DON <VS> lyricallyabbusiv
 

aight 10-12 lines
no cheating u all kno the rules
ur dropin first so good luck

Birthday:
July 26, 1988
Age:
15
Biography:
born in south philadelphia 8'th and catherine italian hood 100%
Show Battle Records:
All

kid lives in da ill hood, PHILLY!, hah, da name brings laughs
its also funny too...
when he cant win even though he pays the mod staffs!
killin this herb wit mah 2nd bar...his hood n em' gonna get lit

^im not sure bout dat...but i think he said that cuz ur in it!
Its just another one of those emcees..dat take me as a noob..
rip this kids organs out..
And then make this bitch eat food through a plastic tube...
I've peeped his previouss battles...n kid still uses sex jokes..
Godfathers turnin into grandfather..
Cuz with my punches...this kidz gonna suffer strokes...
Battle was over b4 it started...the winner was assumed..
lyricallyabbusiv took over..
Don's has been lyrically eaten...da lil' kid was consumed...


eh, quik key...enuff for dis kid...
yo spit..g'luck....NO1 CAN LEAVE LINKS ...if they do..automatic dq...cuz u can vote 4 them if they hit up ya battle...so they will vote 4 u on purpose...

haha u didnt even have punches thats the funny part aight

hes jealous of me cause i grew up in a city named philly...
well bitch wats arkansas like cause i heard its hilly...
yeah thats right hes probly a little white craker who lives in the country...
well dont waste your time rapping cause without ur cornfields america would be hungry...
i dont gota use sex jokes to bring his golden boy ass to rest...
we already know in arkansas that your a product of incest...
ur a pussy so u gota act like a thug online to feel big...
ur such a weakass u cant even have a sig...
all ur rhymes read to me is more of your bitchin...
a women like you dont belong in front lines he belongs in the kitchen...

haha ur a joke if u think philadelphias a joke i cant even waste time on u no more

man lyrically abusiv you dont even really rhyme this was your best line Its just another one of those emcees..dat take me as a noob..
rip this kids organs out..
And then make this bitch eat food through a plastic tube... but other than that u had no punches... don on the other hand had hard hitting punches...but work on your opener... this is my favorite line i dont gota use sex jokes to bring his golden boy ass to rest...
we already know in arkansas that your a product of incest... soo overall my vote goes tooo don

haha wat did u do stalk me and study every post i made i dont live in a hood wit blacks i thought u woulda read that part too i lived in a italian hood but now i live in delaware u shoulda jus dropped ur verse not made fun of somethin ull neva kno about

^lmfao............not 2 sway...but nice d/r...1) i dont live in arkansas...where da fuk dat come outta?

that vote wasnt a d/r u jus had no punches in ur verse most of it was takin up by ur talkin

just wait till da battles over................................

yeah u already talkin bout dq my votes prolly cause u gota wait till tomoro wen ur friends are on so they can vote

son.........go 2 ir........chek if i complained...................n no..i aint like u.....i dont aim mah friends 2 hit up battles.......fuken herb......

Mafia Soldier
 

Lyricallyabbusiv WHAT THA FUCK WAS THAT!!!!!!!!!!!That was horrible!!U had no good punches at all!!!And tha flow was whack,man I feel sorry for u!!

Tha DON had way better punches and it was funny!! He just has more experience and is really creative wit his shit!!!

My vote, hands down, goes toooooooooooo
Tha DON!!!!!!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^ dun wrry...we'll c who wins it......................fuken noob voters......

umm....yall need to lay off the fucking crack.......arkansas is hilly? WTF IS THAT? yall must be some serious dickriders cuz that was whack...i mean lyrically didnt really try but still took this with just that one pay off the mod staff punch.....

VOTE=LYRICALLYABBUSIV...i will poll later

Possible crew vote removed
-strobe

uppin............................................. ..............................

uppin for votes aight pc dont leave any links and explain ur votes cause this boy is touchy if the vote is against him

lmao......DON if u actually think u won this,i feel bad for u.....and those are such obvious dickrides,should be reported....that one dude even lives in deleware like u...but n e wayz i just had to leave my opinion cuz u are runnin ur mouth so much when ur verse was just plain terrible

pz

DON is wack as fuck...

...nuf said...

philly and hilly?

seriously....fuckin faggot...

DONs punches didnt connect at all, they hit nothin but air.....

just straight wackness...

this site has so much dickriding its not even funny....DON got served....

nuff said...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

aight man this was close but i gotta give the battle to ma man lyrically...he is just straigh up dope compurred to DON...nice name too

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

wth???ight..first...Don killed da other newb..well basicly i could beat both of ya at da same time wit out tryin..thats how much this battle shows how weak you are...

spit: don
punch:don
multi: none
flow:don

vote don

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

wow lyrical that was fuckin terrible, u need to grab a shotgun and shoot ur tongue off and every single finger so u can no longer say another line or write another line.
Don good drop even tho u could of just used da opener to kill dis kid,

v=Don

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Tha DON had punches and the shit was funny...Lyrikal...hardly saw any punches 'n' shit in there...

Vote = DON

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Don: was feeling ur lines more

Flow and Structure:
ur ryhmes flowed good ur structure add 2 it 7/10

Personals and Punchlines:
u had some here and there most of em hit pretty hard... this was your best section of the battle.... 7.5 or 7/10

overall: 7/10

Lyrically: wasn't reallly feeling your lines gotta practice more...

Flow and Structure:
ur flow was ok 5/10 mabye 6/10 ur structure wasn't dat great so it didn't add 2 it...

Personals and Punchlines:
u had none... so some advice add some 2 ur next verse u spit in a battle... 0/10

overall: 5/10

Winner: Don
by far no competition... his punchlines and personals took the battle cuz lhyrical didn't have any.... and his rhymes flowed more....

Abusive:1 i felt like lyricallys spit didnt even rhyme, his structure was all off. 2 his personal was soft.3 i saw no punchlines..
DON:1 opener was whack.2 Punches were hard. Responded hard to abusives comments... Win: DON

Diz could hav been a betta battle but lyrical came weak

Punches-Don took diz because lyrical u didnt have any

Flow-Don had better flow, lyrics u were jus lacking it at times but keep practcing

Orignality and Complexity-Not to shabby don keep it up, lyrical u were krap

Overall-Don took diz battle wit ease but lyrical jus keep workin on it and add punches

Vote Don


return da favor at my battle, link in da sig

HOW MANY VOTES got D/q'd shit


Don got this wun over all cause he rhymed more but u lacked Vocab n Wordplay good vErse tho

Lyricalyabusiv ur lines where 2 short and didint rhyme i think u nneeed tto elavate

Break Down

Lyricalyabusiv

Flow 4/10
Rhymes3/10
Punches 4/10
Sturcture 3/10
Vocab 2/10
Wordplay 3/10
19/60

DON

FLow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 3/10
Vocab 4/10
Wordplay 4/10
29/60


V/DON