enygma vs L.I.
 

Rules are....

10 Lines
No crew votes
No hate votes
No dickriding
No feeding
Due Thursday Night by midnight

Goodluck

I guess I'll drop something rel quick cause I'm not sure if I'll be on tomorrow either......Checking in......

okay ill drop tonight....checked in....dont worry bout feeding....its a rule that its not allowed so ill spit later tonight after i get done cleaning....

Here's a quick 10 for ya.....

Begging for a battle......I'm not impressed wit y'all
His name is a smeared image....that just says it all
He's trying to start a fire but I'm torching this twig
I'll have him disappearing....even more than his sig
Can't spit no live shit....so I had him just drop dead
Reason for his loss....
Your biggest accomplishment should be showing up tonight
Biggest rider on the site....cause he ain't old enough to drive
My rhymes kick ass...you're just used to some ass kickins
Go back to battling pussies...oh I forgot, he asked Kitten

Eh.....kinda rushed, just another battle

Give this battle a platinum edition just so he can see his name shine…
He still doesn’t come close to bein felt so he tried brail on his lines…
It’s the real deal…aint no jokes…stop being polite and start bein real…*
Avoid’s battling…stated himself…finally the truth has been reveal’d…

Get’s one line of true criticism, then goes and hides his audo records…
Says he the best up on this site but I don’t see his name on a reward…
Check the age of his ass…twenty-two and still online stickin to weak texts…
Battling forever but haven’t elevated to get out of the category for dyslex’s...*
Been forgetten on this site…that’s why your spits are blatantly missed...
This guys so out of it…he still steady reppin a crew that don’t exist…

Explanation...yeah ill do them for people who are slow and dont get it...
start bein polite and stop bein polite is the slogan for The Real World and he is from philly which is where the next real world is happening...
dyslex's are people having impaired ability to comprehend written words...

Aight goodluck enygma peace....

uppin

LOL.......not bad. Just a few things that you got wrong though.....

1. I don't hide my audio records......I'm 1-0
2. I have an "award" not a "reward" for best vet in May
3. Dyslexia is not the inability to comprehend words, it is simply putting them in the wrong order.

Other than that you had a pretty good verse........nice job!

^ quit swaying....i meant reward by a current championship...and the dictionary definition i got was that...but yeah dont worry bout it.....good verse...lets get some votes....up....

aight can i vote......let me no.....im pretty sure you guys will let me but just to make let me no if i can

^yeah its up to enygma....upping.....great battle here lets get some votes!!!!!!!

LOL@BOTH OF YALL HAVIN MY NAME UP IN THIS.....SO I DECIDED TO LEAVE SOME FEED....SINCE L.I. GOT ME BLACKLISTED..


Here's a quick 10 for ya.....

Begging for a battle......I'm not impressed wit y'all
His name is a smeared image....that just says it all
HMM..NOT TOO HARD HITTING,KINDA PERSONAL
He's trying to start a fire but I'm torching this twig
I'll have him disappearing....even more than his sig
I THINK ONE BAR ABOUT HIS SIG WOULD HAVE BEEN MORE THAN ENOUGH....IT ISNT HARD HITTING........
Can't spit no live shit....so I had him just drop dead
I LIKE THIS.......NICE WORDPLAY OK PUNCH.....
Reason for his loss....
Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I
cuz i just wanna battle a top head
LOL......
Your biggest accomplishment should be showing up tonight
Biggest rider on the site....cause he ain't old enough to drive
HAHAHAHAHA.....MAN THAT IS FUNNY
My rhymes kick ass...you're just used to some ass kickins
Go back to battling pussies...oh I forgot, he asked Kitten
WELL,MY NAME IS THERE........NOT TOO HARD HITTING ITS KINDA FUNNY N PERSONAL





