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Lethal Kahn vs. Mc's Reaper
10-16 lines max.
No crew, hate, d/r votes. No recycling. No biting. Blind Spit. We both have 2 hours from now. G/L. |
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Check in so I can make sure you're not a no-show. |
Checkin in ha ha, 2 hours what the fuck, what you watch Bet and get out ya russel simmons book and go over some things like whats a punchline- niggih it dont take that fuckin long before I spit, so guess now its crunch time- Now I'm telling you this battle is over now so listen cause I'm only saying it one time-
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im an 'earthquake' send 'shocks-through-ya-larva', beat me? you got a better chance of provin the Lox-went-to-Harvard, 'menace detective' a collaboration of Pac-n-Mcguiver/
leave ya 'patched-up' like attackin-a-pirate, you on a 'crash-course' cuz i sell crack-to-da-pilot, weigh-in-my-thesis yo throat ceases to release an increase of whats needed to breath/ basically ya left 'speechless', found in a sanbox by kids playin-at-recess, start prayin-to-Jesus the result of my vocabulary-clearance wit words im marvelously-brilliant/ and the sawed-shotties-appearance is enough to give this bitch an 'out-of-body-experience' called the 'rap Stalin' cuz im buryin-millions, 'emotionally-unfit' cuz ya carryin-feelings/ im 'Kanye Blessed' but it 'all falls down' for you 'inherit-da-ceiling', never off my game like Kobe gettin senteced-a-hearing, versus me you get death, yo 'penance-fo-being'/ |
I put 2 hours coz I got other battles on the Original RB dumbass...
Ima post sometime soon... |
Well hurry the fuck up so this one dont fade "dumbass", I got like 5 other ones also, that'wn mean shit what you saying. lets go.
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Every 3 lines(short lines) = 1 bar. And since it's 16 lines(long lines), I get 8 bars. Can't change it, it's my structure.
Aight check it... U represent wackness, coz that's what u are why should i spit?... ...when u'll get merked by ur own bars! No pulse, coz ima heart attack to ur health he has no punches... ...so the bitch actually propped himself! No need to state the winner, he already knows coz even he said... ...that his death is "very close"!* Ur an earthquake, but im what stops it ur spits are so played... ...people come in and shop it! Merken u, with my rhymes flowin around u battlin' isn't enough?... bitch ur lucky i dont fuckin' drown u! I'm throwin punches, but u missed with bricks u think this is wack?... ...ever actually read ur own spits?! He's so wack, he posted a thread startin a crew and till now... ...he didn't even get 1 view! That's it, dont u know the game's over can sumone get rid of him?... ...just take the "Dirt Off My Shoulder"! * - Look above his status. It's written "very close". |
aight Uppin. lets go the favor will be returned to those who drop an honest vote.
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Hm@Lethal Kahn, who are you on the regular rapbattles? Ha. Because everyone uses that damn structure. But anywho, Lethal Kahn took this because you came harder and had better punches and Mc's Reaper thinks multis when battles for some odd reason and his structure was horrible. And MC, you praised yourself. Dont do that. Neither of you came dope, but Lethal obviously took this.
Vote-Lethal Quote:
That basically did it for me. |
Man seriously lets get some votes in here UPpiN...
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reaper- your sturcher was hard to follow man and i wasnt feelin the style at all oversall you had no personals either you had punches but that was it period man
leathal- sturcher was good but flow was ehhhh but you made an attemp at a personal and that was y you got this i feel ok v/ Khan retun the favor links in the sig |
reaper- your sturcher was hard to follow man and i wasnt feelin the style at all oversall you had no personals either you had punches but that was it period man
leathal- sturcher was good but flow was ehhhh but you made an attemp at a personal and that was y you got this i feel ok v/ Khan retun the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127447 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126824 |
Lethal Kahn Ripped the Spot light his structure was tight u need more Complex Rhymes and Punches but u did good
Mc's Reaper was ok but ur Verse Was Nursery rhymes so its not as good i think Lethal Kahn Came away wit it Break Down Mc's Reaper Flow 5/10 Rhymes3/10 Punches 6/10 Structure 5/10 19/40 Lethal Kahn Flow 7/10 Rhymes 8/10 Punches 7/10 Structure 7/10 29/40 V/Lethal Kahn |
Aight thx for the votes...
I ripped this lil' hoe... Uppin' |
You ripped me huh, yeah I'll give you this one I did bullshit it, but battle me again, rematch, I'll set it up. Just show. what up on??
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I got active battles...
...maybe later. Uppin' |
can't vote i'm in the the crew but Mc's Reaper merk your ass he had better everthing. but lethal kahn the style is too confusing change it and you might be better.
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^^Shut up...
Uppin' |
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...drop a link and I'll return the vote. |
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to be honest i hated both of those pieces of crap. STRUCTURE WAS HORRENDOUS.( ya prolly thinkin i'm Simon(american idol judge givin bad criticism)
BREAKDOWN: REAPER: THIS LINE CONTAINS NOTHING- NO PUNCH NO NOTHING. leave ya 'patched-up' like attackin-a-pirate, you on a 'crash-course' cuz i sell crack-to-da-pilot, weigh-in-my-thesis yo throat ceases to release an increase of whats needed to breath/ NE WAYS I DONT THINK U PUT FORTH EFFORT IN THIS BATTLE DAWG. I KNOW UR MUCH BETTER THAN THAT. NO SIGN OF A "VET" IN THIS BATTLE. ELEVATE BETTA LUCK NEXT TIME. LETHAL: BOTH OF YALL VERSES AND STRUCTURE WAS AGGRAVATIN' IT DIDN'T MAKE SENSE. U EDGE THIS OUT CUZ U HAD DECENT PUNCHES BOTH WERE ON THE SAME LEVEL. VOCAB WAS O.K. MY V/ LETHAL FOR DECENT STRATEGY-- SOMEWHAT EASIER TO READ AND UNDASTAND |
yo ill give dis one to MC rapper he had a ways better flow and his punchlines smackes way harder.
V/ MS RaPPER |
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you two>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...........................
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One more vote.....................................
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REMEMBER TO RETURN VOTE HONESTLY. Second link(Finished)
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Uppin'
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Yeah, uppin' like no other...
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Dayumn this battle is so old, I just need 1 more vote.
C'mon, I swear I'll return the favor. |
Mc's Reaper
structure was wack as fuck...all ur lines were stretched...flow was also wack as fuck because of the wackness in ur structure...u had tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...ur punches were wack as fuck...no personals... Lethal Kahn structure was good...flow was on target...u didnt have very many metas...u had some wordplay...most of ur punches connected well...personals were tight... Overall Reaper had more, and better metas...as well as better wordplay...Lethal had the better structure...the better flow...more and harder hitting punches...better personals...so basing off of that...Lethal Kahn gets my vote... VOTE - LETHAL KAHN |
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