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Mad Dog 06-04-04 06:17 AM

Destined 2 Rhyme vs Hypnotik Stratigies
 
Aight this is how its goin down

15-20 line spit
No Crew Hate D/R or unexplained votes
Ur crew to spit 1st as u called us out
Once all peeps have checked in then spit
Consider this my check in


Pming for votes currently against the rules:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
can u drop an honest vote on this battle..ill return the favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128115


-strobe

Killah Bwoy 06-04-04 06:21 AM

wtf..you didnt do it right...oh well...........im gettin my army together

t-storm 06-04-04 06:28 AM

how it goin down
 
this is how killah wanted it i think.5 on 5

i say we pick a man each to battle....

like killahvs......
kingvs.........
n so on

then if we hve 5 battles.......peeps can vote on each 1 seperately that way first to win 3 battles will hve won overall


killah hit this up lemme know if thats how its goin down or wot???????????

Mad Dog 06-04-04 06:41 AM

Aight change of plans this Thread is just for Me And Killah Bwoy find a battler and set it up wit him but dont forget to put the crew name in peeps lets get it crackin same rules jus me & Killah to post verses aight

t-storm 06-04-04 06:45 AM

ok
 
i want flowintelligent.......let him know that.............................................. .....

Mad Dog 06-04-04 11:28 AM

Aight sorry didnt realise the time yall Killah we gonn spit tomorrow?? coz i will

Killah Bwoy 06-04-04 07:28 PM

aiight fam imma drop now

here the new rules

10-16 lines
no d/r cv or biting
winner adds win under crew battle
blind spit
good luck

Mad Dog 06-05-04 05:58 AM

Aight crew battle goin down this how we do this...

(Verse)
Ok this is battle time and im standin my stance/
U bitches aint strategic...hypnotik how u cant even put a stoner into a trance/
The bal-ance of power has shifted consider ur skirts lifted/
See the windows is tinted rolls down now consider urselves gifted/
Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks/
Beat you bitches wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks/
Nice to see ya say bye to ur fam...ur times up in this life u know? how/

Mad Dog 06-05-04 06:15 AM

Sorry didnt post the rest this is it

Aight crew battle goin down this how we do this...

(Verse)
Ok this is battle time and im standin my stance/
U bitches aint strategic, hypnotik how u cant even put a stoner in a trance/
The bal-ance of power has shifted consider ur skirts lifted/
See the windows is tinted rolls down now consider urselves gifted/
Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks/
Beat you wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks/
Nice to see ya say bye to ur fam...ur times up in this life u know? how/
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
aiight fam imma drop now

U only went for a blind spit coz u too scared to look/
U shook i see you askin for help in the RB advice book/
Look in my eyes its no suprise you dont scare me wit weak rhymes/
Wit wack threats like...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/

U make laugh bwoy but as u see i aint fussed G/
Coz this is part 1 of D2R make bitches outta hypnotik Stratagies!/

(I saved the best till last heres sum creatitvity)

.................................................. ............................/

Killah Bwoy 06-05-04 11:56 PM

Rip Your head off your shoulders..so you can roll closer to victory-
Like That Nas Vs Jay-Z shit...Your Wack Battles Is History-
Even his chick dont luv him..his gurl stays on my dick like pubic hair-
Im hot ya raps dont even spark..bars strike you like the electric chair-
Kids Reppin Destined 2 Rhyme..battle me and you'll be Destined 2 Die-
Dudes Straight pussy..drivin passed me is his definition of A drive-by
My Rhymes sizzlin..Closest To Hot You'll ever be..is lightin a match-
Spit One line and leave your arms, chest, legs and head detached-

*track stops*

Mad dog: killah bwoy i love your sexy voice..and your rhymes just make me wanna OOOO
Killah Bwoy: wat the f...this nigga cant be serious..*POP* *POP* *POP*


*beat continues*

Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade-
Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-
You Wack..only time u see victory is when u battlin ur crew members-
Slam My Verse Into your brain..fam, this is a "loss to remember"-

Spl-tin flames rip-ya-brain respect's wat u lose, a loss is wat u gain-
Kids A shame..Split your frame..no difference you wack kids're all the same-


BOOOM!!!!!!

Mad Dog 06-07-04 04:27 AM

UPPIN THIS I CANT BELIEVE NO-1's VOTED YET C'MON!!

Mad Dog 06-07-04 07:59 AM

No no no no stop sleepin on this and start your voting now cha mon

Proliphik 06-07-04 08:16 AM

Nice battle - Mad Dog has upped his shyt, but Killah Bwoy weren't ready to be taken out either....... this was close, will have to give this one some thought......

