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Soul~Skriptz Vs Spul Vs Babylon Vs Shadow Edge Vs Triple N
RULES
Votes up to 5.... Simple vote for the TWO YOU THINK WON not in order just the two and explain why they won overall anybody if you wish you may explain whtat the other 3 lacked it up to you. you must vote 1st place 2nd place Check in by - Monday Verses Due - Wednesday Votes Finsh on Friday.... Please try to get you verses doooone quick dont take forever goood luck all 20lines |
Check in....
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Wha... how the fuck is this going to work? Anyway, checking in. 20 line max... hmm. Good luck.
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Read The Rules of the TWISTED TEN...
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YO! this shit is crazy......I love this kinda shit..........
this is great......this is gonna be fun as shit...... one........checked in........... |
Checkin' in this shit
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checkin' in. 20 lines. Yea, that' sgonna be tough, but let's do this.
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Blah... wrote this at 8 in the morning after not sleeping for a while... fuck it, check:
Four whack bitches, each sporting a smiling face … just glad they can finally look forward to second place They winning is literally a fairy tale, a crock … cuz when I drop, fuck a silver, it’s gold-I-lock Babylon is Nada, Nothing, Nil… but worse still Is if you don’t see his ghostwriter… look closely, you will CS and RS, whackness sitting side by side Tough to keep these bitches straight…. …………....... Believe me, their parents tried And Spul think he good, clearly got it twisted … sig bragging about awards that ain’t even existed Kid’s an independent writer… verses never go with the flow Bought some of LI’s beats, but still got no work to show Soul, with a mug so ugly the personals are facile kid would save face… but it ain’t even worth the hassle Still got n english tutor, g, you'll never fucking compare Yep, like school kids hitting puberty… …………………………………………†¦I just dropped four square |
BYE MR SWAY.
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Check links FIRST for maxium effect
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...ghlight=parents http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=120388&page=1 Quote:
Oh and SpuL is Indian i'm not posting pics - not allowed to it's 5 way unfair. .............. ............. ........... .......... ........ ...... .... ... .. . SpuL sit back ya careers done.. not by me - it was by ya mum & parents always no best . . Herb's ?! They just go rid of OnE Shadow.. seriously kid you suck..i dunno how you win belts ya the type of fag to come here & say it's every man for himself. ...& I'm known to rape fakes - But yeah shadow hate's me now.. Now lets be serious?!? you werent dope until you bit off native's style , m Superb with Words... the fucking best it's a fact - dont argue.. AND i'm the Best . . . Wait?!? Triple N - who the fuck are YOU? Trip's unabled ta be superior & i dout he can show me skill Cos he's biting pieces off more than Tyson did to Holyfied Trip werent you the same cat - begging me to let you in the Method?! & Son... How Can you be a vet when ya rocking 14 losses in ya record . . Bab's You get crushed by herb's . . Shiit even They Demand ya wack . & You could'nt reach my power of game....with a 64 expansion pack. It's Worthless.. I'm above average & a whole in a fraction.. AND only 1 will last in 5.... just ask all the jacksons . . Damn Triple N dont trip.. ya not a veteran , fag... So..I'll leave you seeing more star's.. Than the american flag I love to prounce . . SPuL Should Bounce.. it's already clear defeat AND The Reason SpuL dont beef @ all . . is cos indians cant eat meat. |
6 hours left .
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Yo, the last time I checked up on RB was on Saturday, so some of the punches might not be current, but whatever. Here I go: *a shadow falls upon the stage* The rules aren't "fair", but that's the equivalent wit yo face and all that hair You look so damn repulsive; a robber would offer you their mask to wear You're the white boy in rap concerts, that's so stupid, that he gets trampled Who went to Circuit City, and got caught... stealin' a free AOL sample *A nothing is tripled*
Negative remarks, are all you get when you start to spit Nobody believes you're a gangsta, cuz all you can pop, is a zit Never will admit your problems, you say, "show no sorrow to me" But all your problems have built yo verse, into a big horror movie *Scripted Souls*
"I 'riped' N-Sight." Man, you shouldn't be laughin' if that shit is tru "Ripe" means to grow and develop, dumbass, that means the joke's on you M-Section is Murderous Masks, so why you encompass him in yo sig twice? Such a brainless bloke, mind readers have to charge you half the price (Stuff that used to be in his sig, don't kno if it's still there) *Fool babbling on*
You're from the Chryme Syndacate, no wonder "Sin" is yo main "virtue" Yo parents commited a sin 19 years ago, bitch, sorry to hurt you "Killin' niggas".. huh, is that what you like to do? Man, if I looked like you, wit a razor, I would too *Closin' shit out*
Yea, it's tru, I always utilize purple font, when I post up my shit Unlike you bitches, I have one and don't ride it, a fuckin' dick My parents DID ban me from RB, but I'm still writin' to have you fucked You guys got merked by someone who spat blindy, now who really sucks? *curtains close* |
Oh yeah only elevated cat's can vote here
So people with 11 wins from frontline he came to be good - No You'll have to drop some battle link's from EVL. |
soul skripts are all the verses done...well the people who got them in on time cuz ill vote for top 2 now
edit: 2 of the people who dropped verses are in my crew i can still vote fairly on who i think had the hotter verses even tho we same crew...cuz im goin on hotter verses not who is in my crew or not |
whats good.........
