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Genie Vs L.I. (Crew Battle Topical)
Aight Yo.
Some changes. Hex was taking too long. Replacement is Genie. Rules: No bar limit. Topic: Past, Present And Phuture. GOodluck. |
[A teenager, who has had no success died; he had his whole future ahead of him though. how he died was not important, but what he had to say afterwards is. *Tarrot cards move*]
An angels box confronts me to dispute the grasp Attained cruel plots, to reminisce my future past. Born late eighties. Four years on hadn't ate lately The shapes take me into the frame of one picture Lifes a symbol; And I'd learnt this strong stricture Of the kindles, in thoughts and the way we see it Maybe leave this; when looks in the hazy see mist Plomped as a rock, while the social tides erode me The faintest knock, Then roughly defined so boldly Self insulted; My noodle is more shook than a wok Crook than a cop My cherry was took from the top Look what i got, now searching more than paradise Used to believe; that the god ensured the parasite A coward’s life; Had me running away from things Constantly precious feelings was astrayed on limbs Ashamed to bring this and set 'part the needy you Was branded more twisted than Archimedes screw I stand with flaws, not under feet but in my head Luck gone by dead, So that i see light as shadows Site in shallows then not have delight with gallows Despite the hallows, I prayed but was preyed upon Brave and Strong. Was everything i craved so long Like a snowball My Problem tumbles and grew more Feeling so small I make microbes massive.Too sure Nights so passive; From when its active in calming I wasn't content with content; had this emblaming. Let dust settle, but brains come out when i sneeze Sounds a kettle with whistles at girls;Then i freeze Like ice cubes: and when theres heat I end melted 'erm nice boobs' is what i say and they tend felt it As an attack. ways was tachy like drafted stitches Viking to See; Dead then they have rafted glitches Might still not know, Because Im never understood Walking in these forests, i'm here too lumber would And never do: Now looking back on that lame tone To lever you Can't be done because of gravestone With the maison;Biographer to chipping those chips On my shoulder, Now my spirits drippping with drips Its All Over. . . |
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Waiting for. L.I. To Post. |
dis lookz like a good battle ya need to hurry up n battle tho i'll vote wen ya do
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lol L.I must be scared out of his wits...holla mufucker...
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LoL L.I. IF You Don't Merk Dis Wack Ass Topical...Damn..This Cat Should Be Cake For You..
~R~ |
Stop The bulllshitten every1 and R do u even know who Genie is ..hahahaha....u remember old WL...hahaha....and u callin him wack!!.....that deserves a laugh...haha
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spit
sorry for being so long...i was on a lil vacation over the weekend...ill key it up right now...
Intro... Had the dream to make it big and would do anything to get there... But dreams were crushed and didnt no if his desire would be repaired... With history in the making the kid had no idea of what he'd become... Making the right choices, got him places of riches from scum... Here the stroy goes that has been passed down for many years... To inspire any kid with a dream to show not one ounce of fear... And We Start... Beginning of high school, he was introduced to the rap game... Started off rough, put down by others but their hate was tamed... Learned how to accept the beef and started makin diss tracks... Didnt like the way he sounded so wrote lyrics behind they backs... Elevated his game and worked at it each and every day... He had his desire and wouldnt be affected by what they say... After three months of work, he started to freestyle on his walk home... Had complex rhymes and through this his true potential was shown... Brought his friends over for friendly battles to perfect the sport... Overcame that obstacle and was ready to enter the hip hop port... Went into school and never bragged about the skills he possessed... Merked emcee by emcee and soon realized by all that he was blessed... Going On To Now... He now is on mixtapes trying to get his name out to labels... All the haters are now begging for advice, hes turned the tables... Never holds anything against them for he has the right mentality... Thankful for the life he has and always living head on with reality... Searching for a girl and maintaining his level of intellect... Even with his hard work people are showing disrespect... Started back on the diss tracks and that hit off his career... Got noticed my labels and had him grinning ear to ear... Signs with Roc A Fella, his future is now in their hands... Has the hit single 'Bombs' and tommorow his album lands... Shits looking good for him and still is never conceited... Earned respect from all and is lovin how he's treated... Down The Road... His future is shining and he made all the right moves... Kept his mind intact, now kids thats what you gotta do... He moved on to great things, and all it took was his heart... He had his whole game plan drawn out from the very start... Got a wife and 4 kids, their lives have been touched... Six platinum albums and he is honored by them so much... Never missed a beat of his life and every breath he took was cherished... One of the best and his essence remained pure even after he perished... |
Yea Deadly He Wack..Your Wack...I Mean Neither Of You Two Have Elevated A Bit Since Warlords...But I Have..So What Does That Say About You Two?
~R~ |
I don't know what that says about us. But it says you shouting your mouth off means you've got a net ego. which is damn funny! also you needing to tell people that your good and rubbish us. Is just pathetic, And you don't know who i used to be, so how can you say i aint' elevated. Your little net crew is a bunch of nob rots.
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Rofl @ Restricted...
