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king solo vs. j-poll
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
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here it is i'm just going 10 or 12 strong...
straight key... I'm beating this kings face with lyrical fists til there in casts... Kids gettin no where lyrically, like a sail boat with no mast... I relish a challenge, so why am I battling this newb... So wack, he had to move the stickers to beat the rubix cube... I feel bad merkin this kid, cause he's my biggest supporter... He takes losses as fast as Mcdonalds takes drive thru orders... Not even a king V S herbs, finally i'm some real competition... Dirt Boy hates my ass, for once I even got his prediction... Everything tells me your whack, face it, it's known... Kids styles so poor i swear, it's looking like gunit101 cloned... Funny how you think you're hot shit but your never on the speakers... But whatever, what kind of show starts off with the main feature... |
nice drop jp
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^ liar.
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aight here's my drop..............................
U cud call me Chucky cuz this battle’s gonna be Child’s Play I cud take it to the frontlines and still nobody wud Poll for J Like viagra for fear, JPoll saw that I showed and his fear rose Shit himself and that's why he checked in with a peg on his nose You cud get hit with the plague and still wouldn’t come out ill Check out this verse, looks like J has reached the peak of his skill JPoll u signed in at week four and now ure league record is 6 – 2 Yet I returned two weeks back and already I’m higher ranked than u Happy that he got into a crew J went round acting all hyperactive Then he became co-leader, and the Blueprint crew became inactive And look…u a fake vet with spittin skillz worse than a newbie rook I’ll finish u quotin ure own avatar “FUCK YOU YOU FUCKIN FUCK!” |
hmm.... biting from old RB is not cool....
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^^^wat are you talkin about???
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solo you biting?
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i don't fuckin know
am i bitin..................if so i'd like to know cuz its news to me |
i aint saying no more, i dont wanna see anyone get banned over it or some stupid shit. you know who you are. dont do it again.
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hmm...
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how can solo be biting his verse was all personals
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v/King solo
JPoll, you need to seriously get off of Gunit101's dick cause in all of your veres, you talk about him, like he's your ex boyfriend. thats all you do, "gunit101 clone" and "he makes gunit101 look good" give it a rest, and actually try to throw some punches. King solo, didnt come great, but did just barely enough for the win. once again v/king solo |
^^^you're the joke^^^that's twice out of what...like 30 battles....idiot
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King Solo 1-0 JPoll |
uppin stop swaying^^^
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if jpoll's the biter ill find out now.......
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Nope Jpoll aint the biter here.
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^^^my point exactly |
breakdown for jpoll:
flow: workin no off spots good job 7/10 volcab:alright nothing complex but good 6/10 punches:some alright personals nothing too great favline,"Kids gettin no where lyrically, like a sail boat with no mast..." kinda played but whatever i liked it 7/10 overall:20/30 good verse breakdown for king solo: flow:not workin quite as good as jpoll i don't think it seemed kinda choppy to me i don't know 6.5/10 volcab:no complaints not amazing but not bad either 6.5/10 punches:some alright personals here too both did a good job here my fav line,"Like viagra for fear, JPoll saw that I showed and his fear rose" lines kinda played but made me laugh so 6.5/10 overall:19.5/30 vote--really close match but i gotta give this to j-poll |
aight score is now tied.....................
King Solo 1-1 JPoll keep uppin these votes........................ |
this battle was good i think both came hard....Jpoll i think u had better flow but yet some was kinda shaky but good....ur wordplay wasalso good..my fav line was that rubix cube...it made me laugh overall it was pretty decentummm 7.5/10
Kingsolo....ur flow was ok but on some parts i wasnt feelin it like the part wit the rose nose part u know wut lines it is.....anyways u had some gud lines....i liked that open wit the childs play that was pretty good....the endin kinda ruined it for me cuz rook and fuck dont rhyme so that blew that...overall 6.5/10 this was one of ur weker verses vote=jpoll |
v/King solo
I agree woth who ever saod he be on gunit's dick. but, kpoll was just coming weak, overall King came with all personals, like babylon said. and personals are better than punches. most of the time. |
ECKO - rook and fuck do rhyme...cuz its rook as in rookie
oh well score is still tied at 2-2 now |
nice battle king...good spit...2 to 2...uppin
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lol rook and fuck doesnt rhyme rook makes the oo sound and fuck makes the u sound oo and u doesnt rhyme lol |
^^^and you still voted for him...wtf...p.s.nice verse in the lll Jr^^seriously
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exactly kryo u still voted 4 me
and if ppl think that rook and fuck don't rhyme then they are stupid cuz rook rhymes with look and look rhymes with luck and luck rhymes with fuck ^^that is just a little chain to show you that it rhymes but fuck dat anyway uppin on this tight ass battle......................... |
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The chain is all well an good.. till you get to `look` an `luck`.. they don`t rhyme. Thus breakin` the `chain`. |
all depends on how u pronounce them
if u pronounce them correctly then u will find out that they do rhyme cuz look is pronounced luck, any dumbass knows that so therefore rook is pronounced ruck which rhymes with fuck......does anyone even go to school!!! |
uppin anyways...let's get some more votes...2 to 2
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j-poll
I relish a challenge, so why am I battling this newb... ....he aint a newbie I feel bad merkin this kid, cause he's my biggest supporter... He takes losses as fast as Mcdonalds takes drive thru orders... ...good secound punch there, your best, but aint nobody supportin u. Funny how you think you're hot shit but your never on the speakers... But whatever, what kind of show starts off with the main feature... ....ok u made fun of yourself here twice. first audio battles neither of u have one so w/e punch u tryin to throw there was at u too, secound, what kind of show starts off with the main feature, ummm u went first. so...... u aint the main feature. ________ king solo. Like viagra for fear, JPoll saw that I showed and his fear rose Shit himself and that's why he checked in with a peg on his nose .... didn't get that at all, peg on his nose, how is that a punch Happy that he got into a crew J went round acting all hyperactive Then he became co-leader, and the Blueprint crew became inactive ....your best punch king solo's shit had better punches and i didn't have to make fun of his verse as much so...... vote-king solo |
^^^ you're an idiot...learn to read...
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hmm... tsk, tsk. this look familiar to anyone?
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^^^see i knew i wasn't biting................................
JPoll why did u edit ure verse???...................hhmmmmmm anyway King Solo 3-2 JPoll |
im gonna say rook and fuck dont rhyme anyway...lol....
king..... i dont think you bite... your verse was all personals overall 16/20 you had good structure flow and great peronals and your personals won you the battle j-poll you had a pretty good verse with nice structure and flow... the only thing you lacked were great personals and punches overall 14/20 so my vote goes to kingsolo |
King Solo 4-2 JPoll
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rofl@ I dont know. |
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