Lil-Trip Vs. -Static-
 

20-30 Minutes to Spit After Check in
10 Lines (5 Bars) Minimum
20 Lines (10 Bars) Maximum
Spit starts when both checked in...

checkin in

hey here it goes


i see holes in his game,his hits are gapped/
lmao,2-11 and started a thread in elevated bitch slapped//
lil trip? what you like lil flip cousin/
after this your losses are gonna be up to a dozen//
im like jesus when he healed the blind/
and you dont believe, cause you a jew whos about to be circumcised
cause you bout ta shake like a jew in the chamber/
just throw ya momma in, betta go and save her//
cause ima crank it ta the max limit//
send her ta hell, she deserves ta be in it//
this kids a playa,im runnin this game/
he just dashes,like the middle of his name//
kids a drama queen in Wackness,and starrin in the role/
cant make a crew,so his occupation is 'being n individual'//

what the fuck, are you gonna prewrite for two hours, check in, then spend the 20 minutes typin?

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lol i thought we where "Checkin In' First, whatever ill start..

"Checked In..'

i was gonna wait dawg, i got bored, you know how it is

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Yo the Television static n spits hit faster than two fully loaded Automatics
you couldnt write a Classic if Nas ripped three of his Sentences off of Illmatic
Im raps Book n "Clock" on yo Block so take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch..'
If i let yo spits sit at my glock even a taste of it wouldnt make you spit Hot
homie get off my dick you love my style n i make you feel like Lloyd n "Smile"
pussy don start reppin yo freestyle cus U memorized the whole DVD of 8-mile
U jus a fool bro n yo style wit yo spits are like yo arms the size of a "noo-dle"
Homos want "More-Room" bro U couldnt win if U do a Lyric hunt on "goo-gle"
Cleo came in she said yo Fate "Trip is Victorious" n U leave wit a Male Mate
Rap is a game U "Pawn" rooks place last n this King jus finished "Check-Mate
Listen bro you have no chance of winnin so why you n here reppin n spittin?
My gift to U 4 xmas yo next battle "Ill" win cus ill do yo lines "Ghost-Written"
Im cuttin this bitch worse than n encision n its cus i jus had a lyricial vision
right from the beginnin i told you i don like fags n you fit the Fag Description
quit wit yo bitchin i get you clapped on both yo lips worse than if yo snitchin
Trip is the drug n U lack skills worth equipin take this drug as yo lyrical prescription

holla wit votes..

uppin for votes

i guess lil trip showed a lil more experience but.........his structure was fucked and all of his lines were way to long.......too many lines where he would like say somethin and then basically repeat it......a few lines didnt rhyme no matter how hard u try to force them......u really cant try to pass that shit off in a TEXT battle......

way too many lines like...
right from the beginnin i told you i don like fags n you fit the Fag Description
u just repeated urself and stretched that shit WAYYYY further than it needed to be...

-Static- i mainly think u did better cuz u had a few punches that delivered harder than n e of his stuff.......u had a lot of lines where u set it up nice and then followed through weak or followed through with somethin that really had nothin to do wit da first line.......ehh u mainly need to work on your follow through...verse looked somewhat noobish at points but u are on so its ok......structure was easier to read but u stretched a few follow throughs

vote- static since he used a lot more personals which made his verse deliver a lot harder....plus his was easier to read

aight...
 

uppin fo votes people wanna get some mo battles closed, holla back......

guess lil trip showed a lil more experience but.........his structure was fucked and all of his lines were way to long.......too many lines where he would like say somethin and then basically repeat it......a few lines didnt rhyme no matter how hard u try to force them......u really cant try to pass that shit off in a TEXT battle......

way too many lines like...
right from the beginnin i told you i don like fags n you fit the Fag Description
u just repeated urself and stretched that shit WAYYYY further than it needed to be...

