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<>-^RASCAL vs KeTcH~22^-<>
8-10 lines
no d/r...hate votes g-luck |
aiight im in man..
the latest i will spi will be midnight GMT.. ot work in 1hr 30.. and i gota do another verse now so ill be done ASAP.. G'luck.. |
ok im ready to spit real quick now before work..
gonna key it up now.. pz. |
i repeat if u don't get the wordplay DON'T VOTE..good luck Ras...
Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you… Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue… Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess… & like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death… I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares, & After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs) Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs… Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head… |
*clicks Fingers*
oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter.. wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator.. Fuck your Dreams, you Wont Even Be considerd dope There.. Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE.. Im probly sikest riht hear on rb.. hell even the Net.. Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet".. seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22.. i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?. grilin you in 10 lines like im George "grillin" Forman.. your undefeated bcus your opponets aint perfomin..(performin = no=showin) quick 10 so vote plz.. don D/R.. |
1 is worst / 10 is best
--------------------- rascal: personals/5 punches/6 structure/3 creativity/5 ketch: personals/7 punches/5 structure/4 creativity/7 rascal:19 / ketch:23 vote: ketch... better pucnhes, and came original, i didnt see any played lines... congrats, return tha favor....... my battles should be somewhere close to tha top of frontlines 1st page.. hit 'em up ...erm bye |
you got beef, than lets battle, otherwise watch yor mout round me, i dont play d/r games bitch [sorry for free post] ... erm bye
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...weak battle...
Rascal had some good Punches...Structure wasn't all that & same wit the Vocab. Racal`s best line (probably) seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22.. i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?. (shit was funny...) Ketch had some `ok` punches..Structure was ok and same wit the Vocab... Ketch~22 best line (probably) now people said your good.. there just silly, you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy" Overall Imma have to go wit RASCAL because he kept hittin' KeTcH~22 wit punches 'n' shit... v/ RASCAL |
both verses was not great but ketch's was more clever cuz sum of rascal's shit was played and it was boring. ketch had better structure and mutis.
vote= Ketch |
hmm....
Twas a close battle, but rascal just got it.
Flow: I think this was a draw. Both people had good lines, and both had lines that were off beat. Basically it was very close. Meta's: Rascal got this one for the sick animal / vet line. That was a good line, and well though out. Katch didn't really get nething close. Multi's: Both didn't really have ne here, so it's a draw. Punches: Close here too. Rascal got it though, because although katch had a few, they were all pretty dull. Rascal's were more interesting and a little better generally. Personals: I haven't really paid much attention to the site of late, so i don't really understand the personals, so i won't vote based on these. Overall: Rascal got it just by being a little more creative. |
a yo i think ketch killed this kid with his wordplay and his punches..vote ketch
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Rascal
*clicks Fingers* oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter.. wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator.. - This punch doesn't work... If you said "Couldn't bring heat to this battle with a Portable radiator" it would have been better, and Im sure you could have worded it even better than that so that the first line wouldn't be just filler- as it stands the wordplay is very basic Fuck your Dreams, you Wont Even Be considerd dope There.. Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE.. This doesn't flow that great and the punch is pretty basic but Ill give ya credit. Im probly sikest riht hear on rb.. hell even the Net.. Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet".. lol- Ive seen this concept differently before but it took some creativity, good use of wordplay to setup the punch. seriously its amazing no-one has beat kEtcH 22.. i looked at your call-out thread thinkin who the fuck are you.?. O.K- it flows nice but the punch isn't really effective, your not really insulting him that much with this line. grilin you in 10 lines like im George "grillin" Forman.. your undefeated bcus your opponets aint perfomin..(performin = no=showin) I think using grillin twice hurts your total vocab, there are 500 words I could have thought to put in place- the punch is decent a little basic but decent none-the-less... All in all not a horrible verse, I just think you could use a little work on your punches and some multis in there would help with flow... Good Luck in the future. Ketch Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you… Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue… lol, good wordplay here- this was a solid punch- decent opener. Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess… & like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death… lol, more good wordplay here... Like a Tricked Hurse- means Im hookin up death... I think I mighta seen this concept before, but its clever either way- props. I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares, & After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs) LMAO- very creative use of wordplay here- very effective Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs… Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head… decent way to close it.... This whole verse had a good flow and some strong punchlines backed up by strong wordplay- Good Verse... Props--- Ima have to say this battle was won by Ketch, He had stronger wordplay, His Punches were all strong and stuck... You used some good personals and even some good personal association of his name with some of the punches... Vote- Ketch... Please return the favor. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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Ketch was spittin bars but they came a little weak, they had potential u jus needed to word it better. Rascal was nice for sum quick flips and got to the point. Even Ketch's come back lines came weak. Rascal came thru and like a champ and show why he has a Ko under his name
winner..... RASCAL |
Ketch:
personals/5 punches/6 structure/3 creativity/5 Rascal: personals/7 punches/5 structure/4 creativity/7 rascal wins this but just barly.......you need to write your shit up when you find the person to battle because it isnt any gud if its prewritten.....but yeah keep elevating both of you |
thanx i appriciate the votes.. leaves links and ill hit them up.. |
Yo, not bad verses from either MCs. Ketch had good punches and wordplay, whereas Rascal your's seemed to not make any sense in parts or seemed a lil corny. for example...
Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE.. Dat was jus horrible, sorry... and.. oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter.. wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator.. Dat was aiight, but made da beginning of your verse fall off a lil bit... You did have some hot lines doe... Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet".. << Dat's nice You had tight personals too, which is what Ketch lackked in his spit. Ketch 22, no personals, but a lot of witty wordplay and punches... I can't really say dat your verse fell off at all in any parts... Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you… Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue… Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess… & like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death… I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares, & After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs) Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs… Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head… Shit, all good lines wid punches da whole way thru. Some more personals would have been nice, and woulda made your verse a lot better doe. I did notice dat Alphapha line which was aiight, but nothin like Rascals personals at you... Judging by which verse was most consistent all da way thru Ima have to give this ish to Ketch. Rascal, your shit was nice dawg, but I jus felt as if it was a lot less complex, and fell off in parts, which also made a few lines seemed forced. Close battle to judge doe. Congrats to whoever wins... VOTE=KETCH |
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iight basically this was a pretty weak battle...........
ive seen some of ketches shyt and i think he came reaslly weak in this battle..... punches: rascal flow:ketch personals:tie(rascal had mroe but i think ketches were better) creativity:ketch close 1 but this goes 2 ketch........... |
Ketch22 had the vocab down, good lyricism, good flow in general. Best line, "Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess…& like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death"
Rascal took it though for both metaphors and personal. It was all close, but the personals are what put Rascal over the top. v/Rascal |
CLose battle but
rascal-Came pretty nice....seem like you know what your doing so no really need for me to tell what to improve on...Nice spit Ketch-Aight spit also..Came realyl close...But Fell off a lil...Rascal takes this becuz of his punches...Both have the structure v/ Rascal Return the favor please...He d/rin me and I murked him http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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