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the 8th wonder vs WillNova
aight lets get this over with,
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I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins// reach within, and give it ya heart and soul// worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls// stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs// ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs// u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives// I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges// its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble// predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals// with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled// knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double// ....aight , do ya thing and spit ya verses |
aight, here's my shit to match yours
Yo, check it....... Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins// Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin// It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband// And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands// Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage// Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage// Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle// Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled// Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already// You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony// Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave// And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave// that'll teach you..................i think. |
Damn!!!! now thats one of tha best battles i've seen so far this one was very very close but imma give it 2 Tha 8th wonder because his punches hit tha hardest.... big up to both emcees doe
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damn, ya done forgot about us, uppin for votes.... up. up, uppin
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come on man, lets get some votes on this battle, it's been over a day and theres only one vote been done, we need more, WE NEED MORE!!!
anyways, good battle WillNova. |
Yo if i choud Vote i Whould Vote For the 8th wonder
Reality more Skillz |
uppin for votes, damn! nobodys voting in this man! someone vote
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yoyoyo, we still need sum votes up here, still uppin... Yeah them were sum tight bars 8th wonder, u were a worthy opponent.... now lets get sum votes
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pretty good match
8-th came with some decent few hard punches structure was aight ...juss work on some things will-Came close but good try..Punches need more work an dats what wins battles....so does similies and metaphores..Work on Them things elevate v/8th wonder return the favor for me doing yours http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
willnova better flowing verse. better punches and personals. 8th you was aight but nothing to good. you wrote alpt of bullshit. get st8 to the point next time, don't beat rounf the bush. you need beteer pucnhes and lyrics. oh yeah your structure was fucked too, try not to stretch you lines, if you have good punches it will shoe in you verse, keep writtin. willniva u need to elevate 2, step up you multi's and punches too, cuz you thinkin u the shit.
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aight, gonna need more votes on this shit, i've upped this quite a few times already, and i've gave some threads to other battle threads, but aint no people voting
it's 1-1 and this gotta keep going! uppin for votes........ |
will had better punches and flow/structure. 8ths verse was aite, but sometimes didnt flow well at all. both dope verses tho, a lot of potential.
ps. can u guys return the favour and vote in my battles: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128631 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
still uppin for votes, com' on people this has been delayed for too long lets get sum votes in... thanx
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yo i vote willnova he tore it up in there like ya verse same as other guy but will gotta have this one
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thanx for all the votes, but we still need more votes... still and always will be uppin for them votes. lets finish this
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8th won, he had better punchlines, the other one, just had to work on his punch's a little better. return the favor.
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The 8th wonder gets my vote- he had better vocab punches and flow
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will had betta punches, but his end was weak, an 8th you stretched ya lines to much an bad structure. yall both did good though, good battle
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yall return tha favor too
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whew... this is close, good look fo the votes.... lets get sum more in to finish it
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Flow=Don't Know
Wordlay=WillNova Personals=None Creative=8th wonder Punches=Tie Ok that was a really close battle.Neither really had punches that would make you say "damn",so y'all got a tie.There was really no personals,if any.I gave 8th Wonder the creative for the Brittany marriage line.Hmmm...this damn battle too close.Let me glance one more time.I gotta go with 8th Wonder,cuz he had better punches after looking over it again.Hit my battle dammit \/ Vote=8th Wonder |
I guess we still need more votes people, lets get them votes in.... still uppin
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Oh hell nah. Some of y'all either ain't just seeing straight, or is just plain ignant.
This battle wasn't even close, it went to 8th. His punches were tight and completely crushed the competition, he was creative- I saw some shit there I'd never read in other posts before, and he was funny. vote- 8TH! |
ok, lets get them votes in.... who you think did better, uppin for them votes as usual
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still uppin fo votes, lets get them in.... I'm ain't gettin no votes
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i gotta say willnova
will did not have the greatest of punchlines all the time, but i felt some of them. his structure was better adn it flowed better wonders was still a decent verse, i liked a few of his punclines better, but i did not like the flow or the structure. one line would be too short the other too long. if you would fix it up and haev maybe one better punchline you would have taken it close battle very good |
and to my previous message i would but i cant vote yet so go on and use that as a tip
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thanx for the votes people, but we need sum more to finish this.... uppin for votes
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still uppin, this one has been going on too long, lets jus get sum votes in....
