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J Gutta 06-02-04 11:01 PM

Da Jokah Vs Lil Slipper
 
Rulez:
5 to 20 lines
no d/r hate or crew votes
no bitin/recyclin
u spit first
due 20 mins after check in

Lil Slippa 06-02-04 11:04 PM

I thought you said 10 but its cool thats about allill need to merk ya checkin in in a few

Lil Slippa 06-02-04 11:09 PM

Checkin in

He said he wanted to go a quick five or ten lines./
I don’t even need that many bullets to kill ya through ya spine./

Like I said in the da battle B4 I drop ya Jokahs./
Im old school I drop straps and rope ya./

Cause its just that serious./
Ill leave ya bleeding more a fat bitch on a period.
:laugh2:

I send heat to ya spleen major./ :shoot:
All you Jokah the boy who got raped by a pre teenager./

You already know Lil Slippa a solja./
Even God knows that this battle is over/

50hater_killer 06-02-04 11:24 PM

yo I will hit this up when he drops but can u guys check out my battle thnx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

J Gutta 06-02-04 11:31 PM

ayo check it

lil slippa'z ya name...does lil go all round for ya hole body//
lil slippa'z a shame..u gona get droped like da inc and gotti//

i like to S T R E T C H ma bars so u can see them clearly//
u from ca$hville...come ta queenz bitch..oh wait u fear me//

Dawg wen u go up against wun of da best u gotta bring more//
and wen u want war gainst me bitch u gotta sling more//

fuck this fake fat ass nigga...i bet ya toilet is 10 feet wide//
so it could hold ya fat ass ..my guns ell leave a hole 10 ft wide//

and i aint jokin' iam surious..cuz wen it comes to war..iam dangerous//
iam fast dawg aim furios..dont get mad jus cuz u cant slang-wit-us//

speakin of periods isnt yur quarter up yet..not yet..damn//
sqweezin da trig...ah..u done yet..shot yet..damn//

u can find me in da club..popin dem thangs and shootin wankstaz//
rollin on dubs...popin dis bitch slippa cuz he fucked wit a gansta//

and i see no changes all i see is yur as still here..why'z dat?//
yur jus a homeless bitch wantin a bill for beer..why'z dat//

cuz iam yo father and i didnt pay my childs support//
its ya mothas fault ..fat ass bitch..filled divorce//

this verse was lil a lil kid fillin da glock wit a lil clip-ah//
it was nothin and it beat u ..so guess wat FUCK LIL slippa//


be easy nigga

J Gutta 06-02-04 11:35 PM

uppin fo votes on dis muh fuckah aight be easy......

Lil Slippa 06-02-04 11:41 PM

Do we need to close this battle I mean you set it. Lets go.

50hater_killer 06-02-04 11:41 PM

I have to go with da jokah becuase his lyrics where longer, and rhymed more and had more personels and his closure ended all this and put it into shame. so my vote goes to DA and hey hit up on this battle plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

Lil Slippa 06-02-04 11:48 PM

I hear ya and by the way I only weigh 165. uppin 4 votes.

Blimp 06-03-04 03:14 PM

ima go wit Da Jokah because he actually made since wit his bars, he used what slippa said against him well i guess dats what u get 4 going first

vote=Da Jokah

J Gutta 06-03-04 03:44 PM

aight uppin fo votez....aight wun be easy

DON 06-03-04 04:41 PM

aight i gota vote jokah cause he had his usual hard punches consistent wit his good flow slippa u need to work on punches and flow the fa tbitch on period could have been a good punch if u rhymed it better and had it wit a good setup aight so u need to improve

v/jokah

HoPe 06-03-04 04:50 PM

hahaha..damn jokah..dats y u in mah crew...u jst to good to be true..na j/p..u were u even tryin???

KingChri$ 06-03-04 04:58 PM

Shit jokah..LoL
DecEnt Shit HoLLa..
Mad NicE PUnChes the
NIgga u Battled was WacK
DaT PERiod PuNCH he said suked

J Gutta 06-03-04 04:59 PM

na b...home boi sucked so i went easy on him ..dont gotta come hard on a nigga who slip all da time..haha be easy

Buck15 06-03-04 05:05 PM

Battle wuz a lil better than most still nothin 2 serious flow and shit wuz bout equal but personals wuz won by da jokah so i would have 2 say he gets my vote

vote-jokah

JSmoove 06-03-04 05:10 PM

DaJokah put it down major in this battle. Not only were your rhymes longer, but they were direct punches and you didn't lay off. Although, Jokah, that S T R E T C H line is played. I've seen that way too many times in battles. Nevertheless, you kept the personals goin' and you laid down an easy to read series of verses. To me, your best verse was the intro "lil slippa'z ya name...does lil go all round for ya hole body//
lil slippa'z a shame..u gona get droped like da inc and gotti//" Worst verse, "fuck this fake fat ass nigga...i bet ya toilet is 10 feet wide//
so it could hold ya fat ass ..my guns ell leave a hole 10 ft wide//" I guess you were just fillin' wit that one. Nevertheless, you put alot of thought into your verses and your flow was on point.

Slippa, you just didn't come wit it this time. Your verses were short and choppy. Next time you go first, make sure you have in your rules..."NO RIDIN" That was part of the reason you were smashed. Anyways, some of your verses were simple. It appeared you put no thought in them at all. Elevate your rhyme flow and punches.

Vote: Da Jokah


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