spiky2k8 vs FallingAngel2k4 THE REMATCH
 

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due in the next 20 minutes

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aight nigga this aint a officail battle
aight
peace out

so u back huh the class trip was fun hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahaahahha this is gona be a gay battle and we done switching classes

my bad this is official
well check in

aight win is the verses do

we have to come on time

because no uniform right

it was due in 20 minutes but torrow at 7pm ct time

aight dawg i'm fin to hit u like a wardhog then chop
u up like a hotdog/
i'm playn wit u nigga so right now i'm pulling tha trigger
so i can kill ya/
i dont really rap good against u cause i'm using like
tool and then leaving drowning in a pool/
i know yo raps aint cool so u need to go back to skool
or keep yo cool/
man u steal verses out of peoples raps cause u bout as
weak as this nigga named ralf from the Simpsons/
i bet u confused and surprized cause i just beat u with
my eyes tide or another meaning for eyes closed/
its not my fault u got caught with taughts which were
masterbasting and rapeing while the yo mom was taping/
why cant u come up with yo own rhymes instead bribing
with 2 dimes just to rent a rhyme/
is this mbassrassing or am i'm not caring cause yo ass was
just daring /
well i'm done heating yo ass so hit tha streets yo ass grass/

go nigga yo turn now aight
be waiting for yo rhymes nigga
dont bit my shit

uppin 4 vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aight vote fo me

what this kid remindz me of is a motherfucking newbie/
my words will desintergrate and destory so go ahead and ty to be me newbie/
you fear me more then the Wrestler fear the undertaker so this is your factor of fear/
chokin when you see my name i guess fear is a factor/
going aganist me is like askin for a killin/
I will kill you worst then the American killing the iraqs/
i would go hard but i think its not right/
to kill someone who's linez just don't sound right/
this is my damn spit time to go/
i think i hear your mother calling you u better go/

start voting people aight !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cool peace

loookingggggg for votes yall

WHACK BATTLE ALERT!!!!!!
Spiky ya had a weak verse with crazy wack punches. Flow was ok asnd structure was ok. Y acould have used at least ONE FUCKING PERRSONNAL

ANgel you r a retard or you didn't try at all. YOu didn't rhyme, and when you did, it was the same wordz. WACK ASSED CRACKA!!!

Thats all constukitive critcism. ELevate liek fuck

Vote-Spiky

Return da favor-In ma sig

uppin for vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aight peace E.Z to all

i'm uppin it aight
uppin fo votes aight
just upppin

some votes folks come on people

Aight easy vote...FallingAngel2k4...just cuz spiky, man yo rhymes was way to simple. you got to work on yo game in general cuz u just got jumped muthafucka. plus angel was ill wit his fear factor lines too tho...
peace niggaz

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uppin !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
b.e.z

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this was a wack battle but ye spiky got this battle wit better punches and flow and all dat other shit...angel u gotta elevate aight ...

v/spiky2k8

return tha fav and vote on tha battle in ma sig aight be easy nigags wun....

why aint yall vote he called me out
so
uppin fo votes

Yo this was a funny ass battle cuz both of yall need to step up ya feel me. Spiky shit
was on the nursery rhyme side but his was still betta cuz angel shit didnt make sence and his shit aint rhyme. It looked he just tossed some words together tryna make it sound betta but both of yall step it up

vote: Spiky

angel i heard yo verse before i mean it aint sweet at all i just heard it before ....my vote goes 2 spiky becuse his verse rhymed and angels didnt both need to elevate doe

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uppin this battle now
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have to give this one to dpiky I was feeling his flow more and I believe he laid down better punches and his closure was better.

yo uppin fo votes
uppin this battle
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hey rush i see your name all over these threads want to battle

Spiky2k8: was feeling ur lines...

Flow and Structure:
ur rhymes flowed pretty good through out ur structure was good aswell which added to it...

Vocab:
pretty good vocab... i would say u got an average one... you threw in a couple of complex words in here and there...

Punchlines and Personals:
you had a few... next time add a couple more in but the ones you had hit pretty hard...

Overall: 7.5/10

FallingAngel: wasn't really feeling ur verse

Flow and Structure:
ur flow was pretty good same with ur structure...

Vocab:
i would say ur vocab was the same as or a bit better than Spikeys... u had a few more complex words and a bit less basic...

Punchlines and Personals:
you didn't have that many and the ones you had didn't really hit all that hard...

Overall: 6.5/10

Vote: Spikey
because his punchlines and personals were better and also i thought his ryhmes were more origonal...

Hmm, weak battle sense tingling...
This was shit. First of all Angel, yo don't use two words to rhyme, it just doesn't work.
Spiky, you had some punches, but guess what, they were wickedy-wack, but at least you tried, so you get my vote.
Wack, elevate quickly

uppin fo vote
but for people that i was weak i didn't even
try aight but still
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uppping people come on yall

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once again aight
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this was an easy one:
flow rush
style both
punches rush
personal rush
opener rush
closer rush
vocab fallingangel