-Static- i mainly think u did better cuz u had a few punches that delivered harder than n e of his stuff.......u had a lot of lines where u set it up nice and then followed through weak or followed through with somethin that really had nothin to do wit da first line.......ehh u mainly need to work on your follow through...verse looked somewhat noobish at points but u are on so its ok......structure was easier to read but u stretched a few follow throughs

vote- static since he used a lot more personals which made his verse deliver a lot harder....plus his was easier to read

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..? you jus added a vote count to his n used the exact came explanation as the other dogg, i aint hatin on critiscm but if yo gonna vote don copy n paste the same explanation n jus add a vote, holla wit honest votes people peace..

all rite im up, 2-0 uppin for votes

This was a hot battle... I think both of you came with a few really good lines- heres my breakdown....

lil trip? what you like lil flip cousin/
after this your losses are gonna be up to a dozen//
Simple- but effective punchline.- I also liked your closer, but I think your structure killed your verse, everyline was different then the last or next, looks very choppy to me.


Yo the Television static n spits hit faster than two fully loaded Automatics
you couldnt write a Classic if Nas ripped three of his Sentences off of Illmatic
Im raps Book n "Clock" on yo Block so take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch..'
If i let yo spits sit at my glock even a taste of it wouldnt make you spit Hot
homie get off my dick you love my style n i make you feel like Lloyd n "Smile"
pussy don start reppin yo freestyle cus U memorized the whole DVD of 8-mile
U jus a fool bro n yo style wit yo spits are like yo arms the size of a "noo-dle"
Homos want "More-Room" bro U couldnt win if U do a Lyric hunt on "goo-gle"

I think from your opener to here you killed it.... packed with punchlines, some wordplay a few multies.. The structure was good throughout... I think your verse fell off at the end but these openeing 8 lines are strong enough to take this battle in my opinion. I think the fact that Statics lines were so inconsistent in length played a big part in this vote for me because you both had some good lines in your verses I just felt Lil-Trips a little more -Vote - Lil-Trip... Please return the fav..
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come on dawgs, uppin for votes

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aight uppin for votes peep, holla back wit some love peace...

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uppin for some votes, holla back with sum honest love n help this shit close, peace..

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uppin vote people to get some battles closed to allow more battles to start,holla wit luv...

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uppin this shit, vote back wit some honest love peeps.....

upppin for votes

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uppin fo some honest votes wit some honest love, holla back...

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uppin lets close this battle or get some votes, lets go...

my vote goes to Static he had great flow and a few awsome punches.

Please return da favor

shit that was a good battle/
spits you took this cause of ya punches hit harder,more personal,lil trip ya had some really hot shit but your structure was ya downfall both had mad style n vocab,this was a definate good battle...
punches/both
flow/spits
multis/both
creativity/both
vocab/both
that was a tight battle props ta both of ya!!!/ vote--spits

shit that was a good battle/
static you took this cause of ya punches hit harder,more personal,lil trip ya had some really hot shit but your structure was ya downfall both had mad style n vocab,this was a definate good battle...
punches/both
flow/static
multis/both
creativity/both
vocab/both
that was a tight battle props ta both of ya!!!/ vote--static
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Static you was straight. Yo lyrics was iight and you had a couple of punches in there. Ya writin style could be a lil easier to read.

Lil Trip yo lyrics was straight to. You had a better vocabulary than Static. You also had better lyrics origaniality.

Lil-Trip, After Your Line - "you couldnt write a Classic if Nas ripped three of his Sentences off of Illmatic" You Go and Bite Nas Yourself - "homie get off my dick you love my style" Almost exactly the same as what Nas says in the intro to Ether.

I Think Both came with some weak Lines -

"and you dont believe, cause you a jew whos about to be circumcised
cause you bout ta shake like a jew in the chamber/"
They were not good lines at all.

"lil trip? what you like lil flip cousin/
after this your losses are gonna be up to a dozen//"
Those were your best lines by far.


"right from the beginnin i told you i don like fags n you fit the Fag Description"
That Line Is Played Out Trip, If Your Gonna Make Fag Jokes At Least Be Creative And Original.

One The Whole, Static's punches hit harder and flow was better, lil-trip's flow was off, some lines were far too long.

Vote-Static