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let me break it down
Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin// 7/10 didnt just give ya that cuz my name up in it... but good openin, and creativity It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband// And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands// 6/10 creative, my opion kinda a weak punch tho Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage// Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage// 4/10 alright punch... shoulda said j-low instead of brit...*SLAnTED Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle// Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled// 5/10 nother alright punch, didnt surprise me much to be honest... Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already// You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony// 7/10 better punch Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave// And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave// 8/10 good endin, way to flip his garbage shit, but still could of been better... *minus 3 points for slanted extended bars... sorry homz how i do it... I'm checkin in, so lets begin// battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins// 8/10 good openin, and good checkin... just get to the point lol reach within, and give it ya heart and soul// worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls// 7/10 nice punch feelin that shit.. way to extend from the last bars...(WITHIN) stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs// ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs// 5/10 might be tru, kinda weak tho u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives// I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges// 6/10 alight its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble// predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals// 7/10 gettin alittle better, im feelin that all 8th did was reverse alot of ya shit... now im just feelin like im readin the same shit twice.... with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled// knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double// 7/10 alright ending... 33/60-8th 40/60-will nove more breakin down...check it 8th, thought ya flow was sick when i first read it cause i read ya's first....then after i read will's i noticed all ya did was try to reverse his shit... not to hate or nothin... be more creative next time.... thats why im given this one to will... i would have given ya a shit more points if i didnt feel like you just tryin to reverse everything.. but other then that alright battle for ya 2, return the fav up on my audio....up in my sig under calamity... |
I cant vote cuz me and nova in crew but heres my opinion.
Will. His flows and multis were on point. dont listen to miss. lyricist. Ud merk this bitch. Ur punches were creative and didn't disrupt the flow of Ur verse. Its all out ill. I liked everything on it. nice work. Ur verse get a 9 out of 10 8th. ur was also good. nah, im just messing wit. U lacked creativity and just rode ur opponents dick thru out the entire thing. What, I do this? well I do this while Im doing it....to U!!! thats wat Ur whole verse sounds like. Ur meditating on a carrage line sucked, it wasnt a punch at all. Ur flow was ok, but it whent off and on multiple times. nothing fresh about ur verse that caught my attention or made me thank that U could win. Ur verse gets a 6 out of 10. wouldve gotten more if U stop feeding of his verse and just spit ur own shit. My vote would go to WillNova becouse of Punches, creativity, personals, flow, and structure. it aint got nothing to do wit crew or me hating, I vote like this all the time when I see a man getting merked in the battle. it has nothing to do wit U and everything to do wit Ur verse. sorry if I affended U. |
WillNova
I'm checkin in, so lets begin// battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins// ->>wasted a whole line checkin in? its ok 4/10 reach within, and give it ya heart and soul// worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls// ->>pretty good 6/10 stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs// ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs// ->>doesnt make sense 2/10 u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives// I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges// ->>doesnt connect...3/10 its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble// predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals// ->>kinda cool 5/10 with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled// knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double// ->>alright closer 4/10 ->>total: 24/60 the 8th wonder Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins// Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin// ->>feeding and second line makes no sense 3/10 It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband// And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands// ->>feeding but ok 5/10 Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage// Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage// ->>feeding and second line is wayy stretched 4/10 Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle// Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled// ->>feeding but ok punch 5/10 Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already// You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony// ->>feeding + wack 2/10 Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave// And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave// ->>feeding and second line doesnt make sense 4/10 ->>total 23/60 this was a real close battle but WillNova took it. youve gotta be more original than that 8th feeding is for herbs...and also making sense is more important than rhyming. no hate just advice. will you gotta work on making sense too man that mole role line was real wack v/willnova \/hit these up honestly\/ |
can we call a tie?Seriously both were good but willa's
rhymes were better structure was locked and came heavy right frm the start. |
aight people, this is a close one... but lets get sum votes in so we can finish it.... uppin again
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aight check it
i think that willnova's punches hit a lil harder 8th had alot more creativity 8th i like that last bars of yours will i am feeling that coffe mug line v- willnova |
best lines were:
Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins// Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin// It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband// And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands// Structure: Will Flow: 8th Vocab: Will Punches: 8th <came hard as hell best closer: 8th> Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave// And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave// ha haa lol nice battle you two, but i gotta give the vote to 8th Wonder, nigga you took this shit.. aight check my links in my sig ~LK diss~ aight ~wun~ |
aight, thanx for the vote fiya, sense the sarcasim.... naw but good look fo the votes, lets get sum more in and finsh it, uppin uppin as always
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Ok k k nice drop from the both of u i like votein on battlez like this cuz i have 2 break down every single line 2 decides who win but hands down the hottest bar in the whole battle was "u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives// I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//" that bar jus about won it 4 will he had nice structure nice vocab nice meta's but you lacked in the personals kid you need 2 up that but otha than that perfect drop "Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage// Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//" 8th that was ya hottest bar also good wordplay somewhat good complexity you could of elevated on that and ya struc was a lil off which if you had that on point you could of took this one My Vote= Wil ~~~~~~Good Drop Fella'z~~~~~~~ |
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