Bojangler vs. Street Legend
 

okay. 10-12 lines, i'll spit first.

-bojangler

aight you do you then

battle
 

when it comes to rap, bitch, you greener than granny smiths
you claim you a street legend, but your talent's 'bout as real as myth
you say you a livin legend but it appears
that you dead, cuz i just nuked b-more like "sum of all fears"
i be eatin out your girl as if i were a macrophage
all the while blastin buckshot out my 12-gauge
leavin more holes in ya than boxes of corn chex
my castratin lyrics make yo packages drop off like fedex
girls wanna "fetch my bone" cuz it's the biggest, like femurs
you'll never get ass, you got less cock than lemurs
the only time you'll be laid is when you're laid down in hearses
after i verbally dent your ventricle with my heartstopping verses
-bojangler

btw no feeding of verses

yo
check this


Dawg why waste ya time to try to spit against me??//
Damn dawg, ya rhymes are so weak they offend me//
Nigga cant you see the name its street legend//
Dont fuck wit me cuz ill lay you infront of the reverend//
Im too gangsta for you bitch, kill ya fam have them wrapped and given to you for a birthday present//
I dont even know why you testin//

You send shoots at me I intercept them like cornerbacks//
Dawg, you tryna be hard for a long time like porno acts//
why niggas comin at me knowin that their literature is garbage//
PLus they bitch, pull out burnas have them stiff like stationary targets//

It's nuffin nigga

Lets get some votes goin people i'll return the favor leave the links

uppin for votes I'll retuen the favor just leave the links.

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uppin ... let's get some votes on this!

-bojangler

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flow-BJ
closer-BJ
opener-SL
punches-SL
personals-SL
structure-Tie
creativity-BJ
enjoyment-SL

Overall: StreetLegend

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bo-Work on everything...mainly was talkin about what you
are going to do to him..Need to have punches..Some was
aight but not good enuff..Similies need more aight
keep elevatin

SL-Pretty tight..SImilies and metaphore came but easy
enuff to beat him..You had everything but mainly came
aight..Similies and metaphore was aight but work on balance
v/SL Return the fav please

yo this was a hot battle..i thought both ya'll had pretty nice punches and flow, but i thought that street legend had a little more creativity and a hotter closer
vote- street legend....vote on my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125287

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break down

punches:bj
flow:both
wordplay:none
structure:bj
personals:both
overall:bj

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gonna go with bojangler on this one cause the punches hit hard other than that the shit was too close to tell. the best line went to bojangler though:you say you a livin legend but it appears
that you dead, cuz i just nuked b-more like "sum of all fears"like it alot keep it hot both of y'all

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Vote=Bojangler

Pretty decent battle.I was feeling hiz more.He had some nice punchlines,so I gave it to him.Holla @ my battle \/

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both verses had some nice punches but da flow was betta fo legend so i gotta give da vote to him..nice battle tho

return da favor wit honest votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128753

Street Legend gets my vote cause he got great flow and good punches

a yo Bj wuz pretty dam sick but im hafta say Street took it

uppin................make sure that you explain ya votes too

Street legend gets my vote harder punches and a great flow

Street Legend took this. He had hella better lyrics. His punch lines were better too. And some of Bojangler's shit didn't make sence or rhyme. Not much vocabulary from either.

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Street Legend nice work but you need to up your vocabulary
and strengthen your punch lines. You had 1 good one about the porn acts ''hilarious'' nice try though
Bojangler you were the shit
Your rhymes had a nice firm flow to it
Nice punches too

Flow-Bojangler
Structure-tie
Punhes- Bojangler
personals- tie

m/vote=Bojangler



COULD ANY OF YALL PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLES
Sorry I dont know how to do links yet

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