Da Magician 7 V.S. VALOR
 

Yo lets battle B u peeps gon kick me out da crew i gotta kno if im bettah den u

U spit first
No Hate votes
no crew votes
no D/R votes
No unexplained votes

lets get it 2day B :thumbup:

yo valor drop a verse

checking in...and i say u spit first since u did call me out:)

na i already droped da rules n erything.. go ahead

yo u gonna spit first..and atleast spit ya verse b4 5:00 my time...its 4:40

dude was once happy cus he was in mah crew and repped this.......
....hes pissed off
but then again the dude has my crew on his respect list......(wtf)(sig)

dudes best record is like he said on his ghost mc...
....hes a rookie
he probably does need a ghost writer just to defeat me.....
and using d/r is a way that would put u at risk.....
....scared to get dissed
using d/r is the only way you'll get votes on this.....
i only let u in cus black hazed done asked me....
....ur wack
vomiting on the mic is the only way u spitting nasty.....

in this battle u cannot once spit a nasty bar.....
....not nasty at all
even if that was a naked girl laying in your avvy tar.....


blah....lol

its crazy when i spit get niggaz sick from hot shit..
i won easly so act like dis is old beef and drop it..
if ma flow was a 'Officer' u still couldnt 'Cop' dis..
n if ma punches dont connect it will still be a hot miss....

Valor dont kick somebody outa ya crew dats bettah den u....
ya Flow are cheap like u got em off a damn dolla menu....
Nigga ma flow will sweep u striaght off ya feet....
Dont talk shit Cuz..Like a 100 degree Day U cant take da "heat".... (gun)
like im n american soldier and ur a iraqi base imma hafta bomb ya....
u gonna lose dis battle like playin hide and seek wit Osama.... (bin laden)
Im tellin u im da sickest MC but nobody beleive me...
i'll blast u 6 times and give u n extra 1 cuz u greedy....
if we eva would bang out ya hands wouldnt even Reach...
If we had beef i'll leave shells on ya grass like ya house was da Beach.....
ya rhymes are a shame imma call u da loss abbuser...
nigga da only way u can get 5 votes is if dey was votin on da loser...
i'll make u lose ya life quick and boil ya brains....
Hit u wit lyrical punches and leave ya blood 2 drain....
da only way u cud win is if u got struck By luck...
Nigga imma call u vaccum cleaner cause u Jus Suck...
Me losin dis battle nigga dat will neva happen...
dats like Elton john winnin a nominee for rappin...
nigga u act hard but yo we all have Black times...
U terrorising da game because peeps eyes r burnin from readin ya wack rhymes....
imma get credit cause i get props PER WIN...
dont talk about bein nasty when u still prolly a virgin...

FIINIISHA


well u gonna get 0 votes u cant go any lower..right?...
stop hangin wit black siinz cause he made u a wack Emcee Overnight....

^^^verse bittin......no personals.....and it wqas basic and wack.......

uppin number 1

Aight peeps good battle really enjoyed readin this time for the breakdown;

VALOR: Nice verse liked the structure wordplay punches were good never really seen a rhyming structure like that before but i liked it kept it simple but to the point...nice verse elevate a lil on the structure and u'll be even more deadly wit the rhymes.

Da Magician: Weak opener ur verse picked up but it to me was too self gloryfied the opener was basically pumpin urself up...go for the disses...nice structure i think you had Val here nice punches and personals too but u kept gloryfyin yoself and it affected ya on this occasion try and focus on the opponent instead of...i am i could i would...it let you down.

V/Valor

uppin number 2
vote vote vote vote vote
im up 1-0

Good battle....Breakdown for valor, your verse was ok, you had a few good punches, an ya had some decent personals, you had decent vocab, couda been stronger
Punches 7/10
Personals 6/10
Flow 5/10
Structure 4/10
Creativity 5/10
Overall: 27/50

Da magician.....man me an you cool an everything but you messed up, your verse was tight but it was to self glorying, you had a few punches, but a lot of your verse wasn't aimed at him an thats a no no in battles
Punches 5/10
Personals 2/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 6/10
Creativity 4/10
Overall 23/50
Vote Valor

VALOR = 30/50
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 4/10
Humor 7/10

Da MaGiCiAn 7 = 27/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

VALORgot this one...he had the flow & structure to lead him..to win...

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a yo dat was a good battle yo i aint even gonn vote doggys cuz magician ma boy and valor's in ma crew but dat was a good ass battle i liked both verses doggs na mean good shyt fellaz much respek to both of ya

IM kinda feeling da magicion on this battle......just because she a girl....and she had the heart to stand up to a man lol....nah.....valor won this battle but i do nto vote againist girls so no vote but if i did valor won

LMAO dat shit was a funny 1 killa cam...

a Girl lol ahhahahhaha dat nigga saidhez a gurl

YO DA MAGICIAN RIPPED HIM WTF is wronge with u people Killah Bwoy KNows L.I.
knows Re$tricted knows Flow Intelligent knows WTF!!!!! AALLLL VVVEEETTTSSSKNO


// I WHOULD RIP VALOR\\

P.S Not Saying i wanna battle i like battleing people that are Actually Good :thumbup:

Rofl.....
Uppin Number 3
Im Up 3-0
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Aiight Valor ya had good punches but ya flow and structure are whack. I didn't like it too much. Punches landed ok overall. The d/r line was the best

Magician y a had good lines but I'v eheard em before. Or maybe they were similar to that, but they sound too familiar to me. They sound bittin. I'm leary about that so...

Vote-Valor

Return da favor (in ma sig)

valor
dude was once happy cus he was in mah crew and repped this.......
....hes pissed off
but then again the dude has my crew on his respect list......(wtf)(sig)
weird strucuture, okay flow, no multies, but man you need at least one hard hitting punch. i didnt see anything from you. decent personals

da magician
ya rhymes are a shame imma call u da loss abbuser...
nigga da only way u can get 5 votes is if dey was votin on da loser...

Mnigga u act hard but yo we all have Black times...
U terrorising da game because peeps eyes r burnin from readin ya wack rhymes....

this goes to da magician for flowing and better punches. he had less personals, but his punches hit harder. no multies though...some decent wordplay..punches were played but he at least had em....

Ight....valor had the better flow and structure.Or better yet...he had the better verse.PERIOD.
Magican...your shit was too simple and ur verse seemed half-assed.It didn't look like you placed any thought or time into it.Next time...try to get more creative.No imagery by neither one of you though...u both should add that next time.

Vote-Valor.

yo dis battle wuz tyght and both mc's did they thing and valor had better punches but magic had a better flow and personals so overall this battle goes 2 him

vote=magic

aight im gona go against wat everyone else said because although they both had punches valor needed structure i couldnt tell which line rhymed wit which. magician ur punches werent that hard they could use a lil work but ur structure and rhyme scheme got my vote

v/magician

Structure was horrible, both mc need to seriouslt elevate, i wasnt feelin this both verses. why: BEcause fuckin played....played...played fuckin lines....atleast Valor had some creative punches that were connectin...d/rvote is old...is overused i suggest u change the way u use it...

blah!!

V/: Valor