.:VA:. .VS. Immortal_Souljah04
 

i forgot to put 6 lines only in the rules ok???

6 lines you crazy, but wut ever..... check

a battle should at least be 8....


with this flow i shud be a mid weight on Lipo.
like a spiritaul docta, this wise guys reppin 8th diciples.
iM like pauL, iLL knock all 8 out with one empty shell from my rifle.
like reebok's deal with 50, this soldia's a twin to tha rival of a sphyco.
you expand your crew, iLL double barrel with 16 metals, just to multiply eight.
ima DEBO this light weight, routine'in this kat to a seasonal migrate.
iM the un-humane being here, cuz i constantly fight "hate".
i take no trim spa diet, but ironically swallow kats like asains to keep my shape.

blah! I dropped a shit verse

hit this wannabe-thug with crazy ass verbal abuse//
have you spinning over 90 degrees like you a angle.. obtuse//

thinkin' of battling me this cat must be plain nuts//
he be thinking he's Tupac cause his name is Rukahs Cupat//
(Rukah's Cupat is Tupac Shakur's name backwards)

this cat is broken he has to be put together like a tapeworm//
stay away from this battle you might contaminate me with whack germs//

i'm one of the best punchrhymers just like Chino XL//
my punches be ringin' in your ears like a doorbell//

uppin 4 votes cmon don't sleep on this battle & don't forget to explain

uppin for votes and links, got my word to return a fair vote

uppin: -links -votes ...bring 'em

uppin 4 votes cmon need votes don't care who you vote for!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin

votes make me happy, and links make it possible for you to be happy

leave links and votes and ill get back at you, dont just give links

uppin 4 votes don't sleep on this aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

uppin' 4 votes aight come on blah! everyone should stop voting if
you can't even vote on this

hmmmmm......uppin 4 votes up in dis bitch don't sleep on dis battle yo!

shit come on ni99az this battles been open for a week and no battles at
all leave a link after your vote and I'll do a honest vote on yours!!!!!!!!!

all right heres you vote

open: VA
close: tie
personals: VA
metas: imortal
punches: VA
multis: VA

win: VA

retrun the favor

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weak battle....everythin was tied....no punches were thrown in this battle except for one given by immortal....so vecuz of dis immortal has won......

Vote:immortal

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128935

^^drop a vote

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dis was a wack battle but like potential said i gotta go wit immortal since he atleast had 1 punch

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ya i noe ni99az hit with most fillers but it's probably enough to beat
him i don't really know at all.......well uppin 4 votes

Immortal got this one his punches were new and to the point

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aight thanks for the votes nucca well anywayz uppin don't sleep on this
battle

come on people don't sleep on this uppin 4 votes up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(AND LEAVE LINKS IF THAT MAKES YOU HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

with this flow i shud be a mid weight on Lipo.
like a spiritaul docta, this wise guys reppin 8th diciples.
Allright opener nothin to hot, lil bit more word play and this would have benn good

iM like pauL, iLL knock all 8 out with one empty shell from my rifle.
like reebok's deal with 50, this soldia's a twin to tha rival of a sphyco.
Shitty word this just did not come across the way it should have man better word play did like the sphyco thing thuogh, *refers to stunt 101*

you expand your crew, iLL double barrel with 16 metals, just to multiply eight.
ima DEBO this light weight, routine'in this kat to a seasonal migrate.
ok punch i guess wonce agian though some word play would help here man word

iM the un-humane being here, cuz i constantly fight "hate".
i take no trim spa diet, but ironically swallow kats like asains to keep my shape.
Closer this was good very good and i think by this closer i figuered otu who you are va are you dealdal for origanal i think you are

hit this wannabe-thug with crazy ass verbal abuse//
have you spinning over 90 degrees like you a angle.. obtuse//
weak very weak enough said work on opening penches

thinkin' of battling me this cat must be plain nuts//
he be thinking he's Tupac cause his name is Rukahs Cupat//
(Rukah's Cupat is Tupac Shakur's name backwards)
good word play for real this was tight

this cat is broken he has to be put together like a tapeworm//
stay away from this battle you might contaminate me with whack germs//
another good punch word this wasnt great but ok

i'm one of the best punchrhymers just like Chino XL//
my punches be ringin' in your ears like a doorbell//
fuckin stupid closer word this was wack man period


i got to give this to va he at least attempted a personal the punches were dead even word they both had some good word play and punches but the personals wornt there except the one geting on imoratal crew so this goes to va

Rtf links in the sig.... no hate votes this was hard for me to judge

blah blah blah w/e vote for whoever uppin 4 some votes up in this site

uppin for votes don't sleep on dis shit people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this
has been open for more than a fuckin' week!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

y'all got rock?
 

ok dis one goes to VA, i dunno shit but I'll still vote

he finished hotter than he started
but it wuz enuff

yo bizkits an soup around

hit up ma battles

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fuck so many unexplained votes if you gonna vote explain it goddamn it!!!!!

v/.:VA:.

he came pretty strong with the rhymz and vocab nice lines just for 8 of them had some pretty good punches but most didnt hit hard...

Soulah not to bad structure wasnt that great vocab was aight and rhyming wasnt all that great........... good job though

hmmmmmm
v/VA

he had better punches flows and wordplay/vocab ven though it was ok at best

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plllllllllllzzzzzzzzzz reurn the favor on my battle with nervez

This wasnt much of a battle but here I go,

VA, I dont really look at structure, but Urs wasnt too good I guess. Although it took me a 3 seconds more than the Usuall to get ur punches, they were good. U took Ur time and came up wit a good verse for this battle. Ur personals were on key. but nextime try a lil harder.

ImSlja
I did'nt like Ur verse too much at all. U tried too much on structure and came up wit some dumb ass shit for punches. I liked the fact that U listen to Chino XL, but that has nothin to do wit this battle. U probably just rushed or did'nt really feel like winning. I red Ur verse and almost did'nt feel like voting so I know how U feel. And Rukahs Cupat is not Tupac Shakur backwards, think About it. This part told me from the beginning that it would be a sweep.

V/ VA

soljah u waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy betta than this dawg. u got potential. i dont think u brong ur gloves on this one homie. but aight verse from u. u didn't match on ur opponent on this one. betta luck nxt time.

va u get my vote because ur punches were off da chain. no similes or metas in in seen in there. but u edged this one out on a punchline that merely beat his.

overall this was a fuccen weak ass battle

lol ya I noe that.....read the first thing I typed in that it says it all.

I think G-ballz takes this because he had better wordplay even though .:VA:. had some good wordplay too.VA had good structure,his flow was also good but G-ballz wins because of his wordplay.

uppin

this battle was way back..

structure:va
personals:4saken
punches:no one
creativity:va
wordplay:4saken
vocab:va

over: vote goes to va, with more creativty and flow, wasnt feeling either rele tho...
need work, but you both have prolly elevated since then

vote:va