Big Kountry 06-07-04 08:27 AM

holy shit uppin this shit man omg some oen fucking vote this is hot as fuck

.::N-Sight::. 06-07-04 10:33 AM

yea...interesting battle yo...looks like both were focused on winning this one

King Solo 06-07-04 10:40 AM

someone vote man........................................

Mad Dog 06-07-04 11:02 AM

Uppin this why aint yall votin this is a f***in classic

Big Kountry 06-07-04 11:05 AM

yo people are scared to vote becuz they dont want there vote to be called a d/r or hate

so if you vote nothin will come of it either way anyone vote on this word

BigTony.Self 06-07-04 12:12 PM

Uppiin

Know-Gimix 06-07-04 02:21 PM

No vote, just uppin this for some votes.... stop sleepin on these battles people

Mad Dog 06-08-04 04:07 AM

uppin this mutha fucka 1 more time up in here i wanna see some votes people

Kingz 06-08-04 06:49 AM

a crew battle between 2 good crews is always a problem wen it comes to voting
iight im'a break this down im MY honest opinion and if u think it a hate or a d/r vote
then battle me and i will fucking merk the shit ouuta u

iight here it goes:

(Verse)
Ok this is battle time and im standin my stance/
U bitches aint strategic, hypnotik how u cant even put a stoner in a trance/
6.5/10 solid punch and personal, line line stretched tho
The bal-ance of power has shifted consider ur skirts lifted/
See the windows is tinted rolls down now consider urselves gifted/
6/10 nice multi - i wudnt consider it a punch tho
Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks/
Beat you wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks/
7/10 - stretched agen but a very nice multi
Nice to see ya say bye to ur fam...ur times up in this life u know? how/
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
aiight fam imma drop now
7/10 - good personal nice use of quote
U only went for a blind spit coz u too scared to look/
U shook i see you askin for help in the RB advice book/
6.5/10 basic but a solid punch
Look in my eyes its no suprise you dont scare me wit weak rhymes/
Wit wack threats like...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
6.5/10 not much of a punch but good personal
U make laugh bwoy but as u see i aint fussed G/
Coz this is part 1 of D2R make bitches outta hypnotik Stratagies!/
6.5/10 ok wasent feelin it tho

(I saved the best till last heres sum creatitvity)

.................................................. ............................/

5/10 - nice idea cud have been fuckin sick if u worded it betta like:

just one word from me will leave ya whole crew bleedin...
...i could just post this "..........."...
but you would accuse me of feedin!


Rip Your head off your shoulders..so you can roll closer to victory-
Like That Nas Vs Jay-Z shit...Your Wack Battles Is History-
5/10 played as fuck
Even his chick dont luv him..his gurl stays on my dick like pubic hair-
Im hot ya raps dont even spark..bars strike you like the electric chair-
6/10 nice but again played
Kids Reppin Destined 2 Rhyme..battle me and you'll be Destined 2 Die-
Dudes Straight pussy..drivin passed me is his definition of A drive-by
8/10 fuckin sick - best line in the battle fo sho
My Rhymes sizzlin..Closest To Hot You'll ever be..is lightin a match-
Spit One line and leave your arms, chest, legs and head detached-
5/10 first line decent second line wack
Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade-
Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-
2/10 wtf? ur d/r suffer with aids? that aint even a punch
if anything it is a self diss

You Wack..only time u see victory is when u battlin ur crew members-
Slam My Verse Into your brain..fam, this is a "loss to remember"-
7/10 iight that was creative
Spl-tin flames rip-ya-brain respect's wat u lose, a loss is wat u gain-
Kids A shame..Split your frame..no difference you wack kids're all the same-
5/10 fuckin weak closer, ok multi tho

vote gotta go to mad dog, he was more consistant and good use of quotes

legendary battle tho fo sho

Mad Dog 06-08-04 07:13 AM

Aight finally we got a vote cmon peeps need more though UPPIN!!!

Prodigy 06-08-04 07:45 AM

COME ON PEOPLE !!! You don't get hot battles like this everyday... You know
where my vote would go....

Dont sleep on this!!!

Proliphik 06-08-04 07:46 AM

Third times a charm...

Mad Dog
Opener: 2/5
Flow:3/5
Punches: 3/5
Best Line: "Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks" and "U make laugh bwoy but as u see i aint fussed G/
Coz this is part 1 of D2R make bitches outta hypnotik Stratagies!"
Worst Line: "Beat you wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks" - one of my favorite and least favorite lines followed one another
References: 3/5
Originality:3/5
Finisher: 4/5 - strong finisher

Killah Bwoy
Opener: 2/5
Flow: 4/5 - nice flow
Punches: 3/5
Best Line: "Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade" - didn't really feel the follow up line tho.
Worst Line: the Gay Breakdown in mid-rhyme
References: 2/5
Originality:4/5
Finisher:4/5

Close as hell 4 real. I mighty lose a lil kudos for this vote and it was a photo finish.

