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Kingz \/z kEtCh~22
kEtCh~22's rules
kEtCh~22 to spit first 8-10 lines no hate no crew no d/r votes no feedin verse due within 30 mins of check in |
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Never Fail in the ring, like Daly I Got a Whale of a swing, From the Atmosphere spit at ya ear & Hail To The King, Don't even have ta Put Ya In Ya Place..You Stay Wak, Infact, I'll fukin Roll ya Down Tha Street cuz Ya Games Crap(s), Pursue Me B. Neva!! got a store-of-teck's-&-Muh-Mills-is-Scary, This Fagg's 'Goin Down in Rank' Like Oral-sex-in-da-Military. Im DYnmite Tight and Dawg Im Takin Over Position's, U betta Think Twice bout yo SIckness Like a Siamese Physicians. Trust...i ain't bluffin-ma-Cleva-Hooks-On-Lock, Its Like i got E.S.P, cuz right now u prolly sayin...... Quote:
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lol nice finisher.................................
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Accepting my challenge?… dog that’s a bit reckless
…I’ll show u ya own reflection… leaving you on your on death list! My lyrics leave you ‘cursed’…you ketch my drift? …even if u were Jay Z… you couldn’t produce a ‘gift’! join old RB…so u can be the wackest on both boards …7-0? He must be a dj… the way he is fiddling with records! Before you can even blink…im gunna rip your eye out …sorry to use a gay joke but… you posted in the Dicks 2 Ride tryouts! I don’t even need to finish…cos your already diminished …you steal a crews name… then you cant even get in it! |
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verse was ok...but ya last line is garbage..check the crew forum...kina kills ya closer when ya wrong...lol
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yo ok
kingz- man both of you had nice as verses word this was a hot battle man and it showed this might be the text battle of the mounth word but i was felling 22's punches alil bit more than yours and his personal was better than you just makeing fun of him wanning to be in a crew word v/22 return the favor link in the sig |
Never Fail in the ring, like Daly I Got a Whale of a swing,
From the Atmosphere spit at ya ear & Hail To The King, this was bad.. Don't even have ta put Ya In Ya Place..You Stay Wak, Infact, I'll fukin Roll ya Down Tha Street cuz Ya Games Crap(s), this was pretty decent.. Pursue Me B. Neva!! got a store-of-teck's-&-Muh-Mills-is-Scary, This Fagg's 'Goin Down in Rank' Like Oral-sex-in-da-Military. Laugh: had me going.. Im DYnmite Tight and Dawg Im Takin Over Position's, U betta Think Twice bout yo SIckness Like a Siamese Physicians. Clever punch.. Trust...i ain't bluffin-ma-Cleva-Hooks-On-Lock, Its Like i got E.S.P, cuz right now u prolly sayin...... 'nuttin-has-eva-looked-so-hot' Good quote but rest was meh! 6-10.. Accepting my challenge?… dog that’s a bit reckless …I’ll show u ya own reflection… leaving you on your on death list! wtf this was bad last line.. 1+2 were aitte.. My lyrics leave you ‘cursed’…you ketch my drift? …even if u were Jay Z… you couldn’t produce a ‘gift’! this was a quality punch join old RB…so u can be the wackest on both boards …7-0? He must be a dj… the way he is fiddling with records! This was dope had me like woah! Before you can even blink…im gunna rip your eye out …sorry to use a gay joke but… you posted in the Dicks 2 Ride tryouts! oh shit that ripped him bad I don’t even need to finish…cos your already diminished …you steal a crews name… then you cant even get in it! :laugh2: punch of the mattch if its true.. 8-10 Kingz had harder punches and they were consistant.. \/0te Kingz.. |
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punches- 22 r.s. - 22 creativity- 22 nuff said flat out. v/22 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Aight, both were very good with the punches. But King's punches hit harder. Really good battle, flow on both sides wasn't bad. But 22, you should improve your structure coz it's wack.