Give this battle a platinum edition just so he can see his name shine…
He still doesn’t come close to bein felt so he tried brail on his lines…
DONT LIKE THE FIRST LINE AT ALL......2ND LINE,WOULD'VE BEEN GOOD,BUT U WORDED IT WRONG...U STRETCH UR SHIT FOR REAL....
"HE STILL DOESNT COME CLOSE TO BEING FELT" IS GAY....U CAN SAY NOONE WOULD BE FEELIN HIM EVEN IF HE TRIED TO BRAIL HIS LINES
WOULDA SOUNDED BETTER......
It’s the real deal…aint no jokes…stop being polite and start bein real…*
Avoid’s battling…stated himself…finally the truth has been reveal’d…
OK I GUESS ITS A PERSONAL BUT I DIDNT THINK IT WAS HARD HITTING
Quote:
Originally Posted by LaTiNKiTTeN
flow needs work,sounds like he singin in some parts n he still choppy
THANKS FOR HAVIN ME UP IN HERE

Get’s one line of true criticism, then goes and hides his audo records…
Says he the best up on this site but I don’t see his name on a reward…
TELL ME HOW RECORDS/REWARD EVEN REMOTELY RHYME.....N IT AINT HITTING SHIT
Check the age of his ass…twenty-two and still online stickin to weak texts…
Battling forever but haven’t elevated to get out of the category for dyslex’s...*
GAYYYYYY..I DO NT CARE FOR UR EXPLANATION EITHER.....ITS GAY.U COULDNT SPIT THAT ON STAGE.......N U HAD TO POST A DICTIONARY MEANING.....THAT SHOULD'VE BEEN A CLUE
Been forgetten on this site…that’s why your spits are blatantly missed...
This guys so out of it…he still steady reppin a crew that don’t exist…
OK PERSONAL

PERSONAL WISE,L.I. HAD THE CLOSE,N ENYGMA HAD THAT SIG SHIT....THE BRAIL LINE WAS THE CLOSEST L.I. CAME TO A PUNCH........ENYGMA HAD THE "DROP DEAD"
ENYGMA'S WAS MORE HUMOROUS TO ME....THE RIDER LINE WAS PRETTY FUNNY......I JUST FELT HE HAD A BIT MORE PUNCHES.......BOTH OF U CAME WEAK THOUGH.......ENYGMA HAD BETTER FLOW,SHORT N TO THE POINT......L.I. DOESNT KNOW HOW TO WORD PUNCHES,STILL HAS PROBLEMS RHYMING WORDS, AND STRETCHES LINES WAY TOO MUCH.....LACKS PUNCHES.......ENYGMA GOT BETTER FLOW N A BIT OF PUNCHES SO OBVIOUSLY VOTE ENYGMA

I'm gonna let creativitie vote on this. I know him and he seems to be honest enough.......plus we don't have any votes yet......lol. Lets get the ball rolling, go ahead and vote creativitie....

Oh, I wasn't trying to sway for votes.......just stating facts.......sorry. I really did like your verse though........

aight look this was a hot battle but enygma barely took this one..

enygma: you came hard alll the way. you could have came with more punches and lil more personal.....and maybe a good meta4 would hav help bt other than that you had a good flow....the quates helped you alot....good battle and your opener was tight i was feelin that name shit..alll in all9/10

LI: you was hot through otu the whole thing but nothing really impressed me..good shit though..i think that this was an even battle i just wasnt feelin how you had to explain your bars and shit.....but other than that good flow and good spit all together..
all in all 8/10

vote=enygma

aight thanks for the honest vote creat...appreciate it....uppin this for more votes....

Upp.

really slept on lmao only 1 vote.....upping.....

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

good battle guys...here's my breakdown...

first up is enygma

Begging for a battle......I'm not impressed wit y'all
His name is a smeared image....that just says it all
7 pretty good...not great though
He's trying to start a fire but I'm torching this twig
I'll have him disappearing....even more than his sig
5
Can't spit no live shit....so I had him just drop dead
Reason for his loss....
Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I
cuz i just wanna battle a top head
8 that's enygma...good shit

Your biggest accomplishment should be showing up tonight
Biggest rider on the site....cause he ain't old enough to drive
5 don't like it
My rhymes kick ass...you're just used to some ass kickins
Go back to battling pussies...oh I forgot, he asked Kitten
7.5 nice closer man

