Renegade1 vs. Sinista Minista(anotha sermon)
 

u know da rules cocky nigga 10 lines at most

r u droppin 1st or wut nigga?

naw I can't can u?/the reason I cant cuz Im spittin in another battle Oh yeah this my check in

its aiight u got time, just spit first and i'll hit it up 2morrow mornin cuz i gotta go rite now

why u still online

minista me and u still have a battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

is u gonna spit or wut sinista?? ill fuckin go if ur scared bitch!!

go ahead/either way i win

aiight bitch....

Muthafucka dont test me cuz i dont wanna have ta get messy/
i hope u wore a vest b., cuz i snipe like wesley/
dont think i wont do it cuz tha way-i-smile/
cuz i'ma take alotta shots A.I.-style/
the only thing certain is death/
and by battlin Renegade ur flirtin-wit-death/
this muthafucka wants to be a minista/
u'll be talkin ta god afta i finish-ya/
I'm a fuckin diminisha, and a menace-ta... society/
ur scared ta fight-wit-me, stessin n full of anxiety/
u can try runnin but i got dead aim when im gunnin/
im likley, ta knock tha swooshes off ur nikes/
cmon dawg ur only a 13-year-old/
go home and get back ta jerkin-ya-pole! :thefinger

Talk about messy Imma merk ya Jason style real discreat//
Ha/How can u be messy when u wear a bib when you eat//
Sweet 16 thats Renegade real age/He got butta flys like he centa stage//
But if he wants to turn pages in ages I suggest that he rent-a gage//
I think he's been drinkin booz he dos'nt know he' gonna lose//
Here's some newz If u were BIg foot u coul'nt fill my shoez//
Ay Yo verse is like sex fo u/In da begining he dose so good his dick gets fatter//
then he splatters/ he fucks up and in the end The shit really dose'nt matter//
Listen Rene /My rhymes somthing really rare like uranium//
He has 2pac but watch him get 2poped right to his cranium//(look at his avatar)
Hey Rene your too late/If I could rate yo wackness I'll seal yo fate wit a fuckin 8//
he's a renegade/but da only thing he did rebellous was sayin he's not gonna be straight

Talk about messy Imma merk ya Jason style real discreat//
Ha/How can u be messy when u wear a bib when you eat//

i jus thought punches like that were weak....

ren's punches weren't the sickest either but def better rhyme scheme..nise multi's

ya fuckin renegade came fuckin harder dawg...you throwin some weaker punches that need to be elevated.
Muthafucka dont test me cuz i dont wanna have ta get messy/
i hope u wore a vest b., cuz i snipe like wesley/


tight opener, this was a kinda close battle but the multis and harder punches and flow won dis battle.
v=im a muthafuckin renegade

uppin

yo lets get some votes on this fuckin slaughtering.

uppin

Muthafucka dont test me cuz i dont wanna have ta get messy/
i hope u wore a vest b., cuz i snipe like wesley/
Kinda creative not too bad a punch, decent wordplay but Ive seen this concept b4
dont think i wont do it cuz tha way-i-smile/
cuz i'ma take alotta shots A.I.-style/
lol- this was a clever punch- but your line length has been inconsistent thus far
the only thing certain is death/
and by battlin Renegade ur flirtin-wit-death/
its multi, but the second syllable is the same word... not good for someone judgin ur vocab, flowed decently enough.
this muthafucka wants to be a minista/
u'll be talkin ta god afta i finish-ya/
lol, basic but effective- decent personal.
I'm a fuckin diminisha, and a menace-ta... society/
ur scared ta fight-wit-me, stessin n full of anxiety/
Good Flow, but its mostly filler, no real punchline here.
u can try runnin but i got dead aim when im gunnin/
im likley, ta knock tha swooshes off ur nikes/
knockin swooshes off nikes is a used concept but its an effective punch
cmon dawg ur only a 13-year-old/
go home and get back ta jerkin-ya-pole! - this doesn't rhyme 100% here kinda a forced multi, and the punch wasn't very hard.. I think you fell off a little through the verse here, but no hate at all it was decent- some good punchlines, wordplay and aside from the way it appears on paper it has the potential to flow decently.



Talk about messy Imma merk ya Jason style real discreat//
Ha/How can u be messy when u wear a bib when you eat//
LoL- this is kinda a funny punchline, not great but good- o.k opener.
Sweet 16 thats Renegade real age/He got butta flys like he centa stage//
But if he wants to turn pages in ages I suggest that he rent-a gage//
I dont think this punchline worked here- the multi was decent but nothin special.
I think he's been drinkin booz he dos'nt know he' gonna lose//
Here's some newz If u were BIg foot u coul'nt fill my shoez//
the Big-Foot this o.k, but filler before... good flow though.
Ay Yo verse is like sex fo u/In da begining he dose so good his dick gets fatter//
then he splatters/ he fucks up and in the end The shit really dose'nt matter//
This was weak, it stretched again and the punch is basic and dont flow great.
Listen Rene /My rhymes somthing really rare like uranium//
He has 2pac but watch him get 2poped right to his cranium//(look at his avatar)
This is the best line Ive seen from you... very creative with the wordplay its a personal diss and the punchline sticks and stays... Good line.
Hey Rene your too late/If I could rate yo wackness I'll seal yo fate wit a fuckin 8//
he's a renegade/but da only thing he did rebellous was sayin he's not gonna be straight
This dont flow great, I see where you were tryin to go with the punch, attempted some play off his name- I just think you coulda worded it better..... I think all in all Renegade had better stuff in the begining than Sinista had toward the end.. His punches were stronger and I just felt it more... No Hate, Good Luck in the future both of you... Please return the favor... Vote- Renegade
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

renegade fuckin won that other faggot was fuckin weak, come battle me u fuckin bitch

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uppin

ya fuckin renegade came fuckin harder dawg...you throwin some weaker punches that need to be elevated.
Muthafucka dont test me cuz i dont wanna have ta get messy/
i hope u wore a vest b., cuz i snipe like wesley/


tight opener, this was a kinda close battle but the multis and harder punches and flow won dis battle.
v=im a muthafuckin renegade