DaLyRicaLViLLain vs L.I.
 

Aight...decided to do a quick little battle for the kids....here are the rules...

No Dickriding
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
10 Lines
Due 30 Minutes after check in...

I'll check in after you....goodluck peace....

Right on homey... Checkin in.. lets do this shit...

Aight checked in.....30 minutes have started.......

Just look at his style, no wonder he aint even respected...
Your rhymes are just like Reggie Miller's layup, rejected...
Not one emcee on your win list is good so stop reppin that...
Have enough wins for elevated but never comes cuz hes wack...
Unknown on the site, wen he posts no one even notice he spoke...
Can't score wit girls, only time he got ass wen his toilet paper broke...
Not worth this much effort, but ill continue til hes gone...
He's the herb who robs a bank with the Safety on...*
Shut ya mouth, and dont speak until spoken to...
Feels bad for dissin me so he said 'jus jokin dude'...


Explanation...
if u didnt no wut i meant by safety i meant the safety button on a gun....aight...

Aight... Everybody feel this shit...

32 and 6 this nigga think i'll flow intimidated//
Every verse he ever spit was stolen or premeditated//
Im fresh created, Battlin for the heavy weight title//
Puttin L.I. in his grave in this RB ghetto recital//
Throw a bridal, shower for this hoe cake, cuz he's a wife//
Straight addicted to these dicks you're fuckin swallowin for life//
You dont want strife, Like i said leave L.I. in his death bed//
You're LYRICALLY INEPT, ill leave the voters and the ref dead//(L.I.)
Cuz readin this is cancerous, hazardous to yo health//
Cuz i'm a killa in this rap game, read this and you'll kill yourself//

For ya'll who dont know inept means wrong in a foolish kind of way...

Good battle homey... aight lets get some votes on this shit...1

Opener: L.I.
Humor: L.I.
Flow: Draw
Personals: Draw
Struture: DaLy
Metas: L.I.
Finisher: DaLy
Overall Vote: L.I. 6 & DalyLyricalVillain 4

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Da had the best punches and consistant flow because of his vocab and extreamly good rhymes. The other verse was weak and this battle was taken over because da other verse lacked multies, punches and just a week performance overall no offence to the other player

uppin for votes... lets get more votes on this shit homeys dont sleep on this...1

DaLyrical u came good..got the multis on this
didnt catch any punches tho or anything that stood out
no offence on your verse playa
LI, nuthing special either but a simple verse that had some whit and
alright wordplay...close battle
But Dalyrical gets this for hittin LI Harder

good luck both

hahahahahahaha lmfao....srry dalyricalvillain but u didnt win this....these people dont no how to vote.....uppin......dalyrical u got potenital but u def didnt take this and no im not bitching.....

WOW...IS THAT RECORD FERREAL...32-6...NOT IN THIS BATTLE
OPENER:LI....THIS IS THE ONLY REALLY HOT SHYT U HAD IN UR VERSE
CLOSER:VILLIAN.....
PUNCHES:VILLIAN...
FLOW:LI
VOTE:VILLIAN...HIS PUNCHES HIT HARDER IN THIS MATCH...AND HE JUS CAME WAY HARDER.....
I WONT POLL ON THIS UNTIL YALL VOTE ON THIS...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126411

haha... funny ish right here...


But anyways... Da. You say you're straight off the top and not premeditated... when you used some weak ass punches and some plkayed out shit... You could have had some nice punches in there but you worded them shitty. No personals at all, and thats what kills a verse... your flow was choppy too.

LI, The flow was there, you came a little weak, but had more original punches. It flowed and rolled right off of the tounge. And you had 1 alright personal and one that could have been worded and set up better. The list could have been set up better and worded differently, and the one about him sayin hes juss jokin was alright.

I give this to LI for having hte only personals... better flow, and better structure and more original punches.