Eh.....kinda rushed, just another battle



now li

Give this battle a platinum edition just so he can see his name shine…
He still doesn’t come close to bein felt so he tried brail on his lines…
7 never heard that...
It’s the real deal…aint no jokes…stop being polite and start bein real…*
Avoid’s battling…stated himself…finally the truth has been reveal’d…
6.5 decent line
Quote:
Originally Posted by LaTiNKiTTeN
flow needs work,sounds like he singin in some parts n he still choppy

Get’s one line of true criticism, then goes and hides his audo records…
Says he the best up on this site but I don’t see his name on a reward…
5 nope
Check the age of his ass…twenty-two and still online stickin to weak texts…
Battling forever but haven’t elevated to get out of the category for dyslex’s...*6 wha?
Been forgetten on this site…that’s why your spits are blatantly missed...
This guys so out of it…he still steady reppin a crew that don’t exist…
7 nice close

enygma
7+5+8+7,5+5= 32.5
too much filler but nice drop...

li
7+6.5+5+6+7=31.5
not as good as you ussually do...but still tight


v- enygma

vote honest on the battle in my sig...sorry for the freepost nice verses guys

finally a vote!!!....thanks jpoll....we appreciate it lol.......

opener:li, even though its played
closer:tie
punches:enygma
flow:enygma
vote:enyma...he had the harder hittin verse and the flow to go wit it....li had a chopped up flow in some parts that threw his verse off...
vote - enygma
can yall return the favor.........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128990

We need some ore fuckin votes on this......I don't even care if you read the verses anymore, lets just get this shit closed out!

IM NOT POLLIN MY VOTE UNTIL ONE OF YOUS VOTE ON MY BATTLE.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128990...

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yes seriously...vote...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...29914....FUCKIN IDIOTS...YA WONDER Y YA GET NO VOTE...ILL POLL WHEN I GET A VOTE ON THAT

omg up......VOTE BIATCHES!!!!.......

nice drop both emcees both came wit some hott shit and some hott quotes aha

Enygma-shit was dope i was feelin dat shit punches was there personals and made em laugh nice drop

bestline-Begging for a battle......I'm not impressed wit y'all
His name is a smeared image....that just says it all

nice personals....

worsteline-Your biggest accomplishment should be showing up tonight
Biggest rider on the site....cause he ain't old enough to drive

nott badd juss didnt keep up wit da rest of da verse 8/10 tho nice

Li-Sick as shit feelin dat punches connected flow was nice and personals was there

bestline-Check the age of his ass…twenty-two and still online stickin to weak texts…
Battling forever but haven’t elevated to get out of the category for dyslex’s...*

nice

worsteline-Been forgetten on this site…that’s why your spits are blatantly missed...
This guys so out of it…he still steady reppin a crew that don’t exist…"

^^ idk chryme sindicate is a crew

overall

engyma

open..9/10
punches-9.2/10
flow-9.1/10
consitant verse-9.3/10
structure-10/10
quote-9.2/10 -newly added lol
vocab-9.4/10
closer-9.6/10
laughs-9.4/10
overall-9.5/10

L.I

open..9/10
punches-9.1/10
flow-9.0/10
consitant verse-9.5/10
structure-10/10
quote-9.2/10
vocab-9.6/10
closer-9.4/10
laughs-9.6/10
overall 9.7/10

winner-LI

yeah he had deadlyvisionz inc in there but this battle is so slept on that alot of th eshit dont work...oh well....2-1 up.........

Enyg..Pretty Good Punches and Personals u stayed on flow.
Overall u did Pretty Good 7/10

L.I..Ur bars are alot longer takes a sec to read Lo...U had decent Punch or 2 and ur Personals were ok.Flow was ok long lines...
Overall wasnt to bad 6/10

Vote enyg

i voted on this and still no votes on my battle...will you please hit this audio up...thanks...

yeah ill hit that up once i get my name back...they have it blocked for som reason...up...

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wowo this still going on...im uppin for these guys