Ecko vs T storm
 

yo playa
goes like this 16 lines 20 min to spit after check in
no d/r votes and no hate votes
no feedin no bittin
and that bout it

aigght
 

aigght man.thats cool...........................lets get in on.................................

chk
 

chkkin in................................................ ..........

checkin in................................lets do this homeboy

this guy thinking he street..claiming he been shot 9 times!/
oh..im really feelin that,he from tha real rough streets of cali 909!/

dawg uap like u need an abortion...suffering from growing pains/
my granny hits harder...n ur style cud do with her zimma-frame/

this guy cudnt blow-hot wit explosives in his back-pack/
im packing nuclear warfare to blow-off this wack-cat/

ur crashing into tha rocks tryin 2 reach me...im insubordinate/
i leave u blinded,like u lost at sea..without a co-ordinate/

ima hve ya whole crew ridin ma hot style like a tsu-nami/
makin tidal waves,fukin u all up,make u bleed like a pu-nani/

ma lyrical disease has one mission...to destroy ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words......................they call it mal-nutrition/

so bitch u gona hve to deploy ur entire u.s con-voy/
ma british intelligence has u cornered..now ima de-stroy

so i murder u wit a-war-of-words..u jus cnt get wit ma hot-verbs/
my gun bout to cock,blow n serve..show u up 2 be a crew of-herbs/

im hittin this flamer wit foreign objects... eatin em like i was the t rex
its the eckz ready to per-plex comin harder like i jus got oral sex
yea theres a storm in here .....but i think its jus the weather
cuz im the real attention getter ....not jus some imitation leather
u proly jus gonna say something stupid.... sayin shit that has to do wit ecko
but go on ahead write ur rhymes ur the real echo
say shit over and over thinkin u's a bad mutha fucka
come on dawg entertain me u jus another dead sucka
todays jus ur luck like im bored as fuck ready to tear ur ass up
u compared to me..... shit.... we dont even measure up
haha i guess u from england and im from the usa
im glad cuz all the rapperz there is all fuckin gay
i know that shit is played but i speak the truth
t storm imma make it hurt like i jus pulled ur wisdom tooth
u can consider urself done,over and defeated
cuz ur jus like the o zone layer cuz ur ass jus got depleted

lol not my best battle but anyways uppin for honest votes

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Yo this breakdown.

T:

Yo punches were betta than ecko, but played also. work on personals. and flow was ok at times went off. elevate.

Ecko:

Dawg i expected betta from ya, u had like alot of self-glorifications and couple played lines and u also admitted that in yo verse..lol but u lost this 1 man.


V/: Storm.

yo lets go anotha round round 2.....i aint happy wit my verse

well...storm had much better punches...ecko i didnt see any from you...Ecko your shit was good i liked your structure i liked your flow..the personals were ok...not too good but ok..but the punches mayn...where are the punches lmfao.....if you would of had punches you would of had this vote for sure

t-storm..you pulled off some ok shit dawg...your punches was aiight..nothin special..good vocab...pretty bad structure..good flow...YOU HAD PUNCHES...and you had personals....thats one of the key things in this battle..good job you did a decent verse in this battle...therefore you acme up with the win.........

vote: T-storm

lmao i guess i forgot to put them personals in hahahahahaha damn stupid me somebody shoot me

I liked both verses I have seen both go harder, looking forward to round 2 if
there is one...

Hold it up both good battle.

this guy thinking he street..claiming he been shot 9 times!/
oh..im really feelin that,he from tha real rough streets of cali 909!/

dawg uap like u need an abortion...suffering from growing pains/
my granny hits harder...n ur style cud do with her zimma-frame/


^^ Funny opener...good punch...dunno how accurate it is tho

so bitch u gona hve to deploy ur entire u.s con-voy/
ma british intelligence has u cornered..now ima de-stroy

so i murder u wit a-war-of-words..u jus cnt get wit ma hot-verbs/
my gun bout to cock,blow n serve..show u up 2 be a crew of-herbs/


^^ decent closer..could have been more creative

im hittin this flamer wit foreign objects... eatin em like i was the t rex
its the eckz ready to per-plex comin harder like i jus got oral sex
yea theres a storm in here .....but i think its jus the weather
cuz im the real attention getter ....not jus some imitation leather

^^ Not bad...a couple played out punches tho

Rhyme Tie
FLow Tie
Punches Storm

Vote: Storm, better overall

maybe u should explain punani to the white folks lol

haha
 

ok lol..................i am white....lol...................................... .......................

aight ecko urs sounded like u were posted on regular front lines the punches lacked the setup but they werent bad punches just messed up cause of the setup.your rhyme scheme wasnt that bad maybe make it a little more complex storm i liked ur punches specially the granny one u came ahrd wit a good flow thats y u got my vote

v/storm
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