Killah just gets it.

It still all love, tho.

One.

LyricalMethod 06-08-04 08:07 AM

where the fuck is 20grand. drop a verse bitch...we taking this shit

Mad Dog 06-08-04 10:34 AM

Uppin.............................................

Mad Dog 06-09-04 03:54 AM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mad Dog 06-09-04 06:55 AM

Aight 3 hours later im uppin yet again i swear this is a hott as fuck battle why yall sleepin on it

Prodigy 06-09-04 09:11 AM

Uping this battle why you sleeping on this!!!


Come On People!!!


~1~

Mad Dog 06-09-04 10:16 AM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mad Dog 06-10-04 04:19 AM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plustwo 06-10-04 07:51 AM

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...... dat battle was tight...

i thought u both showed true talent but if i had to give it some someone it would have to be mad dog because i thought his punches hit harder and it was better to read...

v/ mad dog


no hate.........

plustwo 06-10-04 08:12 AM

aight ill put in a proper explination........

mad dog:

aight i thought your verse was great, i enjoyed reading it n i thought your punches were good.

Opener: Ok this is battle time and im standin my stance/
U bitches aint strategic...hypnotik how u cant even put a stoner into a trance/

haha dat made me laugh... 7/10

Best punch: Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks/
Beat you bitches wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks/

lol i thought that was wicked 9/10

Worst punch: wasn't any really i thought they were all good

Worst line: The bal-ance of power has shifted consider ur skirts lifted/
See the windows is tinted rolls down now consider urselves gifted/

had to pick one but this was the one i wasn't feelin that much.

Best line: U only went for a blind spit coz u too scared to look/
U shook i see you askin for help in the RB advice book/

haha that made me laugh i thought that was great....

overall 9/10


Killah Bwoy:

aight i thought your verse was good aswell...

Opener: Rip Your head off your shoulders..so you can roll closer to victory-
Like That Nas Vs Jay-Z shit...Your Wack Battles Is History-

hmmm wasn't bad but couldve bin better. 6/10

best punch:Even his chick dont luv him..his gurl stays on my dick like pubic hair-
Im hot ya raps dont even spark..bars strike you like the electric chair-

haha that made me laugh lol 8/10

worst punch: Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade-
Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-

wasn't feelin that 1 really.. 5/10

Best line: You Wack..only time u see victory is when u battlin ur crew members-
Slam My Verse Into your brain..fam, this is a "loss to remember"-

ha dat was funny 7/10

Worst line: Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade-
Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-

what was with that line i dint get it atall....

overall 8.5/10

already voted this is ma proper explination................

no hate. peace..............

Mad Dog 06-10-04 08:44 AM

Aight uppin this for many more votes come on peoples LETS GET THESE VOTES CRACKIN!!!

Prodigy 06-10-04 01:34 PM

Uping some votes for my boi^

King Solo 06-11-04 05:28 AM

aight this battle has no point anymore cuz the H.S. crew disbanded but i'm gonna vote anyway................................

Mad Dog: nice drop playa, u came with some heat this time...one of ure best spits i have seen. ure structure was the only poor thing about ure verse, cuz lines were short then stretched...it didn't affect ure flow greatly though which worked well throughout......u had the punches in there with some of them hitting hard whilst others were pretty basic. personals were gud, u dissed killah a few times and some were fuckin funny as hell. u dropped a couple of quotes in there which was gud, showed sum creativitity and u weren't using played concepts which is always gud.
OVERALL 7.5/10

Killah Bwoy: once again playa u came with the heat, a nice structure all the way through, nuthin overly stretched......u flow was tight, i was feelin ure verse from start to finish. u had the punches and personals in there and i think that they were hitting harder than mad dog mainly but a couple that weren't. u showed some originality and creativity, nuthin too basic, u showed a gud complex rhyme scheme most of the time. the middle part where da track stops that was some funny ass shit. overall i give the battle to u cuz i thought u hit that little bit harder and u had a better structure and flow. OVERALL 8/10

