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Metaskriptz 05-27-04 10:27 PM

X ...Vs... E Looch
 
10 lines
no d/r
no hatin
no feedin
no bitin
no recyclin
no crew votes
no hate votes
I spit first if its a so big of a deal
Spit by tommar night

E Looch 05-27-04 10:30 PM

ight do u go head an spit

check check

Black Haze 05-27-04 10:54 PM

dis llokz like a good batttle to bad dat i cant vote on it tho cuz i dont hav nuttin close to 300 postz

Metaskriptz 05-28-04 12:46 PM

aight Check it.....
Ya think im easy to beat..Sorry to hurt you spirit But im not the other guys/
E real Soft right now..Becuz ya still into pickin Flowers and catchin ButterFlies/
People tell me ya soft...But I dont know, Maybe ya could be more thickness/
Becuz ya think ya so ILL Becuz Ya Cought up with Royal Sickness.(Get it)
Battlin Someone Like me, Compared to me..This battle will be left wit a coligion/
I murked dis Herb so much and left Dis E Looch nigga wit a change in religion/
BioSexual people like you dont need to be in Dat wack Crew Royal Sickness/
Becuz you Stole so many lines, ya Left Re$tricted and L.I. out of Bussiness/
Fixin ya memberane...Leavin ya Wit a Brain Tumar so when ya walk ya Curved/
E Looch is wack and so is Royal Sickness becuz Royalty wit A.I. is now surved/


Dis a Crew battle...Good Luck...

MoTiF 05-28-04 12:48 PM

Sad:( why did u have to say anything bout A.I?

Metaskriptz 05-28-04 01:02 PM

Stop postin stupid stuff please....And Its a crew battle if you noticed...And Deadly Vision said I have to battle him...So please dont post stupid stuff to get me voted against

E Looch 05-29-04 01:45 AM

im drunk the na mothafucka but ummm that has to be tha weakest shit somebody ever spit against me for real nigga i can top tha tshit seein 3 monitors ya bitch ass nigga

check it bitch


its like everytime i see X the kid braggin
since everbody kickin ya ass im jumpin on the band waggon
i'll rape X for the hell of it or just for satans amusement
stuff ya grill in a trombone n leave ya face in the music
sleepin on me will make u think twice like dejavu in ya dreams
heard u be dressin in drag an runnin around pursuin a queen (get it)
dv sent u to battle not wantin no herb droppin vanilla ice repeats
u like sara after makin da band just another bitch in the streets
reppin 2 crews in ya sig an sayin u from sesame street u apear shook
u got a less chance of gettin signed than a obese ugly kids yearbook


^lmfao never gonna happen



2 crews= deadly muderous an a.i
seasame street= he say he from where da cookie monster live
an 6th line - drag queen lmfao

Metaskriptz 05-29-04 01:49 AM

umm ok First Deadly Murderaz isnt a crew..and Second stop wit the fake drunk ish becuz that want good....

E Looch 05-29-04 01:51 AM

yea it was a crew ya herb u tried makin that shit bt nobody joined cause u as wack as the shit u just posted

lmao fall back pussy

Metaskriptz 05-29-04 01:54 AM

ummm aight dont talk ish to try to get votes...Juss shut the hell up..I didnt say nothing to you and you commin wit dat wack ish

Metaskriptz 05-29-04 01:35 PM

o yea if you was paying attention It was already proved fake..So no need to try to get votes by someting old...but no hate...Just uppin dis in battle..No beef

Enhance 05-29-04 01:54 PM

LOL @ you begging for him to vote for you.

Sorry . .
X You're verse had good flow at least on the first two bar`s and myab eline 3 and 4 were ok but the rest really was bad. - Biosexual people dont need to be in that wack crew RS? that was weak no wordplay not even a punch i dont think . . .
Elooch
Beat you down easily infact his first 2 line's were as good as you're whole verse & I liked the facing the music like good wordplay i think anyway E Looch came harder.

V/Elooch.

Restricted 05-29-04 05:50 PM

Aight Check This..

X: 3/10
Your Spit Was Horrible..No Real Punches and Your Shit Was Definitly Lacking. No Word-Play At All...No Vocab, and You Had Horrible Metaphors. Please Tell Me You Weren't Trying..

E Looch: 4/10
Your Ish Wasnt Much Better, But I Guess You Knew It Was Enough To Beat Him. Your Punches Were Lacking....Your Metas Were Better But Not By Much. Word Usuage Was Better..

