Blaq-Ink vs. Maku Jaiiliin
 

8-16 lines
no crew, h8, or d/r votes
no biting or recycling
must post within an hour of my verse.

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I’m brawlic, brawl you for quarters, call this a warnin//
I’m the safest nigga in prison, call me the warden//
I use ‘black ink’ slipped in syringes to penetrate//
So you ‘take shots’ of my text, till ya liver dissentagrates//
I match oswald’s grip, when I’m holding a tek//
Clap at ya collar bone, then piss into the hole in ya flesh//
As far as decent verses go, I ain’t seeing a thing//
You’ll have less ‘great hits’ ~than hand amputees in the ring//
You ain’t hot, and couldn’t spit flames if asked ya//
That’s why you the only cat stripped down to shorts in Alaska//
What I use likely is force//
I 'paralyze supermen', ~like I slipped kryptonite to a horse//
I spit truth to this peasant, his claims have been clearer since//
I’M KING, YOU CAN ONLY BE THIS BY INHERITANCE*//
Let ya mom and sis smoke this like a pack of bronsons//
and run through ya family, ~like aids does magic johnson’s//

*=his sig says, but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

I 'paralyze supermen', ~like I slipped kryptonite to a horse//=(christopher reeves was paralyzed by getting thrown from a horse)

aight
im chackin in now
i'll drop in a while
or by 2morrow before 8:00 pm
im just lettin u kno im checkin in
~1~

I sit back n wonder who is this bitch MAKU talkin ruthless
this kid will try n bite 2 win,so my punches will smack him tooth-less

Im schoolin u...n im surprised u could find the nerve
cuz im the director...n ill show u theres action behind my words

right now heated so i guess u can fell the temp...dog im on fire
but if u dear talk slick again i'll have u like kayne west spitten through the wire

i dont dont have to say i hate u i'll just show u the finger
Maku even if u was a psyhic u still would'nt predict who's the winner

so i'll angerly throw punches lesson your chance of winnin
N seeing ur way out-side is to late..cuze imma damage ya vision

U's a joke after u post..listen 2 the laughter nigga, please
cause the only time god blesses u is after u sneeze

if u wanna step 2 me u dont wont the beef, cause u a vegaterion
nigga i got bigger fish to fry..so i'll go torch a sea anquarium

~1~

uppin for some votes
5=win
3=ko
i'll return the favor if u guys votes so dont worry
~1~

uppin for votes
dont sleep on this
holla bac
~1~

votez niggaz come on man
yall sleppin on this shit hard

vote u fuckin in active niggaz
damn
i will return the fuckin favor

where the fuckin votez man
this sit isnt active at all
god damn man yall vote come'on

Gotta give the vote to Maku,

I 'paralyze supermen', ~like I slipped kryptonite to a horse//

Tight verse, plus your personal was dope

I spit truth to this peasant, his claims have been clearer since//
I’M KING, YOU CAN ONLY BE THIS BY INHERITANCE

Blaq-Ink got good punchs and came in strong
I sit back n wonder who is this bitch MAKU talkin ruthless
this kid will try n bite 2 win,so my punches will smack him tooth-less

Please return the favor yall, gotta get his battle closin.....

uppin for votez yall tryin 2 close this thread
0-1
maku=1
blaq=0

we got one vote we need some more votes
holla back

~1~

new some votez to close thi old ass thread
come'on

votez votez votez
im tried of freepostin come on niggaz
fuck yall mad in-active
vote
~1~

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

I’m brawlic, brawl you for quarters, call this a warnin//
I’m the safest nigga in prison, call me the warden//
I use ‘black ink’ slipped in syringes to penetrate//
So you ‘take shots’ of my text, till ya liver dissentagrates// - Humerous opener, you've brought some funny punches here, used some different types of wordplay, I really felt the Inheritance line later on in the verse also... This wasn't the best I've seen you drop but still a good verse, I felt most of your punches and I think you were able to pull off higher complexity than your opponent here.


Im schoolin u...n im surprised u could find the nerve
cuz im the director...n ill show u theres action behind my words - I think this was your best bar of your verse, the punch was decent and the wordplay wasn't played, the rest of the verse however I found kind of basic, it had a good structure but the punchlines were very simple, and concepts I've seen before-- Decent Verse all in all but I think Maku came harder here... Good luck in the future.

maku=2
blaq ink=0

uppin 4 votes...............

good battle
 

not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..

vote maku

good battle
 

not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..i thought blacks flowed together better, but black gotta remeber punches with battles

vote maku
return the fav

uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like maku's style. i'll vote on ya'll two in a sec

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damn...mad props to ya'll both that was hot...one of the best yet, that i read...not too short, not too long, thats perfect...i hate doing al that reading...but imma give it up to maku...his was hotter, he/she had me droppn mi jaw on some shit...blaq, u did too...GOOD SHIT.

v/maku

uppin 4 votes
thanks for the props everyone, lets continue