V/Kingz Hit this up in return and I'll come back and poll vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...450#post1333450 Peace |
ayo ketch got to add kingz to his merked list.
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yo ok
kingz- man both of you had nice as verses word this was a hot battle man and it showed this might be the text battle of the mounth word but i was felling 22's punches alil bit more than yours and his personal was better than you just makeing fun of him wanning to be in a crew word v/22 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. WRITE YOUR OWN FEEDBACK |
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Kingz Killed it i think he got it by a little bit his flow and punches and Personols where on the Mark i liked all his lines
Ketch~22 ya shit was Tight some of ur shit was Streched so it didint turn out right Big Upz Doe Break Down Kingz Flow 8/10 Punches 9/10 Rhymez 7/10 Structure 8/10 32/40 Ketch~22 Flow 8/10 Punches7/10 Rhymes 7/10 Structure 8/10 30/40 V/Kingz |
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Yo I need 50 posts to poll vote...
...when I get 'em I'll poll vote immediately. Peace |
Aight, done.
Sorry for postin' again, you can't edit. Peace |
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Never Fail in the ring, like Daly I Got a Whale of a swing, From the Atmosphere spit at ya ear & Hail To The King, NICE META-WEAK PUNCH 6/10 Don't even have ta Put Ya In Ya Place..You Stay Wak, Infact, I'll fukin Roll ya Down Tha Street cuz Ya Games Crap(s), WASNT FEELIN THAT 4/10 Pursue Me B. Neva!! got a store-of-teck's-&-Muh-Mills-is-Scary, This Fagg's 'Goin Down in Rank' Like Oral-sex-in-da-Military. GUD MULTI,META-GUD PUNCH 7/10 Im DYnmite Tight and Dawg Im Takin Over Position's, U betta Think Twice bout yo SIckness Like a Siamese Physicians. HAHA NICE-7/10 Trust...i ain't bluffin-ma-Cleva-Hooks-On-Lock, Its Like i got E.S.P, cuz right now u prolly sayin...... Quote: Originally Posted by Kingz 'nuttin-has-eva-looked-so-hot' GUD MULTI/PERSONAL-AVERAGE PUNCH 6.5/10 OVERALL-wordplay,metas n multies but ur punches cudve cum harder 30.5/50 Accepting my challenge?… dog that’s a bit reckless …I’ll show u ya own reflection… leaving you on your on death list! OK OPENER 6/10 My lyrics leave you ‘cursed’…you ketch my drift? …even if u were Jay Z… you couldn’t produce a ‘gift’! NICE WORDPLAY 7/10 join old RB…so u can be the wackest on both boards …7-0? He must be a dj… the way he is fiddling with records! GUD PUNCH 7/10 Before you can even blink…im gunna rip your eye out …sorry to use a gay joke but… you posted in the Dicks 2 Ride tryouts! GUD 4 A GAY LINE 6/10 I don’t even need to finish…cos your already diminished …you steal a crews name… then you cant even get in it! OK-6/10 OVERALL-punches bit harder than ketches,like the structure n flow 32/50 kingz jus took this coz he came that little harder in punches i liked ketches wordplay,creativity but he cud hve used that to make harder punchlinez vote-kingz |
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Aight im gonna give this to Kingz even though i didnt really appreciate what he said about my crew name verse was good had a nice structure to it too. Decent hard hittin personals and punches to also good link ups dawg keep it up.
Ketch you had a good verse to jus wasnt as hard hittin plus you were hypin yourself up in a couple of lines and i dont like self glory used too much...But a nice structure was also what you had but Kingz had ya on this V/Kingz (D2R line was funny, but i didnt like it) Destined 2 Rhyme 4 Ma Fuckin LIFE!!!! |
aight battle...But I think kingz take this one...
king-You had better structure and punches was weak but you did beat him..Had similies no metas or vacab...Good drop Ketch-Aight came real close..But I give it to ua..Structure need more work..Would have had a chance to hit harder..work on them punches some was tight v/kingz return the favor please since I did yours http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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