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verbal violence vs.. accomplishemnt
yo rules as in call out u spit first aight holla back~1~
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spit urs bitch
this is a text battle, so its puzzling how you take me verbally kid you heard of me, of course cuz i kill all, and your just and herb to me two dashes at ends of lines this lil kid, child stylins// this kid is rated pg, only known for mild violence// read this verse over and over just so your heads filled wit me cuz you battled all noobs, now try to take someone wit credibility get yo piece of da pie, cuz wit yo skills its easy to die bring tears to your eyes with this shit alone is simply eaten you alive search deep kid and attempt to sum up your killer dissen but your verse sounds to me nothin but a ken kannif intermission |
im bout to tag my fame all over ya name//
ya lines was weak but whats to blaim// ya knowin for ko.'s but thats about to change// im gonna flip ya scripts make my verbs crucs ya body and break ya vertabrea// i aint hugh heffner i dont playboy// im gona play u like a childs toy// cuz ur a hater plus a masterbatior flamed your ass see u later// your luke sky walker and im darth vador// sorry but i accidently cut your dick off with my light savor// rappin gurls like u ill do for a favor// maybe someday ull be a great as me but im still greater// rappin foos like you is bordum// i think i won now its time for you to get off da forum// |
aight now yall start to vote and be fare aight holla at ya boi~1~
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uppin for some votes on dis herbish shit
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yo yall need to voye up for realz ight holla bak~1~
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up this penisiss
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lmao i think they aint hearin us dawg so once again yall need tp be uppin them votes aight holla bak~1~
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yo i wuz feelin dis battle it wuz tight acc had sum nice ass punches but i think i got to give dis one 2 verbal violence jus becuz he came out hard as hell
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this is a text battle, so its puzzling how you take me verbally
kid you heard of me, of course cuz i kill all, and your just and herb to me 6...kind of played second line!! two dashes at ends of lines this lil kid, child stylins// this kid is rated pg, only known for mild violence// 7...pretty funny playa!! read this verse over and over just so your heads filled wit me cuz you battled all noobs, now try to take someone wit credibility 6...pretty basic wordplay!! get yo piece of da pie, cuz wit yo skills its easy to die bring tears to your eyes with this shit alone is simply eaten you alive 6...aight punch, u need to step up ure punches!! search deep kid and attempt to sum up your killer dissen but your verse sounds to me nothin but a ken kannif intermission 7...pretty funny closer!! im bout to tag my fame all over ya name// ya lines was weak but whats to blaim// 4...weak man, too basic!! ya knowin for ko.'s but thats about to change// im gonna flip ya scripts make my verbs crucs ya body and break ya vertabrea// 3...second line stretched to fuck and the rhymin was off!! i aint hugh heffner i dont playboy// im gona play u like a childs toy// 4...fuckin weak, this ain't nursery rhyme time!! cuz ur a hater plus a masterbatior flamed your ass see u later// your luke sky walker and im darth vador// 4...consistently weak!! sorry but i accidently cut your dick off with my light savor// rappin gurls like u ill do for a favor// maybe someday ull be a great as me but im still greater// 4...WEAK DAMN IT!! rappin foos like you is bordum// i think i won now its time for you to get off da forum// 3...weak closer!! POINTS TOTALS accomplishment - 32/50 verbal violence - 22/60 V/ - accomplishment |
uppin for more votes please so just take ya time off and vote damn
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yo yall we need more votes if ya could pleaze
aight holla back~1~ |
Im going to give this to accomplishment, but to be totally honest you both were terrible.
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easy fred i would destroy you i came week on dis bitch cuz i saw his shit..
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yo i thought this was a decent battle...accomplishments flow and structure were definatly better, and yo closer was a nice hit and had the humor....oh, and dont worry about airforcefred, just check out my battle against him..actually, vote on it..
vote: accomplishment |
uppin ........
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uppin for votes man lets close this shit
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Nothing exceptional from either. Specially from the hype I heard about accomplishment. Both openers were pretty bad. Wordplay - accomp, flow - Verbal. Alot of Accomp's lines seemed played, not just that one solo mentioned. First read through of verbals i didnt think change rhymed with vertebrae, but the whole line flows smooth after the second read, and it works. closer - tie.
vote: Verbal. |
ight this is how i see this battle..
both were kinda weak flow: verbal punches: if any accomp personals: werent any buy verbal gets it for trying to hit em.. mutlies: none met@phors: accomp complexity/structure: accomp both spits were avrage.. but accomp gets my vote \\// ACCOMP verbal if ya came wif some punches u would a had it |
uppin for more votes on this peeps aight holla bak~1~
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vocab accomplishment vv's could use work
flow accomp barely both were good structure accomp by far vv u need mad elevation here try 2 make ur lines more even punches accomp none of vv's even hit lol so work on this 2 personals i only saw 1 vote accomp for a better structure vocab and punches |
Both rappers came strong... great battle. But verbal v, hit harder wit better punches. accomplishment came out swingin like he was the sh*t, but ain't really say nuttin.
winner.... verbal violence |
yo uppin for more votes on dis right here aight holla bak~1~
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like i told the other four emcees i'm getting tight with the voting cuz no one votes on my battle but yet i vote on your so before i vote on your battle can one of you please
vote on tha battle on my sig and i promise i will return tha fava |
Alright that battle was pretty close in the beggining. After I checked out both verses I went with My man accomplishment. Verbal V.s shit was pretty hot too, but u started to lose me with the constant change of structure. Then some of the lines were just to simple. Good battle though.
VOTE: accomplishment. |
This battle was probably one of the better ones Ive seen on this site so far. After checkin out both though I gave it to my man accomplishment. His structure seemed to flow all the way through. Verbals shit was hot too but started to break off in structure half way through. Then some of the lines was too simple. But both of u was tight.
VOTE: accomplishment PLEASE VOTE ON THIS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130067 |
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