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BATTLE: mC RIOT vs. Nyce1
simple house rules:
10-15 lines no bullshit no bitin be done in like 30 mins homez |
Checking In Up in this peace I'll spit in a minute
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hah u takin so long...hopefully it reflects in da votin come on chump |
god damn
I neva thought i would have to UP da thread before u even spit!
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NO FEEDIN OF MY ISH...that my only rule
Even though there’s no challenge, I’ll call this 1 on 1
Because that will be your new record, after I’ve won (peep his record) I see you’re from Motor City well that’s a fuckin RIOT No wonder you can’t afFORD to make ya skillz compliant Me against you, is like Ron Jeremy vs. a virgin, I’m makin you sweat You can’t handle the pressure b/c you’re mezmorized by my depth (think about it) I’m like GaraunSHEED Wallace garauntee'n the win of game 2 (from Detroit Pistons) “You will not win your second battle”… no matter what you do yo, I finally figured out why your weak name is riot cuz you steal all your material, then claim you write it You can’t see me in a war, got as much heart as an army commanda You shook by the “front lines”, got to be “bitched slapped” just to enta (enter) |
I posted my verse before 30 minutes were up chickin head
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shit bitch
aiyo, i finally figured out why it took u so long to spit
You were in da bathroom readin, takin a shit...get off Webster's dick Your rhymes dont even make sense, you put 'em all in captions Get da balls off your chin, and also stop da scratchin yeah I'm from da D, walkin down da streets and u see me Pick up a book and read, you lil bitch...nice is spelled N.I.C.E. I know you made da time limit, but while we waitin', we all gettin older Yo man, I'll run you over in COLORADO, like i was BOULDER I'll give u some tips, COMMANDA and ENTA dont rhyme, u lil shook bitch I'll slice off your lips while u rappin cuz I dont wanna hear a bit hook dats shit Yousa chump, your rhymes is like a fly swatter...they all WACK You might of been wit JILL on a HILL but you still ain't JACK |
This cat looses points for feeding off my verse which I told him about
Thats yo only chance of puttin somethin together that makes sense anyways you sucka mc |
4 -12 lines can't even be considered you chump....if we take out all your feedin lines you don't even have enough to meet the 10 line requirement....you might get a DQ
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hmmm aight i wasnt aware of your rules about dissin your verse...what kinda battle is that anyway? thats da point in battlin....and also i said 10-15, so go suck a dick
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both of these was yawn-some, but the 2nd was slight ( just slightly) better.
both structures was a little basic and I could see where you were going withmost of the rhyme schemes. you should try 2 be a little more deceptive and intelligent so punches are a little more unexpected, that would work best. variate both flows. |
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aight this battle was really close and it was really good nyce im votin for u cause ur punches jus were a little bit better and both of ur flows were good. this was a hard battle to vote on but i gota vote for nyce
drop a honest vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127095 v/nyce |
Opner: Draw
Punches: Draw Humor: Draw Flow: Nyce Structure: MC Personals: Nyce Multis: MC Metas: Nyce Closer: MC Overall Vote: TiE....but imma have to go wit..MC Riot cause Nyce 1'z last line didn't rhyme that well... |
Yall keep sleepin on this verse...first of all I could have easily wrote "commander" to rhyme with "enter" but I wrote it "commanda" and "enta" b/c thats how you would say it if you were spittin it...
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Aiight Nyce ya had a good drop. Flow was ok (I like the ford line) Puinches were ok and ya had a personnal or two, Overall a good drop
Riot ya fed off his verse and still didn't match up to him. THe N.I.C.E. line was the best. But ya had weak punches and mediocre flow. Vote-Nyce Return da favor-In ma sig |
Nyce1:
yo, I finally figured out why your weak name is riot cuz you steal all your material, then claim you write it Didn't feel that one but you got lots of decent punch lines. RIOT: You should have put more thought in your lines, Commanda and Enta do rhyme. You're last punch line was dope though. Since Nyce1 spat first, I would expected better twists from RIOT. So my vote goes for Nyce1 Please vote on ma battles and drop me some honest feedback |
...but u didnt...u wrote it in a diff way...write it as u want it percieved nigga
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ok Nyce..
umm lets see... how can i start this off... alright work on flow for sure...and i don't know if you can buy them in the store here but get some multies... for real ok ron jeremy lines have been played well forever... and (puttin the explanation of your rhyme is defently herbish) the Garunsheed line wasn't bad.. kinda gay could have been worded better... Mc Riot, not a bad verse your flow is hotness you just need a few better punches i like the first line and the N.I.C.E. line them were ill... so for not havin played shit vote goes to Mc Riot.. D.. Reppin |
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aiite
I thought the shit comment on three way was hella sick n it was close but jus tippin out the end n the one comment i was feelin a lot was the webster n takin a shit lol, was funny overall props to both but vote..:
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Hey im going to give this one to riot, because nyce some of what you were saying was not clear, but the rasheed line was hot. But riot better delivery, so he gets my vote
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