzzy teddy bear// :hump: |
[CENTER]^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa wackness cant belive diss dude called me out real easy 4 u
...........................................~1~ ...........................................~2~ ^^^^ dat right there was better than yo verse easly testing...... shouldve stuck wit chatrooms and battling on instant messaging.... u out of yo leauge~c progress should delete u so wack....... i easly defeat and rip up yo wack verse and pass it back...... new 2 Rb ~dis newbee get real step in da batters box u juss got struck out..... 1 vote 2 vote 3 votes 4 and 5 and yo lyrics gettin cut like marvin harrison routes... how does it feel catching a beat down u juss got swept and blew.... comin at me like he hard core when yo damn rapperz is better than u......[/CENTER] |
damn newb got nerve rackin so uppin dis shit and end him wit easseeee
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keep talkin shit kid,
keep on talkin shit kid,
need to go back to school and get an education, cause spitting aint for u is that ...........................................~1~ ...........................................~2~?? some rap shit, cause i only see 8 lines other then that, plus ur shit was weak all u rap bout how many post u got, shit ill shove all those post's up ur tight ass free meet... |
haha iss 10 da dots was 2 linez cuz those beat yo whole verse hahahah ill talk shit all i want i warned u kidd not 2 step out da box u fucked wit da wrong 1 elavate and goin back 2 school how does it feel 2 get embarassed by a 8th grader
reporting live.. form rap battles.. haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa elavate bitch and where did u see me say how many post i got????? ok nowhere |
gatta have the last word
hey it aint my fault i cant post as much shit as u//
i got a life to attened to, while you got a curfue// |
i might have a curfue but u juss got yo assed whipped
cuz 2night yo ass got served hahahahahhahahahaha L bitch |
poliflick won this fo sho both were good but poliflicks was betta
votepoli |
Naw I do not think that poli got my vote I just do not think that his lyrics where as crazy as ravage so I give my vote to ravage for his crazy lyircs from the start to the end I believe.
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PROLIFIK EASY....HE HAD BETTER PUNCHES...VOCAB...ALL AROUND BETTER VERSE
OPEN:RAVAGE...HE HAD WORDS FLOW:RAVAGE MULTIS:RAVAGE... PROLIFIK HAD SOME STRETCHED BARS...BUT PUNCHES WIN BATTLES..AND THATS WUT HE HAD SO VOTE:CHOPPER CAN YALL VOTE AND GET THIS OVER WIT:http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6969post1316969 |
yo this was an aight battle, but i think Ravage clearly had harder punches..pol's flow may have been a lil better, but its the punches that count in the end.
vote: Ravage vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126716 |
both of you got down. good job.
its clear that you need to elevate ravage.........but your a newb, so thats expected. dont trip off of criticism, you'll get used to it. work on your lines. you came hard, but basic as fuck, feel me? when you battle, dont direct your verse at his mom the whole time.....aim at him. a good battle consists of.....punchlines, personals, metaphors and vocabulary. when you hit, you gotta hit hard bruh. this is a learning experience you. use it to your advantage. ravage, (or anyone forthat matter) do me a favor and drop an honest response for my open mic called......."ELITE LEAGUE (MY CRHYMIES)". thanks. polifick, nice work. i expected you to come harder, but you did enough to win this. congrats. vote........polifick s.v........................c.s. |
.. polfick took this shitt, madd
good punches, the otha guy suked, made no sense,and had no punches Vote- polfick |
^^^ thank u lol no comments on da otha votes ahhahah
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Nah Fuck That Niggas Dont Kno How To Return Favors No More....fuckin Bitch Ass Cockheads...can Yall Vot On That Link Plz
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Man Prolifick took this...
ravenge or w/e you need to fix up ya structure and rhymes.. you cant rhyme the same shyt over and over.. e.g. Swear Air There.. kinda blows.. Prolif u took this man.. ike always u spittin hot... how does it feel catching a beat down u juss got swept and blew.... comin at me like he hard core when yo damn rapperz is better than u...... Sick... Overall you know Prolif got this... Nuff Said |
Polifick got this. It wasnt a good battle at all really no hard hittin punches no multies not very good structure at all. Ravage you need to elevate sum more try adding wordplay and that goes for Pol too.
Both need real work and this was my fav line ...........................................~1~ ...........................................~2~ /\ good creativity v/Polifick |
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