V/ - Killah Bwoy

FreSh_EmCee 06-11-04 06:58 AM

close battle that one, i thought mad dog u cud have started better and stronger. i think that was tha only thing that let me down on yo verse. u got really strong towards tha end though. that shit was pretty tight. u had pretty tight flow and strong punches. this battle woz really tight man. lol. killah though, man right from tha start started ripping this shit up. i think that lil bit where tha beat stops thing wrecked it a bit. killah came with strong punches as usual and nice personals. tha flow woz pretty tight too.
Mad Dog
Flow: 8/10
Structure: 7/10
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 7.5/10
Metas: 7/10
Overall: 37.5/50

Killah Bwoy:
Flow: 7.5/10
Structure: 7.5/10
Punches: 8/10
Personals: 8/10
Metas: 8/10
Overall: 39/50

Conclusion: it was quite a close battle but i think tha start of mad dogz verse let him down. i think if u came 100% right from tha start u cud have taken it but killah juz ripped it up in here. props to ya both but, that woz some tight shit

Vote = Killah Bwoy

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Killah Bwoy 06-11-04 07:06 AM

Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-

oh and that line ^^ means....

they dickridin on my lyrics...and my lyrics is SICK...so they leavin wit aids..feel me

Big Kountry 06-11-04 08:40 AM

I am gonna drop an honest vote cuz nither of you to are in my crew so this doesnt count as a crew vote word so be perpared for some critisim

Rip Your head off your shoulders..so you can roll closer to victory-
Like That Nas Vs Jay-Z shit...Your Wack Battles Is History-
gay opener this is not how you want to start off a battle 3/10

Even his chick dont luv him..his gurl stays on my dick like pubic hair-
Im hot ya raps dont even spark..bars strike you like the electric chair-
ths punch was wack dick jokes are played and you didnt set up the electric chair thing good enough 4/10

Kids Reppin Destined 2 Rhyme..battle me and you'll be Destined 2 Die-
Dudes Straight pussy..drivin passed me is his definition of A drive-by
ok but agian not a real hard punch you did flip of his name but this was ok 5/10

My Rhymes sizzlin..Closest To Hot You'll ever be..is lightin a match-
Spit One line and leave your arms, chest, legs and head detached-
stupid punch dam 2/10

*track stops*

Mad dog: killah bwoy i love your sexy voice..and your rhymes just make me wanna OOOO
Killah Bwoy: wat the f...this nigga cant be serious..*POP* *POP* *POP*
this was retarded i got to take away points for you doin this word dont make shit up to force a personal
*beat continues*

Kid You BITCH MADE...cut you open with this switch blade-
Mad Dog Stay Away..'cause all my dickriders suffer from aids-
this was a good punch you set this up desent but not enough to have anyreal effect 5/10

You Wack..only time u see victory is when u battlin ur crew members-
Slam My Verse Into your brain..fam, this is a "loss to remember"-
good this you set up good the only good punch you had and it wasnt great but it was good 7/10

Spl-tin flames rip-ya-brain respect's wat u lose, a loss is wat u gain-
Kids A shame..Split your frame..no difference you wack kids're all the same-
stupid closer you forced the word play and made this sound real shit ok 2/10

Killah Bwoy 23/60 = 38 %

Ok this is battle time and im standin my stance/
U bitches aint strategic, hypnotik how u cant even put a stoner in a trance/
Good opener but the first sentence didt set this up to well but aleast you fliped off the name 7/10

The bal-ance of power has shifted consider ur skirts lifted/
See the windows is tinted rolls down now consider urselves gifted/
just a filler nothing to hot word 2/10

Wit 10 hot shots hittin the soft spots HS a victim of D2R's 5 glocks/
Beat you wit rocks and knock u boys out wit cue balls concealed in socks/
good word play nice self groifaction of you crew i like this word but it didt hit hard enough 6/10

Nice to see ya say bye to ur fam...ur times up in this life u know? how/
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
aiight fam imma drop now
this is good use of a quete the only real shot i have seen so far in this battle as a personal and you set it up well 8/10

U only went for a blind spit coz u too scared to look/
U shook i see you askin for help in the RB advice book/
Funny ass punch and good set up with the personal 7/10

Look in my eyes its no suprise you dont scare me wit weak rhymes/
Wit wack threats like...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
haha another personal that also dubles as a hot ass punch word 8/10

U make laugh bwoy but as u see i aint fussed G/
Coz this is part 1 of D2R make bitches outta hypnotik Stratagies!/
ok closer but nothin to memorable word 4/10

(I saved the best till last heres sum creatitvity)

.................................................. ............................/
Haha this shit is funny good way to make fun of his creativty another hat perosnal 6/10

mad dog 48/80 = 60 %

ok even though Maddog had more lines he still came harder on this one and as much as i hate to addmit it he won and this was a very close battle

V/ Mad dog


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