Vote - E Looch

Stay Dope and Elevate

~R~

E Looch 05-29-04 10:05 PM

lol ok


uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

:) 05-29-04 11:50 PM

lol e louch merked this cat better disses.. better punchlines the last line about fat persons year book had me rollin

Metaskriptz 05-29-04 11:53 PM

lol aight he beat me so what...Dont make A big deal out of it...Cant win all the time..I lost so dont be Bringing it up and stuff becuz..Ya won..aight..He won aight..Dang juss vote fo him aight..Could have did better but i didnt

King Solo 05-30-04 09:57 AM

Ya think im easy to beat..Sorry to hurt you spirit But im not the other guys/
E real Soft right now..Becuz ya still into pickin Flowers and catchin ButterFlies/
6...forced personal, not very gud!!
People tell me ya soft...But I dont know, Maybe ya could be more thickness/
Becuz ya think ya so ILL Becuz Ya Cought up with Royal Sickness.(Get it)
7...better, but not that original!!
Battlin Someone Like me, Compared to me..This battle will be left wit a coligion/
I murked dis Herb so much and left Dis E Looch nigga wit a change in religion/
6...pretty weak dawg, gotta be better!!
BioSexual people like you dont need to be in Dat wack Crew Royal Sickness/
Becuz you Stole so many lines, ya Left Re$tricted and L.I. out of Bussiness/
7...nice line, but pretty basic wordplay!!
Fixin ya memberane...Leavin ya Wit a Brain Tumar so when ya walk ya Curved/
E Looch is wack and so is Royal Sickness becuz Royalty wit A.I. is now surved/
6...well weak closer, didn't really get the last line!!

its like everytime i see X the kid braggin
since everbody kickin ya ass im jumpin on the band waggon
6...weak really, u can do better!!
i'll rape X for the hell of it or just for satans amusement
stuff ya grill in a trombone n leave ya face in the music
7...funny line, nice meta!!
sleepin on me will make u think twice like dejavu in ya dreams
heard u be dressin in drag an runnin around pursuin a queen (get it)
6...weak man, that is homo shit in a way...played!!
dv sent u to battle not wantin no herb droppin vanilla ice repeats
u like sara after makin da band just another bitch in the streets
6...vanilla ice shit is sooooo played!!
reppin 2 crews in ya sig an sayin u from sesame street u apear shook
u got a less chance of gettin signed than a obese ugly kids yearbook
6...gud second line, but that sesame street shit been used b4 and really it appeared to be just filler!!

POINTS TOTALS

X - 32/50
E Looch - 31/50

V/ - X

Metaskriptz 05-30-04 11:56 AM

Thank you...Finally I get right voted instead of fake votes....Thanks king good lookin..Uppin dis

E Looch 05-30-04 12:09 PM

wow that was some bullshit


id like to see the aol conversation u had to get him to vote for u bitch ass kids

King Solo 05-30-04 12:24 PM

no offense looch

but both y'all spit bullshit

it's just X's bullshit was better than ure bullshit simple

E Looch 05-30-04 04:11 PM

yea yea u voted for him he voted for u yada yada dont care


uppin for honest an explained votes

FlowIntelligent. 05-30-04 08:26 PM

breakdown:


X:

Ya think im easy to beat..Sorry to hurt you spirit But im not the other guys/
E real Soft right now..Becuz ya still into pickin Flowers and catchin ButterFlies/
^^hott opener good wordplay and funny ass punch 8/10
People tell me ya soft...But I dont know, Maybe ya could be more thickness/
Becuz ya think ya so ILL Becuz Ya Cought up with Royal Sickness.(Get it)
^^saying soft again hurt this bar 1st line gay 2nd line good 6/10
Battlin Someone Like me, Compared to me..This battle will be left wit a coligion/
I murked dis Herb so much and left Dis E Looch nigga wit a change in religion/
^^decent bar not too ill 5/10
BioSexual people like you dont need to be in Dat wack Crew Royal Sickness/
Becuz you Stole so many lines, ya Left Re$tricted and L.I. out of Bussiness/
^^hottest bar of the battle no doubt 9/10
Fixin ya memberane...Leavin ya Wit a Brain Tumar so when ya walk ya Curved/
E Looch is wack and so is Royal Sickness becuz Royalty wit A.I. is now surved/
^^1st line good 2nd line weak 5/10

overall: 33/50 (66%)

e looch:

its like everytime i see X the kid braggin
since everbody kickin ya ass im jumpin on the band waggon
^^decent opener good punch 6/10
i'll rape X for the hell of it or just for satans amusement
stuff ya grill in a trombone n leave ya face in the music
^^seen similar stuff to this about an instrument and makin them face the music 5/10
sleepin on me will make u think twice like dejavu in ya dreams
heard u be dressin in drag an runnin around pursuin a queen (get it)
^^prolly ya hottest bar 8/10
dv sent u to battle not wantin no herb droppin vanilla ice repeats
u like sara after makin da band just another bitch in the streets
^^started off good but wasnt feeling it 6/10
reppin 2 crews in ya sig an sayin u from sesame street u apear shook
u got a less chance of gettin signed than a obese ugly kids yearbook
^^good personal and punch tight closer 7/10

overall: 32/50 (64%)

vote: X

i think his punches hit alot harder then e loochs...e looch you got him harder with the personals cuz X didnt use any u also had him in structure and wordplay...but his bar about L.I and Re$stricted took this battle good shyt from both

