LIGHTSHIFT VS CaliCollegeGurl
 

15 Lines
No Hate
No D/r

All Votes Must Be Explained

Your turn...
 

Lightshift better strap on a rubber cuz
I flow bringing pleasure and pain
No sex so call it lyrical masturbation
But I prefer Rapbattles elevation
Or maybe Lightshift annihilation.
A female on the mic cut throat making you bleed
Could call it verbal menstruation
Rape you with this vocal violation
I may be the newbie but this is Lightshift’s indoctrination
He opens up wide cuz
While I spit dismissing vagina definitions
On your knees praying for redemption
Rhymes tight like Speedos creating testicular torture
Is this enough or do you need more?
Better thank God that you told me 15 lines is the limit
Otherwise, Lightshift I’d cut you down infinite

3 VOTES WIN BATTLE

You better ~Grab the Heat~ and ~Blast at Me~/[1]
Even under ya best efforts, you become a ~Tragedy~//[2]
You can bet your ~Ass it’s Me~ it’s ~No games
I ~Drastically~ Sling Verbs at you ~Elastically~//[4]
I’m GOD to you, and you still Spit ~Blasphemy~/[5]
Under your False Beliefs I'm the ~Last you'll See~//[6]

Locked and Blow

It’s “Essential”, that your Rhymes aren’t a “Rental”/[7]
Cause Steppin to me wit Pre-Written shit is “Mental”//[8]
You can Check my “Credentials”, I’m Honed in like a “Sentinel”/[9]
With a “Missile” ready for the trigger, to penetrate ya “Dentals”//[10]
It’s Signed and “Initialed”, the Contract’s now “Official”/[11]
Last thing in your Brain "Chiseled", was the Sound of a "Whistle"//[12]
Your Murder was “Abysmal”, and now being Stuck in the Death “Ripple”/[13]
It's got you Addicted to Pain, so I let you Down "Gentle"//[14]

quick shit wasn't expecting you to respons uppin for votes holla

Upping.

good battle but i even gonna vote on dis battle cuz to me it was a tie good shyt much respek to both of ya

yo dis battle wuz decent lightshift wuz str8 but i wuz surprised by cali she ripped him in personals and punchelines her structure and humor wuz a lil off but she gets my vote

vote-cali

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was feelin cali gurls veerse more period word ass woopin basicly

v/cali

Uppin.

my vote goes to light cuz da You can bet your ~Ass it’s Me~ it’s ~No games
I ~Drastically~ Sling Verbs at you ~Elastically~//[4]
lines were ill niggaz

plus half da time Cali was rhymin she didnt have flow and was hard to follow

yo this battle was strait CaliCollegeGurl had better personals, punches and vocabulary lightshift and calicollege gurl were tied with structure so my vote goes to cali gurl good job both of you

Vote:CaliCollegeGurl

punches:cali
personals:cali
strucutre:light
creativity:cali
originality:light

vote goes to cali chica cuz she came less played then shifter, lines i never heard before, nice punches and keep elavating..//
vote : cali

I can't believe how much upping it takes just to get votes on a battle. Well, thanx to all who voted. 1 luv.

Upping.

damn...
 

ayo i gotta give dis 1 to cali. her flow was kinda off but her punches made up for it....so angry, so funny... damn that must hurt lmao. yea she had better personals and it was jus a good diss verse
light-u had ill vocab n ya structure was nice but ya needa git more personal n more punches... yea sum of ya shyt was played but jus keep goin

v/cali
~1~

This was a pretty easy vote here.. I think LightShift had some forced multi-s and I wasn't really feelin his delivery as a whole, the punchlines weren't workin for me and the word play wasn't very intense... I think CaliCollege had a little wordplay in here, like the lyrical menstruation line, and some decent attempts at punchlines so she takes my vote... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356