Killah Bwoy Vs deadly rhymez 01
 

lmfao that was my fault..this is the right oen

10 lines
no dr cv or biting
check in
blind spit
no feeding
no stretched lines
dead line :12 AM

checkkin in !!!!!!!!!!!!





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Yo Killah ya crew aint no big star's like Banks n 50 ....
battlein me is a loss for you so just go battle Shitfy... ( SHifty Fingers )

This nigga sayz fuck little i play wit Killah toyz...
man u a jackson fan and u play wit Thrillah Boyz... ( Micheal jackson GAY BOYS )

Yo i Should Re-Z-erect ya brain Re-Inject ya Fame...
cause ill KLIP u make ya ass fly ova spain then leave u like a lion tamed...


My FLowz 2 much fire so u juss end up in da water.... ( HE's Burning )
This is not juss a win for Deadly it was da bwoys 1st Slaughter...

im done with this coward he wuz juss askin for a loss...
u chouldint catch a win from me if i was 1 foot away and just TOSSED...
( TOSSED OVER THE WIN )

aiight fam checkin in..lets go

Like a jammed elevator..elevation for you is a slow process-
battles on my side like inaccurate coin tosses..facin me? must luv losses
I Spit Sick..Get Ripped-quick..you Spits fememine bars..I flip-chicks-
I rip Pricks...Kids tryin to get under my skin..but I flick ticks-
Gotta condensor for christmas but he's wack..can't even "Open Mics"-
Burn this kid leave smoke-in-sight break his jaw ask'm ifhe spoken right-
still on your nurcery rhymes..mase ya eyes i know it hurts-to-be-blind-
light michael jackson voice wen i kilt him i accually heard-him-dis-time-
Fuck That stop tryin to quote-my-rhymes unlike you i wrote-my-lines-
spit a bar everything-WONT-be-fine..get your own mic stop holdin mine-

DAmn u Streched sine of yo bars nice spit nigga good shit but i think i didint get u

i didnt stretch really...uppin.......................

uppin this fam where ther fucks the votes ill retuern the favoru..

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deadly - basic...not that great of a flow...ur closer was decent....it was the only good part of ur spit....u had a concept....but didnt land ur punches....elevate there....need to work on your wordplay, better multi's, personals, and flow.....elevate man....

killa - okay you simply beat his verse....more complex punches....hot opener....good flow....better multis....awesome meta's....good flow....nice spit....and u basically topped his....easy win....ur elevatin fast....props...

vote - killa bwoy

word word uppin this shit fam.......................

yo fam...............uppin this battle come on stop sleeping.

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fam lets go fools..............uppin this ma fucka.....

yo that was a pretty tight battle, i read deadlys verse and i thought killah had to produce something pretty tight to end up to win that one and i think he pulled it off. killah ripped this battle up man completely. had really good multis and wordplay and his structure and flow juz ripped it, he pieced it 2getha nicely. i cant say much about what to improve on coz u both did really good. nice battle
vote = killah bwoy
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lol man i cant vote on this shit, i dont think i have enough posts.....sorry man forgot 2 check

Yo This Was Way One Sided, Killah Had Better Multis, Better Punches, Deadly You Need To Elevate Your Punches Didnt Hit Hard And You Rhymes Were Pretty Basic, Nice Closer From Killah.

V-killah

was gonna vote for killa but he blacklisted me.......anyway....first dude,nothin in ur verse.....no punches really......killa u didnt have punches either so i had to judge on flow n multies......killa's was better....although his rhyme schemes were pretty basic,he did have more multies which resulted in better flow......i dont like the dashes.......but yea...........based on that i woulda voted for killa

Decent battle

Deadly............ok your verse can't be described any other way than wack, man you didn't have punches, you just dropped big names which you should only do of you are good at wordplay or can make a ill punch out of it, you did neither, you had no personals, I can't think of anything good to say bout it, man you need to seriously elevate
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals 1/10
Metas: 1/10
Creativity 2/10
Overall: 14/50

Killa Bwoy.........your verse was jus ok, it had some punches but they were weak, persoanls not really any there, you had multies but they were kinda forced, you had a few metas, nothing really special but ok drop
Flow: 3/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 4/10
Metas: 4/10
Creativity: 5/10
Overall: 23/50
Vote: killa Bwoy

upn this.............................................. ...

Aight, don't have time for an official breakdown, but y'all both big-upped yourselves more than dissed your opponent, but Killah's was more creative, better wordplay, had some hard punches, just a level above deadly I think, but it's all good. I give this one to Killah, but both y'all need to diss your opponent more than make yourself look good.

~CJ~

deadly- you just had the average flow, nuthing special, not the worst. it was juts aight for me work on your structure, put some multis in.
Killa-good shit you beat dis cat, punchlines were off the hook for sure meng, and it was just ann alround victory for you.
v=killa

Yo Killah Bwoy Tell Strobe to put a Extra vote For FreSh_EmCeE

aight nice battle from both ends but

ithink killa took this wit better flow..structure.. punches...and vocab and worplay

deadly u had nice shit too ,,,but killa bwoy got dis battle nice battle wun be easy

v/killa bwoy