~!1!~

Metaskriptz 05-31-04 12:19 AM

lol uppin thanks.....uppin for more votes

KillaCamFlow 05-31-04 12:28 AM

OK...break down

Ya think im easy to beat..Sorry to hurt you spirit But im not the other guys/
E real Soft right now..Becuz ya still into pickin Flowers and catchin ButterFlies/
--NICE OPENER MAD ME FALL OUT MY SEAT 7/10
People tell me ya soft...But I dont know, Maybe ya could be more thickness/
Becuz ya think ya so ILL Becuz Ya Cought up with Royal Sickness.(Get it)
--U USED SOME WORDS AGAIN CHANGE A LITTLE 6/10
Battlin Someone Like me, Compared to me..This battle will be left wit a coligion/
I murked dis Herb so much and left Dis E Looch nigga wit a change in religion/
--IT WAS AN OK LINE 6/10
BioSexual people like you dont need to be in Dat wack Crew Royal Sickness/
Becuz you Stole so many lines, ya Left Re$tricted and L.I. out of Bussiness/
--PRETTY GOOD VERSE I THINK THE BEST 1 10/10
Fixin ya memberane...Leavin ya Wit a Brain Tumar so when ya walk ya Curved/
E Looch is wack and so is Royal Sickness becuz Royalty wit A.I. is now surved/
OK...LINE BUT WOULD HAVE BEEN IF USED DIFF WORD -6/10


e looch break down

its like everytime i see X the kid braggin
since everbody kickin ya ass im jumpin on the band waggon
--NICE OPENER 7/10
i'll rape X for the hell of it or just for satans amusement
stuff ya grill in a trombone n leave ya face in the music
--PRETTY GOOD..KINDA USE LINES 6/10
sleepin on me will make u think twice like dejavu in ya dreams
heard u be dressin in drag an runnin around pursuin a queen (get it)
--GOOD LINE 1 OF THE BEST LINE OF BATTLE 7/10
dv sent u to battle not wantin no herb droppin vanilla ice repeats
u like sara after makin da band just another bitch in the streets
--HAD ME LAUGHING BUT NOT A GOOD RHYME..6/10
reppin 2 crews in ya sig an sayin u from sesame street u apear shook
u got a less chance of gettin signed than a obese ugly kids yearbook
--NICE CLOSER BETTER THEN X 7/10


x-35/50
E-33/50

Pretty good battle have not seen a battle so good in a while tho....nice

Killah Bwoy 05-31-04 01:31 AM

lol

e looch:
good flow dawg....but this was pretty wack..ESPECIALLY..for
a crew battle...your personals and meta's were played especially
that trambone line...ive seen alot better from you and your
structure was pretty good

x :
i dont like the way you word shit..its good at times but it makes
you sound less intelligent...word your shit properly..feel me
i didnt see any good punches and your personals was aiight
keep elevating

vote: E LOOCH

E Looch 05-31-04 03:20 AM

wow nerds aare votin on a buterfly punch an basically cpyin what tha persona said above em thats why ilove the voting on this site my blacklist grows by the vote

L.E 05-31-04 09:35 AM

A'yo...no doubt about it, this was a very dissapointing battle.

X...I expected more from you. A LOT more. What the fuck was that dawg? You spittin' herbish dawg...if you was new to this, then maybe I would have let it slid...punches weren't hittin at all...personals was weak...but flow and structure was a'ight. I hope that you weren't trying that hard in this battle...

2/10

E-Looch...your verse ws not that much better. I think you was drunk dawg, cuase usually you spit fire. But your verse was sorta wack too...not up to your usual standards. Punches were a lil' more hard hitting, but some lines were played. Structure and flow was a il' off...but it was better than X's verse.

4/10

Vote- E-Looch

No hate. Really weak battle.

L.I. 05-31-04 12:17 PM

x - not that great of a spit...nice flow....no wordplay....work on your meta's...punches werent that hard hitting....keep elevatin ur personals...need to elevate ya game before u take on this kind of cat...give it a 4.3 out of 10....

e looch - nice spit...u had way better meta's and punches...ur closer killed it....nice flow and wordplay....u easily won this over his verse....way more complex wit better punches....give you verse a 8.3 out of 10...

vote - e looch


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