Furious VS BIGPAPPA76
 

Aight usual rules, ten to twenty lines, lets go

aight go ahead and spit hommie.......................

Ok, I'm gonna drop an insanely wack verse and still destroy you

Big poppa, tha show stoppa, fat fucka
I'll simplify this verse so u can understand this mutha
How you try and come up on this, repping some pussy ass crew
blow your invisible verse out tha water, destroy them niggas too
First time you repping 'Dark Knights' and you know I'm gonna merk you
How you gon try and be hard when u a geek worse than erkle

Saying niggas is racist shows u a KKK with jungle fever(http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124335)
Vanilla Ice is hotter than u so I blow ur ass up to the ether
Its clear you can't rap so get back to soppy poetry
You useless and tired like that bitch rapper out of floetry (hate that bitch!)

Little punk ,Dick riding *Tay.G*sincity* (http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...411#post1315411)
Only way u'll win is if u cheat, bet u'll get your crew to vote against me
U a rapper-by-the-numbers, citing verses bout the usual
violence u aint commited, u kno that shit is improvable
Who u really tryin' impress?, Dark knights is punks worse than u are
Snitching little bitches, lieing in raps is taking it too far,
Give up rapping, put back your strap coz u aint no real man
my rhymes abused and confused u smacked u like a pimp hand

aight look

Furious actin all pumped up and furosious on the text/
BIGPAPPA a true killa and yo' death be the crime im committin next/
fat jokes will only get you so far in this battle game bitch/
step the fuck back and knock back that 7 year itch... off yo' mommas clit/
keep spitin yo' KKK shit and dat weak ass dickridin shit/
you gonna learn right quick im da one you just shouldnt have fucked with/

split yo ass like a lumba jack hittin da wood/
BIGPAPPA spits da realest shit dat rips yo ass from hood to hood/
BIGPAPPA reprezentin da Dark Knights to the fullest/
step the fuck back son fo you get caught cross fire in da bullets.. from da GAT i be stickin in yo momma back... /
faggot.. taggit... hit that prison bitch ass and smackit (faggot)./

imma tell you right now you cant spit any thing near enough illa/
bring somethin betta next time bitch, you know im da real lyrical rhyme killa/
givin out links to my posts like u think imma give a damn/
fuck you i just murdad' yo ass like the son of sam/
took me all of 5 minutes to destroy yo' no tallent ass fool/
come back when you get some skills you fuckin bitch ass tool/

BIGPAPPA76

Opener: Big
Flow: Draw
Humor: Big
Structure: Big
Personals: Draw
Punches: Draw
Closer: Draw
Overall Vote: BigPappa76...7... Furious...4...

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Furious took this, your ender was a bit crap, but apart from that, it was funny.
BIGPAPPA you didn't say a word in the entire rhyme, you talked but I didn't hear a goddamn thing, and you completely proved him right with the violence thing.

Furious, you get my vote

UPPIN FOR VOTES... i cant belive $ik's vote was DQd that looks like more than enough info to me... any way UPPIN FOR VOTES

I do not no If I am gonna vote on this one it is gonna be hard becuase both had a kick ass opener. but bigpapa takes this one with a good finisher on this battle. so with it being hard ot vote on this one I got wiht bigpapa with the closure.

uppin for votes
biggpoppa sucked. vote furious. I am the future............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............................

unfortunatlly ima have to go with furious

he had slightly better flow but the only readon that i go with him is because the opener was slightly better then BigPappa......keep elevating both of you and you should be good in no time.....i know that you both have potential....pc

v/Furious

ah ha ha ha ha, and so it ends bigpoppa (POSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPOSTPSOTP OSTPSOTPOST)

aight yall we need some votes... yo furious for someone who just got smoked you talk some real trash fool.

yo uppin for votes yall.............................................. ..

I ain't furious BIGPAPPA76, thats why I voted on this battle

aight still uppin for votes................................

Still Uppin For Votes In Dis Bitch..................................

Yo don't sleep on this shit people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin For Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo uppin for votes, !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shit We Need Votes, Quit Sleepin People Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo wadup wit this shit. uppin for votes people damn

Uppin this shit!!! don't sleep on this people!!!!!!!!!!

Big poppa, tha show stoppa, fat fucka
I'll simplify this verse so u can understand this mutha
How you try and come up on this, repping some pussy ass crew
blow your invisible verse out tha water, destroy them niggas too

^^ Tho I don't like the biggie insult, and considering it's simple, it still hits him hard...up metaphors and wordplay
**and we all know Tay G got more dick riders than anyone...


Furious actin all pumped up and furosious on the text/
BIGPAPPA a true killa and yo' death be the crime im committin next/
fat jokes will only get you so far in this battle game bitch/
step the fuck back and knock back that 7 year itch... off yo' mommas clit/

^^^ um...lacks creativity as well..and this doesn't hit as hard as furious


Vote: F

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this shits turnin into a sleeper!!! UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!

jesus what a sleeper..... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Yo people don't sleep on this shit, I will return tha favor, so vote on this, damn

Yo uppin for votes, jesus christ people, favours will be returned

yo uppin dis shit.... how can this shit be looked at so many damn times and have so few votes...UPPIN!

come on, I've upped this thing on over three pages now, people, get this SHIT CLOSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin.............................................

furious-Nice spit........You came good with the personals with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

big-Came aight and good....Work on something, structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more
work.....But keep elevatin and work
v/furious

Return the fav please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think Furious had better punchlines, he came with some personal disses and I felt his flow more... I think BigPapas rhymes were just really basic and I wasn't really feelin his punches.... please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356