DaCROZofHB vs Illest Sin
 

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no d/r, crew or hate votez

5 votes to win

u spit first

....croz i think he saw ur battle vs. me an ran like i did, i ain't neva battlin u gain, well dun

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illest im gunna drop somethin and if u want u can reply or u gettin dq'd

yo

I blow dis NIggas brains out wit my fuckin 22/
Stomp all over dis muthafuckas rhymes, like Im Shaquille O'Neal's Shoe/
Lyrics are so terrible, I think Im gon put dem down as a Felony/
PIgs need mo room in da cells, you da reason they lettin go of R Kelly/
Wanna bang wit da Best, but dis nigga don't even got a scar on his Chest/
Tryin to get a deal Shady, ran into Diddy signin you as da new bands Ness/
New to Rap Battles, so dis nigga just started Sinnin/
MuthaFucka, I've been hott since da Begginnin, Rims are still Spinnin/
Beatin me homie, is like seein a White Kenya Woman/
Reppin dat you Sin wit da Illest, dawg Im gon give you that/
But you took ya name da wrong way, saw ya bendin over Cancer Cats/
Every Muthafucka, White, Black, Skinny and Chubby/
Now you regrettin, cuz now We callin you Magic Johnson's New Buddy/

sorry man, got caught up in sumthin else... I'll spit

Aight here it is... It's an off day today..


You talkin all tough, wantin things to get rough,
That only happens in your room fuckin your boy named Chuck.
Say you been in tha game foreva? Yo rims ain't bling,
Dis cat must be wack, he only sixteen!
Dis game is all familiar, but you're confused wid sumthin else,
I've fucked up catz for years, that list bout to include yoself.
My lyrics are beyond yo comprehension, maybe you can study them in detention,
but you've probably neva been in it, you a good boy an alwayz pay attention.
This shit is crazy, you're verses and flow are crap,
What you tryin ta be? I neva heard of homo who can rap.
These battles always get voted on so slow,
Just like the movie, your world will end 'The Day After Tomorrow'.

This shit is crazy, you're verses and flow are crap,
What you tryin ta be? I neva heard of homo who can rap


haha

that was quite weak guys. elevate yourselves. vote goes to the first guy,
his overall style was betta. no.2 had a betta punch (the one on the vote above) which made me laugh, but the overall was weaker. thats.my.word

hit up my battle for me http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127213

vote goes to Dacroz......your flow was better along with your structure and your punches you could work on your structure a little bit and try rewording your punches so that they hit harder......pc man

uppin dis battle

DaCROZ

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10

IllesT

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 8/10

v/ IllesT

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Uppin dis bitch

punches:no one
personals: illest
creativity:dacroz
word play:dacroz

vote dacorz.. weak battle

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Dacroz got this one with a long shot his intro was crazier his lyrics where deadly in his ending was mad. so dacroz for my vote.

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Yes this battle goes to..illest because of his punches i think his punches took this battle....he had ok wordplay but the punches won..work on the structure man....Now for dacroz u need had good struc but not personals or not alot of wordplay....u need to work on punches make them hit harder next time u elevate come back and battle him again..ight

Vote-ill

uppin dis battle and please explain the votes ive had like 3 dq'd...thx ill hit up ur shit

ight this battle was kinda close, i liked IllesT SiN's flow but he didnt have very hard punches, pretty weak. croz ur flow alright, needs improvement, but u came out strong and finished pretty well. both of u have lots of room to imporve on this. vote croz

uppin

uppin please

uppin dis ish

Uppin again...

Im goin with illest here because overall he had better punches.. and punches win battles...

Sin had some multis, better then DaCroz
Better punches were thrown by Sin

Sin took this thing, even though you both need elevation, anyways my vote goes to SIN

uppin dis battle

Illest all the way, Il iked those rhymes and flow , nice

since i aint crew wit any of diz peeps i can vote

Flow-DaCroz u started off hot and finished weak. It was an ok flow but i hav seen better from u like da battle wit me. Illest there was maybe 1 bar where u messed up, da one about being a good boy. I didnt like it.

Punches-DaCroz like i said i hav seen better from u, u didnt bring ur A game, weak punches, Illest Sin ok but not great but better then Da Croz

Complexity and Origanlity-Diz verses were both mediocre. No multies or wordplays both of you got to include these to elevate

Overall-Not to shabby verses, DaCroz u brought it way harder when you were battlign me i guess u werent in da mood to write, well Illest had a way better worse then u

Vote Illest Sin