this battle will be a breeze.......and i'll do it with a smile.... n' take it from spul cuz after this battle......... ...............................yall "wont be back for a while".... n' shadow is disapeerin'......cuz he's already rattled in his flow.... n edge will blow up this stage...cuz he wins titles form no shows... n' skripts crawed into this battle...cuz he knew what L would say... Quote:
but L stop callin ghostwrighters...we all know your styles a lie... and u must see your lost comin'...cuz the L is in front of your I... shadow edge is wack...and we dont care, so just say your shit... n' edge finally got a good style...after he bought and paid for it... N' trip u played and recycled...but truthfully we really dont know... but he does have lock jaw................. ........cuz when it cums to bittin lines....damn! he wont let go.... and as yall read this whole verse.....we know you listen in fear... cause like someone bootlegin n'sync CD's.............. ................................yall relise you have no buisness here..... and Shadow should just retire cause...ya wack, u just cant last.... cuz after this battle...like SS's name....your styles changin fast.... and LI's Original my ass!...he probly just speeks with diffrent slurrs.... but like the dots he puts in his name.....all of his points are blurred.... these 4 cats aint worthy, they wack...and they show no type of flow... but the last punch is for triple but all I can say is...No!...No!...No!... |
and I got mine in on time cuz its 11:20 here...........
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yo is LI in this battle.............?
cause I was typin so fast tryn to git this shit in I dont know if he was in it........... but I thought he was cause he posted a verse............. |
i know it 11 :20 deadline was 2hours & 20 mins ago eastern time but
. .But I'll Let It Go...... At Least you bothered posting.. I'm Sure Shadow Wont Mind. Yes crew votes allowed. as long as thee elvated |
Lmao . . Bab's L.I posted for SPuL could you not tell.
L.I's name aint on the thread & its to late to edit you verse that's pretty much fucked up your personals. |
damn i feal dumb.............................. :huh:
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yea, he posted my verse. Well, yea, guess only 4 people posted. Uppin' for votes. I'm back for a while, so yea.
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yo y'all know that i battle in elevated
if u want proof look no further than my sig. both them battles in elevated anyway i'm just gonna drop some feedback on the two i think won and why.................... Soul Skriptz u are the definite pick cuz u had the strongest verse out of all of them. u had a nice structure with everything kept similar length and it helped u with a tight flow from beginning to end. ure verse gave me a lot of laughs with some funny ass lines. u had a lot of original punches in ure drop and personals were like in nearly every line. ure wordplay was slightly basic in a few spots but mainly u had a complex rhyme scheme going on. took it to every MC in the battle, didn't really focus on a particular one, u shared out the disses. u opened gud and stayed consistent throughout ure verse but ure closer............DAMN that was sum funny shit, best line of this entire battle!! SPuL personally i think the other three verses were pretty weak when compared to skriptz they were just not on par with his level. but i do think that out of the 3 SPuL had the best one. even tho ure lines were pretty stretched it didn't fuck up ure flow which stayed tight from beginning to end. u had a nice variety of punches for each MC and the personals were gud in there to, sum funny shit. u to had sum nice original punches, not like some verses that are full of played lines and personals. u had a nice rhyme scheme although it was pretty basic vocab in a few places, not as gud as skriptz. overall i think u came pretty weak compared to wat u can do, u cud have had some better personals and some harder punches. but u did come stronger than shadows edge and babylon so u get my 2nd vote. V/ - Soul Skriptz & SPuL |
Soul Skripts
I choose you becuz you was wicket and had everything, Punches was on the basic step and Stuff..Structure was desent anfd very easy to read giving a good type of spit in balance..SImilies was put in there and a lil bit of metaphores..Dont know about personals becuz I wasnt very into it..this was a quik vote Spul You came aight SO I choose you becuz you creativity murked it.. I liked how your style was and how the punches mainly stayed focused and direct, Also the metaphores was On top and structure was decnet and Had a few more things in there... Rest Of Yall I have to say babylon was close..and shadows was Not very into it in my opinion, Kind of lacked in alot of things and came weak in a way, Triple N was decent and Ordinary, But babylon Murked it with the No No No part.. 1st=Soul Skriptz 2nd=Spul Also Soul Knows I battle in elevated |
I'm guessing im
Winning. Oh yeah if your gonna vote Make sure you put 1st = . . & 2nd = . . |
Cos its
1st vs 2nd 2nd vs 1st. |
Wow.
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ok, so me and Soul move on.
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