You herbs need to stop voting.

yo i like that reggie miller line i saw that on the highlights and in the game...last minute STUFF lmfao that was sick..but hea good battle dalyrical pretty good shit from a newb good vocab and ur structure was aiight..u had good flow and ok punches your meta's were there and good personals..LI your shit was off the hook llol specially with the layup line...DAYUM..lmfao good shit good punches good flow good structure metas...everything

vote: LI

aight uppin for votes...dont sleep on this ish...vote homeys

omg, lyrical killed him. how you gonna ingore that? lyrical had strong punches regardless of what yall say. do you actually read? his vocab was way more complex. if you needed to read the definition of inept you shouldnt be voting. he also has a stronger flow.
i wasnt feeling L.I. ryhming that with wack and dude with through
good battle yall
vote: Da Villian

LyRicaLViLLain had a betta verse the battle was close but L got this

lyricalvillain

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can you finish this battle for me vote on this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=126933

yo i think this was close

LI- you had the flow but you came weak there was no hard punches to your shit at all ther personals were not even good man ok period for real

Lyrical- you need to work on flow to get your punches to connect more ok man you need to work on that man but your punches stuck that is the only way you won but FUCKIN BEARLY WON thats it one more better punch annd you would have lost

v/lrical

return the favor link is in the sig

Villin nice flow it raw cool man yo rhymes came in
at the times and they were good good shit them theres
struture u could do much better but still good
punches aight that all i got to say 4 that

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This was freakin on sided. I aint dyckrydin like most of them do. But the newbie was not impressive at all, I see L.I didnt even try hard...but it comes to the fact that L.I verse was betta overall. The layup line just killed it.....

V: L.I

BAR BY BAR ...
LI :
Just look at his style, no wonder he aint even respected...
Your rhymes are just like Reggie Miller's layup, rejected...
Nice opener (7\10)
Not one emcee on your win list is good so stop reppin that...
Have enough wins for elevated but never comes cuz hes wack...
Decent bar (6\10)
Unknown on the site, wen he posts no one even notice he spoke...
Can't score wit girls, only time he got ass wen his toilet paper broke...
Yet again anuther decent bar (7\10)
Not worth this much effort, but ill continue til hes gone...
He's the herb who robs a bank with the Safety on...*
ok bar (6/10)
Shut ya mouth, and dont speak until spoken to...
Feels bad for dissin me so he said 'jus jokin dude'...
yet again anuther decent bar (7/10)
total= 33 out of possible 50


Villian :
32 and 6 this nigga think i'll flow intimidated//
Every verse he ever spit was stolen or premeditated//
ok opener smewhat played (5/10)
Im fresh created, Battlin for the heavy weight title//
Puttin L.I. in his grave in this RB ghetto recital//
Bad bar didnt flow (4/10)
Throw a bridal, shower for this hoe cake, cuz he's a wife//
Straight addicted to these dicks you're fuckin swallowin for life//
Bad line yet again wheres the punch!?(4/10)
You dont want strife, Like i said leave L.I. in his death bed//
You're LYRICALLY INEPT, ill leave the voters and the ref dead//(L.I.)
oK LIKED THE LYRIC.INEPT. rest was decent(6/10)
Cuz readin this is cancerous, hazardous to yo health//
Cuz i'm a killa in this rap game, read this and you'll kill yourself//
OK your tlakin yourself up get at him!! bAD AND PLAYED(5/10)
tOTAL=24 OF possible 50
Vote = l.i.

Just look at his style, no wonder he aint even respected...
Your rhymes are just like Reggie Miller's layup, rejected...
8...gud line, nice meta!!
Not one emcee on your win list is good so stop reppin that...
Have enough wins for elevated but never comes cuz hes wack...
7...gud line, but not as gud as ure opener!!
Unknown on the site, wen he posts no one even notice he spoke...
Can't score wit girls, only time he got ass wen his toilet paper broke...
8...lmao!! funny line!!
Not worth this much effort, but ill continue til hes gone...
He's the herb who robs a bank with the Safety on...*
7...funny line again!!
Shut ya mouth, and dont speak until spoken to...
Feels bad for dissin me so he said 'jus jokin dude'...
6...weakest punch but still aight!!


32 and 6 this nigga think i'll flow intimidated//
Every verse he ever spit was stolen or premeditated//
6...weak opener!!
Im fresh created, Battlin for the heavy weight title//
Puttin L.I. in his grave in this RB ghetto recital//
6...weak punch again, u shud get personal!!
Throw a bridal, shower for this hoe cake, cuz he's a wife//
Straight addicted to these dicks you're fuckin swallowin for life//
5...weak, homo shit played god damn it!!
You dont want strife, Like i said leave L.I. in his death bed//
You're LYRICALLY INEPT, ill leave the voters and the ref dead//(L.I.)
7...probably ure best line!!
Cuz readin this is cancerous, hazardous to yo health//
Cuz i'm a killa in this rap game, read this and you'll kill yourself//
6...weak closer, ure battle overall weak!!

POINTS TOTALS
L.I. - 36/50
DaLyricalVillain - 30/50

V/ - L.I.