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deadly vision vs. l.i.
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
Blah!!........1st it was Enygma...now..L.I...hahaha
Checkity check. |
should be a nice one...check in.....
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Ok dammit.............
i see is due 2day. erm...ama spit a no show verse 4 lines..if he dont spit on time. if he does ama do my basic 10 lines quick. ama be on waitin. Blah!! C'mon u said this should be a nice one! Why u scared to spit, little 14 yrs old son. 34-6?U battle noobs, so u think u electrifyin must be yo genetic buildupis, u wack stop denyin. blah!! I explained my reasons. |
Blah!! i guess he aint droppin cuz.....its almost mornin.
4:35 am pacific for me i waited. |
and on rb time its over 12:00am
I guess L.I didnt show. Am out. Close this. |
it's only thursday he has till tonight to post his verse
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lol at DV....deadline's tonight buddy....i thought i explained that to you on aim....
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Meh, he just gotta edit his verse....
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Oh aight.
I missunderstood it differently cuz when i talked to L.I on aim....i asked em arent we suppose to spit .....on wensday..lol but yea holla. |
yo deadly get on aim if you see this....how many lines u wanna do?.......
okay ill edit this and post my verse....DV im doin ten so if u can jus do ten...u down wit that?.... Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed… Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads… Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type… On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe… Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued… Quote:
I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league… Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing… Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing… Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover… If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over… |
Attenchuuun someone about to get M-e-r-k-e-d.
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^kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits.. Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it.. I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn.. fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns.. Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?... Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless.... Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative... And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit.... =M-e-r-k-e-d= Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".. You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate.. Blah.....If u dont understand personals. dont vote |
v/ L.I.
Made more sense.. less filler.. harder punches.. better use of personals.. flowed fine.. opener an closer got off to a good start an wrapped up well respectively.. used the quote well.. DV.. alot of played concepts.. don`t need to use "" to emphasise words neither.. seemed there was alot of filler in there.. unlike ya opponent you opened an closed horribly with ya last lines. |
V/ L.I.
Both of y'all dropped some tight verse but i have to say i was feelin L.I. more in his drop. both y'all had sum gud flow in ure spits and the structure was gud in both. there was obvious punches and personals in both verse, but i think that L.I. was hitting harder most of the time and his punches had better connection. also DV came less original in his verse with a couple of played out lines. overall L.I. just came a lot stronger with harder personals and punches and showed more originality. |
Up hoes.
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im kind of cool with both dudes so this vote is honest
V / deadly vision i think his mulites came harder and that his disses were better than li's i felt like li had some enormously strethced lines that kind of fucked his verse up.. deadly vision came harder with the shit also.. li had some good personals but i dont think they matched up to deadlies punchlines |
aswell as i am down with both L.I. and Deadly
I felt that deadlys verse was a little better then L.I.'s ........his flow was better along with his structre and his punches was hittin harder along with sticking.......i enjoyed both verse butthe fact remains that his verse was better so im going to vote for deadly vor a better verse v/Deadly |
Up.
for people that kno how to judge a battle. Instead of riding dyck. 2-2 |
Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads… this was kinda played with the heavy loads but still nice creativty 7/10 Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type… On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe… sorry I thought this was weak dint name I title? 4/10 Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued… Quote: Originally Posted by DeadlyVisionL.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league… LOL good line much better 8/10 Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing… Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing… erm a bit played a bit good I think it was a 7/10 Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover… If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over… erm that was another ok/played line . . but weaker 6/10 32/50 kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits.. Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it.. that was a pretty cool line 7/10 I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn.. fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns.. erm a bit played I`ve heard the tax returns many times 5/10 Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?... Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless.... Nope to much fillers here 3/10 Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative... And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit.... lol good line 8/10 =M-e-r-k-e-d= Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".. You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate.. erm this was pretty not good I don’t like the style or smuin and “ doing that isi enoying 6/10 29/50 Good battle you both my boys but L.I had less fillers and he came harder don’t non of you be mad @ me I hate voting when two people im cool with battle lol I feel bad V/L.I |
Ight, since I know both of you and we coo and all, I'm going to break it down good for yeah...
Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed… Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads… Really good intro, flow was on point Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type… On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe… was an ok line, didn't hit very hard though Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued… Quote: Originally Posted by DeadlyVision L.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league… Really tight line, but was off topic, remember this is a battle Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing… Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing… Hot shit, really tight, fa sho Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover… If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over… Really tight hardhitting punch, but should have been used earlier kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits.. Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it.. Pretty good opener, punch wasn't that hardhitting though I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn.. fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns.. Hahaha, that was a funny ass line, tight punch Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?... Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless.... Ok line, but punch was not hardhitting Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative... And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit.... Tight transition line, really kept it flowing with word play =M-e-r-k-e-d= Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".. Once again, another wordplay line, similar to my style You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate.. Ok closer, I got what you was sayin, but didn't hit hard for me In closing, I believe DV won this one because he was very consistent with his flow. MCs have come to think that you can win a battle on punchlines alone, which is not true. True elevated mcs rely on different parts of his technique instead of just one. v-DV |
3-3 tied up...UPPING..........
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Im still not sure on what basis L.I managed to get votes on this one.
Flow- Deadlyvision by far Punches- Deadlvision by a fair way Personals- Practically even Complexity - Deadlyvision I didn't like the simplicity of L.I's flow, the sylable coutnwas fucked and there wans't no shemeing of rhymes. But theres no hate here, just there truth. Peace to both writers. v/deadlyvision |
^theres no way his vote can count...first off it aint explained well....second off im in a crew battle with him....thrid off he is in DV's crew....i think u would agree DV...still 3-3...
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Aight I feel what you sayin.
3-3 Up you fuckers...lol |
breakdown for l.i:
flow:nice flow i don't have problems with it 7/10 volcab:alright marginaly better then average 6/10 punches:alot of lines mainly of average quality fav line,"Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…" alright job 7/10 overall:20/30 breakdown for deadly vision: flow: some of the rhyming and multis were alittle shady but overall alright 7/10 volcab:good job nothing too advance though 6/10 punches:some alright personals nothing too strong though fav line,"Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".." the big thing was the amount of them not being up around that of l.i 6/10 overall:19/30 vote--real close battle one of the better ones this week good job from both of you my vote is for l.i though |
Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads… HMMMMM..DONT SEE NOTHIN IN HERE Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type… On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe… AIGHT I GUESS Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued… Quote: Originally Posted by DeadlyVision L.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol HOW IS THIS A DISS/ HE IS TALKIN TO U I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league… THIS IS GAY,NO PUNCH Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing… Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing… FINALLY A PUNCH...NOT BAD Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover… If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over… WOW,ANOTHER PUNCH......2 PUNCHES IN ONE L.I. VERSE,THATS A FIRST Attenchuuun someone about to get M-e-r-k-e-d. Quote: Originally Posted by L.I. I Am on the net to pick up chicks... ^kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits.. U SHOULD'VE MADE A PUNCH WITH BARE HITS....SPARE WITS IS JUST A MULTI,NOTHING HITS IN THERE Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it.. OK I GUESS I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn.. fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns.. TAX LINES ARE PLAYED Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?... Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless.... I DIDNT LIKE THIS.....U WERE CONCENTRATING TOO MUCH ON MULTIES....U USUALLY HAVE PUNCHES..... Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative... And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit.... DIDNT LIKE IT. =M-e-r-k-e-d= Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".. I DIDNT LIKE THIS AT ALL... You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate.. NOT FEELIN THIS HMMMMMM..VISION,I JUST WASNT FEELING UR VERSE,...I DUNNO WHY ITS NOT UR USUAL STYLE.....L.I. KIND OF SURPRISED ME....HE ACTUALLY HAD 2 DECENT PUNCHES.....VISION,THERE REALLY WASNT ANYTHING THAT STOOD OUT TO ME.......IMMA HAVE TO GO WITH L.I. |
ayo deadly had some pretty nice ish up in there I was able to feel his on a more gangsta level and a hardhittin level, he had nice struc, wordplay, and the punches was aight.
LI was nice also his was easy to understand, struc was aight, word play was aight, and the overall battle was good, but because DV came harder, my vote goes to him. V/DV. |
I've voted now return the fav. please, thanks alot.
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5-4 l.i. wins close match though
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