Battle: Buck15 vs Da Jokah
 

Rules:

5-10 bars
3-0 KO, or 1st to 5votes
check in drop 20min after u check in
no crew,d/r,hater votes
u spit 1st

yo dawg ..... its topical..bout ya block....and its 5 to 30 lines aight be can u change it..ill still spit first

yo I will check this out when he drops but can someone check this battle out I will repay thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128196

this is a topical battle aight b...its on ya block aight ill spit aobut mine u spit bout yurs aight be easy nigga 5 to 25 or 30 lines aight qun....

nah i'm not feelin da topical battle u got to take dat 2 somebody else

aight den either u spit first or a blind spit aight wun.....

i set it up cuz u wanted 2 battle so eitha u spit 1st or 2 hell wit dis battle

ayo check it

This bitch new to r.b ..so let me sho him da ropes//
get out da z..3..and let me show him dsa scopes//
this bitch back reppin tha hood..but he to grimey//
he cant stay at wun place.like ma words ..try me//
Buck15..is dat ya bank balance or ya pay checkz//
ma bullets u'll stick to ya skin liek day was laytex//
Bring ya bois ill set dem up and drop em like dominoes//
if ma words dont kill u ..ya stds wil lfrom all dem hoes//
Quick to back down thats tha only thing u good for//
Usually i dont hit bitches but a well us a hood hore//
Every body hate u why dont u just kill ya self//
Everywere durs a cat and he always killa a mouse//
Never ever come to my block..wit dat nasty shit//
Zebra stripes waat ya girl got on her..nasty bitch//
Wen i pulled out ma glock...... i should have stuck wit 16//
and wit ya bitch wen i pulled out ma cock she sayed fuck buck15//

e.z niggas wun..

He's too advanced for his own good
He didn't get a second chance to see the glock pointed at his hood//

Makin' his way through the rain he's caught in the game
He felt the pain of a slug to the back of the brain//

Nothin's changed in a city flask
Where niggas lurk in black shirts pants and low hats, forever
Until the job is done and no one's left//

My man Jokah told me with his very last breath
To watch moms
But they got her with the car bomb//

Pop tried to save her second blast got his arm//

Straight to apocalypse is where I'm takin the art
Givin niggaz battle scars, ALWAYS makin my mark//

You fakin the part of gangster, til niggaz break in your spot
You straight bitch whether I say it or not//

uppin fo votes.......

winner buck 15
Da jokah was just too simple and i think that buck15 came out harder with over all better lines

Buck...You used "He" too much. Flow wasen't too bad but your structure wasen't really that good. Elevate a little on the vocab and you really didn't have many punches.

Jokah...pretty good spit. Nice structure and flow. You had some good punches and personals. Neither of you really had any multi's. Nice flow though.

Overall Vote...Da Jokah

The structure & punches has to go to Jokah he had harder punches &* the strcture was betta...plus like what ' $mokeSkreen ' said Buck kept usinm 'he' 2 much so this battle goes to Da JoKaH

aiyo my vote goes to da jokah cuz buck's rhymes werent illin enough and were way to simple. jokah's line about showin him da ropes was tight too

da jokkah that was a fuckin ill verse i was feelin that scopes line..you straight gangsta nucca i like dat fo sho...you kept this sick...you stayed consistant....your punches and personals was hittin hard good shit dawg

buck15: no im sorry you need to work on your shit fam....it wasnt hittin too hard and dont space out your lines keep em all together...your personals were ok but your punches werent hittin.....your flow and structure was bad too

vote: da jokah

dis battle wuz one of da best ones i see as a newbie i feel that jokah had da better structure and humor but buck came out harder with his punches and overall flow

vote-buck

well i dunno wut to say about dis battle it wuz str8 they wuz bout even all da way thru and i liked how jokah spelled out queenz but buck came out hard as hell on dem personals and humor so he gets da vote

buck-v

i think that buck had a betta all around flow and he came much harder that dah jokah and thats what made me vote for buck

i thought joker had him...nice structure but rhyme scheme was weak...buck kicked some multies & punched alil...give it ta buck..real close tho..1