...Your wack, gay and you pack a net ego biger than mine Grap the vasseline can and rub your arse hole cuz your gona get bummed.... |
Lol restricted....u cant hack teh fuckin fact that u aint the big shot no more...fuck man u lost ur title..there is so many peeps who av stopped lickin ur arse..u cant hack it..y dunt u battle genie...and back list all ur d/r fuck heads..
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Yo Every1 Stop bullshittin.................THis is a battle GET THA FUCK OUT OF HERE.
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i wold vote in here but it seems like everone has me blakc listed or somethin becuase it dont let me vote and say that someone dont want me to vote
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^^ did u PM strobe or cprogress and tell them to make u a registered voter and shit...cuz than u can poll vote in here....UP...
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ok...genie...ur sturcture cldnt be any beta...mulits were kickin off like woah!!vocab cld be worked on and also wordplay..overal..9/10
L.I.flow wasnt thur coz u didnt keep the same shylbol count in every line...structure was nice..vocab also cld be worked on..overll 8/10.. Both nice But Genie Was A Different Class...keep Em' Cumin'..Pz v/genie Crew vote removed |
Aight. This dont count because is a crew vote.
But Up on this. No Bitchin in this crew battle. Only votes expected. |
Aiyo One Last Thing..
Aiyo HeXen Who Merked You Twice? That Was Me..Battle Verse and Topical LMAO....Yea I Will Battle Genie In A Topical... Nice Drops Here...Just Uppin Dis Shit..Mad Sleeping.. ~R~ |
yo R man no h8..but dunt shit on genie wen u dunt even no him..aiiight.no beef
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Up yo. How come no1 votin in topicals anymore dammit.
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BREAKDOWN
Genie ure verse was tight son, u had to have the best fuckin structure i have ever seen and ure flow was dope as fuck. u stayed on topic and it was a interesting verse to read. u had sum gud wordplay throughout the verse and a fair amount of multis dropped in there to. overall a top drop ... near perfect!! OVERALL 9.5/10 L.I. ure flow was gud playa as always but genie had u beat their and on the structure. ure structure was gud but the lines weren't all perfect same length. u dropped a nice verse and u to stayed on topic from start to finish. i liked every part, it all had sum gud wordplay in there but some was pretty basic and there wasn't many multis if any that i cud find. a tight drop but this time i think u were bested only just tho!! OVERALL 9/10 V/ - Genie |
Genie....u had awsome structer i liked how everything was lined up...gud shit...ur wordplay was good through out the whole verse...u stayed on topic......other than that very good drop.....
L.I......u verse was good to.....ur stucture was gud as usual but i think he took this catagory...ur wordplay was nice u stayed on topic overall very good verse overall i think genie took this he had better stucture thats all i can think of why he took it cuz both verses were hot....it was pretty even through out but when it came to structure he took it keep em comin homies |
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first off..great verses by both,genie had tite structure,cudnt fault it..id say l.i less so but his structure woz tite also....jus unlucky 4 u genies woz bout as tite as it gets.
both cats verses flowed really neat,very easy to read n follow..wasnt much in it there. i think overall genie had the beta wordplay,mad creativeness..again l.i woz tite also jus that little bit behind..not much though. multies were blowing off from both cats wit genie droppin more complex ones. overall genie i cudnt fault his verse...was prob the tightest ive seen 9.5/10 l.i-great drop also..wudve bin enough to beat probably anyone else... only thing id say is add more complex wordplay,n creativity. 8.5/10 cnt vote yet....but genie took this props 2 both though...jus keep it up peeps |
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genie- dope verse my friend. im gonna have to agree with everyone else in regards to your struc.......shit was smooth. you had a nice indepth verse and i was impressed by your multies and vocab. sick drop bruh. i look forward to peeping more from you.
l.i.- very nice work as well. i dug your story, it was quite amusing my friend. overall, i liked your verse and think that you got some talent. i dont think that your spit was on the same level as genies, but you still fucked shit up. keep up the good work playboy. my vote- genie sick topical battlecats. much love fellas. one. s.v...................c.s. |
i guess my vote wont count though. nice again, good job.
s.v. |
Aint 3-0=KO?
ama ask strobe. If not Up |
uppp
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Up.
You Imputent Hoes. |
fuck up there........
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Aight Check It...
Genie: 7/10 I Actually Read Your Peice and It Had Nice Flow. Structure Looked Awful Until I Read It Closely...Nice Imagery and Nice Use Of Vocab. Stay Up Pimpin.. L.I.: 6/10 Your Flow Was A Lil OFf...Which Made You Lose This Battle...You Were Tied With Emotion, Vocab, and Shit...But HIs Flow Just Upped Yours... Vote - Genie ~R~ |
uppin for the final vote....finish this off.....
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yea, Genie got this one.
he had better vocab, and good use of words in his verse. I liked your flow too. Very good job. Tight shit. Li, yours was good too. You had a decent flow, but his was a little better. So hE gets this one. Good try tohuhg v/Gen |
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