SmArTzZ vs. Lil-trip
 

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Smartzz if yo the best rapper than i spit poorly drunk off a forty
Homie only way youd be better than me is if you post before me!
Dad said not bein born outta yo moms "Lips of laughter" makes u a panther?
Mus' be tuff bein born backwards n always askin yo baby mamma fo answers
Im a "Positive" fact not only "Minus" talent n skills you continue to lack
stop dis bitch u jus love "Crack", member given life out it don make u black"
Only grinnin as yo spittin God made a commandment which lies include sinnin
stick to fistin cus right from the beginnin you never came close to winnin
yo spits got no gas like yo name itll jus drop or jus pass there is no relapse
as a trip i spit fast you have a "Trip-Acid" Flashback sorry homie "I" Jus Last
Wit these lyrics im jus killin em pop yo lips like records n keep spinnin em
called it yo Boys "Cinnamon" dis Homie Brings a "Gay" Meanin to Synonym
my lines he starts jackin em when they yell fairies unite they start tappin em
This spit is jus smackin em he aint no M-A-N n thats my Mixed up Acronym

aight, holla back peace..

g"l

ima be *engravin*loser in ya chest,cuz u *facin*the best,the lyrics u posted well im not *impressed*
got me *chasing*thiz*pest*,lyrical flames *embracing*but i dunno wat i *possessed*
faggot u not *behavion*so ya dome ima *cave in*or put u under *arrest*
flamez melting catz like the *rest*,u not on my level so i take u as an *unwelcomed guest*
the kid iz *blessed*a ghost writer u should*request*cuz ur raps iz sloopy and its makin a*mess*
juss anotha loss on ya record and itz not a *progress*elevating wise u juss goin down like food u *digest*
rippin threw ya *flesh*makin thiz dog eat hiz own bonez go in *fetch*u not gettin betta u juss goin down a *step*

so im juss gonna end *you*,and hope my raps offemd *you*,and make you feel*blue*
and destroying u like dandruff washed away by *shampoo*l
leaving you wit a forever scar like a *tattoo*everything u says iz *untrue*
u got a 1.0 for ur *review*,meaning u suk *dude*talk slick shot a leave a pocket in ya stomache like a *kangaroo*

iight uppin good battle

well this was a close battle.... structure goes to lil trip his was easier to read... but punches... goes to smartzz... and like i always say punches win battles.. soo smartzz get it in a close battle

iight thanx 4 votes uupin please

A'ight...this was actually a decent battle.

Lil-trip...I thought ya structure was tite dawg. Pretty good for a flywieght...you had some nice punches, but some shit I jus wans't feelin'. Overall a nice verse, could use some vocabulary werk.

5/10[b]

Smartzz...ya verse was pretty dope. Your punches was hittin....your structure was wack as fuck tho. Lines stretched to shit...but punches win battles, and yuo definitely had harder punches.

[b]5.5

Close battle.

Vote- Smartzz

No hate.

man oh man some of smartzz stuff was whack and he put it all away with his game but some of his stuff was hard to flow. his opener was awesome and his lyrics where crazy, and his closure finished it all up very well. so my vote goes to smartzz

i definely liked smartzz better, i jsut liek the way he over all raps better. lil trip had some good stuff dont get me wrong, but i think that smartzz came away with taht. i like smartzz opener****

aight..
 

Lets close this shit niggas, cats are gettin records for losses when shit jus needs to be closed, uppin this...

iight thanz 4 the votez uppin

can sum1 vote please

canu vote on thiz battle please

close battle.......smarts dont up 6 times or you will be dqued but yeah

smartzz takes this becuase his punches was better.......lil trip elevate.....your ish was okay but it wasnt as gud as smartzz.......but yo smartzz you need to take out all the ***'s and shit outa your verse it makes it look really messy and takes away from the flow also work on your structure so your lines are all one line

v/smartzz

Aiight Lil-Trip ya had an ok drop but some shit was hard to read. The plus n minus line was weak, and the whole born backwards thing was whack. Good structure and flow tho.

Smartzza ya punches were slightly better thatn his. Ya Kangaroo closer was weak. Structure and flow were below average

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