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Blaziin Aziin vs Smartzz
rules:
5-10 line max no bitin or feedin no d/R or hate verse due in 15 min check in doesnt matter who spit first anytime before 15 min |
my skillz pack explosives, leave haters thoughts emotive../
keep other niggaz ascertive, they know i got ill motive.../ This kid claims to have a classified location such as E.T../ Bitch go back to roswell, you don’t stand a chance against me../ Why do you call urself a lyrical genius, its pretty obvious ur not../ Kid look at this equation Blaze=Smartz Squared, im twice what you got../ Fly like a butterfly, sting like a bee, you aint got a chance like m.js court appeal../ Kid what you were thinking, ur dictionary is as thick as ally mcbeal../ |
and fists a leave u full of chipz like lays,gun pushed up against ya organs cuz instruments i like to play
i came weak so u could last longer like i extended ya dayz, cuz u wak,point blink itz a fact,ima killa wit the contracts, leaving out cold from the impact,it devisating,u hold massive hating,my good u suk theres no realting, blows leaving u achen,dont eva have the master awaken, or ill pul ya legiments otu and leave ya hol body straightin, so u aint reaching me tart,cuz u not smart,but ima leavin u beatin like ya heart, ur times iz now from ya overdoses,i leave ya body seperated like the water controlled by moses,and leave ya spine outta shape like u got scoleioses |
leaving you* iight uppin 4 votes
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im good*relating*i waz rushing i gota go sumwhere peace
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I have to give thise one to smartzz he had a better flow, better punches, and he had more personals in his lyrics so my vote goes to smartzz.
hey hit up on this battle peace. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128248 |
wtf...he didnt have any personals...fake vote....wuteva uppin for votes....jeez...i knew i should put a limit on who cant vote
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that was a fake verse anyway it wasnt directed towards anyone...
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uppin 4 votes
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Blazin- vocab was excellent, the verse about Ally McBeal was hilarious, you closed well, the flow was okay, but left something to be desired, the rhymes were unusual in a postive way
Smart- really your spelling sorta through me off, but the flow was okay. your rhymes were aiight, but could have hit harder. your closing was off the chain. I vote Blazin. Y'all vote on Lightshift vs CaliCollegeGurl aiight. |
Tha vocab is wat got u my vote Blaze, but come tougher next time B.
vote Blazin Aziin |
both had pretty decent punches but i liked smartzz better, he also had more so therefore
v/smartzz Plz return favor |
iight uppin
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im voting Blaze. he had better punches and personals. the ET/roswell punch was pretty funny. smartzz's verse was also pretty tight, but it lacked the personals imo.
ps. can you check out my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128605 and leave some feedback, cheers. |
uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 votes |
iight uppin
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uppin 4 mo votes....................................
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uppin 4 votes
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ok vocab= blazin
wordplay=blazin punches=blaze everythin blaze was better lol vote=blaze, hit me bakhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?p=1339485#post1339485 |
lol...anyways uppin fo votes
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i think blazin got this shit because the smartzz structure was very confusing and blazin had pretty good wordplay.blazin get this in my opinion
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