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kkkhater vs. Atmosphere
Topic: Wut you do while in a battle in Iraq!!!
Rules: no d/r no c/v no h/v min iz 15 max iz 24 check in asap... spit due: 2 hours afta check in if u up to it..if u only want one hour den itz fine wit me..jjst say so!!! 3-0 iz ko |
alright iam checkin in and oh yea someone check out this battle so it can close plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385 |
yo iam hitin the dirt of this corrupt battle//
shootin my bullets and givin the enemy a taggle// storming the houses of these dam packies// thinkin to myself that our enemy is lacky// gettin pot shot 24/7// but U hun them down givin them my number 7-7// sittin in the heat and eating these dam MRE's// but every day a close friend of mine is bleeding for his nation// wishin I WAS home and livin the life of fear// but I can not help but have a tear for the people// taking the bodies and packin them up as poltery// but the night of the raids the enemy got hell for their pay of the war lottery// we hunt that bitch who was the terroist CIA// but when we caught his ass he could'nt think of anything to say but wishin he was barring with the men// so before u say we are not in the war for a reason// all u are doing is teasin freedom// |
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im here in da dessert, tryin ta dodge bullets//
I've jst been put at gun point hopin that man won't pull it// Then my hommie boy took his rifle n hit him in da back// Den I did da same, shot him, den hid him in a sack// Im in a war battle right now, n only army troops in my side// You would be surprised if you seen us n dem pakies collide// First I hear bullets passin by my head, only inches away// These pussies always miss, these fuckin bitches are gay// They jst can't aim, them lame packies r insane// I'd might as well jst walk up to dem swingin my chain// I bet if i was only 1 foot away, dem bitches would still miss// Cuz forealz, who could kill a emcee dats full of illness// Now I hear dat my pic is on every poster in every city// Sayin they'll get an award if dey stick a bullet in me// All because I've already killed more den one hundred people// Now they say im like Bin Laden, except jst way more lethal// But now forever that memory will be stuck in my mind// Regret in my life now for how many ppl i killed at dat time// Dis fucken George W. Bush sed we only fight for freedem//(freedom) Why should i, wen we don't have it, fuck him we don't really need em// And right now, shyt, why should I even believe him// since im in a place where only blood and sand is wut i breathe in// (like breathe sand in your boddy) Im tellin you, lvin in dis crazy war iz like livin in hell// Except sometimes its hard to believe wuts real or not, u jst can't tell// |
sorry bout addin extra two lines..i messed up on my line count
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wow weak topical but atmos deffinly got this
KKKhater you better be commin hard agaist me in the league man |
ahhhhh I am tryin tho thats all I can say but yea we are uppin for the votes.
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more votes ppl...well atleast some vote!!!!
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yo dis battle wuz tight atmo had a better flow and ryhme scheme but kkkhater took this one with overall better punches personals and humor
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we are still upppppppppppppppppppppppppin for votes.
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I thought atmo carried a better flo but..the punches where jus hit harder through KKK n not even harder, jus mo direct...
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good battle
gotta give it to atmospher cause she a chick and i like the shit that was wrote
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dis battle was medioacre i mean nothin special atmo had sum good personals and shit but da war goes 2 kkk cuz he layed it down
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ok people we are still uppppin for votes..............
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uppin
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yo, i think thiz battle wuz good, had SUM nice, not as many as i'd like to see in a battle like thiz, but my vote headin for kkk
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kkk had a betta flow atmosphere u strechted some of ur barz to much
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atmosphere did his thing on this battle. kkkhater I wasn't fallowing u to well. I didn't seem to have structure.
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iight peeps we are still uppin on votes do not fall asleep on us....
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ok we are still uppppppppppppppppppin 4 votes peeps.
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ok come on people plz vote so we can close this were still uppin.
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this batlle was just aight...ive seen better atmosphere won on flow and structure, but kkk beat her in da personals in humor....ya i gotta admit that was a gay topic but if i had to pick a winner id take kkk in dis one.
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ok people we are still uppin for votes it's almost a week since this battle been open lol.
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lol..now dur is no votes at all..hahaha..see ppl...now vote wit good votes...like explain it well..ight!!!
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YES EXPLAIN this time plz and plz vote comeo one where uppppppin.
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LMAO...i was like..Ain't no body throwin punches...topical..gotcha
okay...breakdown FLOW: Tie RHYMES: Atmos VOCAB: None IMAGERY: Tie WORDPLAY: None SUBJECT: KKK (he stayed on topic...didn't self-glorify in a damn topical? WTF Stand out lines: KKK (change ur damn name) so before u say we are not in the war for a reason// all u are doing is teasin freedom// Stand out lines(ATMO) I bet if i was only 1 foot away, dem bitches would still miss// Cuz forealz, who could kill a emcee dats full of illness// ^^ FOR BEING AMAZINGLY WACK...this is a topical and ur talking about how Ill u are? WTF? I ain't neva seen anything like dat before..and I hope to never see it again **I'm givin this to KKK simply because that self-boasting shit killed it for me...the topic is about war and ur talkin about how ill of an emcee u are ugh Vote: KKKhater, if Im not blacklisted |
kkk gotz my vote. i wasnt feeln atmo's shit at all. peace.
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this goes to kkkhater
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aight Atmosphere had her flow on lock & her verse was pretty
good in my opinion.......KKKhater aight you had better punches in my opinion so I vote for you......BLAH! hate the topical ain't feeling it much basically because I think that topic is played for me.................... |
iight we are still uppin for votes people.....................
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iight people we are still uppin but make sure u explain why ok so u do not get dq peace.
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kkkk takes it with good punches and better personals aight peace out !!!!
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kkk takes it.........................
he ahd a better flow............. better punches.................... that's why i think he won... return the favor.... |
yo dis battle wuz interesting nothin too serious thier flows were about and even and so were there personals but when it came down to da punches kkk came a lil harder which gives him the slightest edge ova atmosphere
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