<PhAnToM01 vs kEtCh~22>
 

8-10 lines..no FEEDING..g-luck..~1~

My Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom.
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom,

even if ya Name was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks

quick one g luck...

y Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom,
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom.
& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost.

i like dat shyt kidd jus comin out n rippin shyt dats wutz up holla at dis kid man im feelin dis

& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost.

im feelin dat shyt son 1

take a look somebody from MT is decent Kids...
cause he likes 2 KETCH 22 punches 2 his ribs....
trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....
MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)


F1N1SH1N u off

u like a dead preacher not even nuns can reach you....
ma burna caught u...now fo rappin u shud let BIG PAC n PUN teach you... if yall dont get it dont vote ight ~1~ 2 ma niggaz

uppin good battle let da votes take place good shit ketch

weak battle didn't really feel neither one of yall but ima vote 4 ketch~22 nothin really stood out but jus chose some one

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o yea Ketch no crew votes ....

DamnPhantom gEt that Vote Dq'ed



now its goin down like this


Ketch~22
u cam so weak in this battle like hell u beat Kingz and i think u Ran out of Mitearal so u probley lost this
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Phantom

u had nice ass Punches and Personol's i was Dieing at that Four Year old Part good shit


bReak DOwn

Ketch

Flow 6/10
RHymez 7/10
Punches 5/10
Structure 6/10
24/40

Phantom

Flow 8/10
Rhymez 7/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 6/10
30/40


V/Phantom01

damn thats hot is hell
but i vote for:kEtCh~22

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imma give this one to phantom, he came with it harder with the punches and personals and had better word play... over all a shitty battle but phantom killed ketch22.....

VOTE= PHANTOM

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uppin niggaz dont sleep on dis battle we wanna close it explain all votes iight ~1~

take a look somebody from MT is decent Kids...
cause he likes 2 KETCH 22 punches 2 his ribs....
~not a bad opener good personal~

trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....
~I like this one good punch~

MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
~Again nice punch~

You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)
~Not bad~

F1N1SH1N u off

u like a dead preacher not even nuns can reach you....
ma burna caught u...now fo rappin u shud let BIG PAC n PUN teach you... if yall dont get it dont vote ight ~1~ 2 ma niggaz
~Ok close~

y Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom,
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom.
~Great punch and personal~

& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
~Best punch in this battle~

Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
~Nice punch~

If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost
~Great punch & personal for the close~

Phantom
Flow ~ 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punch's 7/10
Structure 5/10
24/40

Ketch
Flow ~ 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punch's 8/10
Structure 7/10
28/40

ketch won this battle had better punchs & personals and the flow was great.
Phantom had a good verse to punchs was good and had a decent open and
close hold it up both good battle.

Vote ~ Ketch

I think Ketch one just becouse of his closer.
Ketch....
"If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost."
That shit was hot, I'll admit.

the onlything I did'nt like about Ketchs open was he sent it in and then retyped it and sent it in again rather than making another open.I wont take points for that one, shit happends.
He flowed ill and came hard. Punches were to be respected.

PhAnToM01.....
"trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'....."
I was feelin this for about 30sec. than I figuered it aint much since if u add the entire shit up. But get props for the second line that comes after that...
"MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)"
This would've won you the battle I think if you would have open harder or said fuck the rules and wrote more or some shit. I was feelin tha clostraphoboc shit. thats good but not enough. sorry dawg.

Phantom
Flow ~ 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punch's 4/10
Structure 3/10
21/40

Ketch
Flow ~ 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punch's 8/10
Structure 5/10
28/40

Vote goes to Ketch

Ahh it was a close baTTle in my opinion none really tried both kept their styles similar punches were equal didnt see much personals although Phantom did have a couple. I liked Phantoms use of Ketches name and the metaphorical line was aight nice wordplay there both need sum elevation but i think Phantom scraped it here. Ketch can do a lot better you have got mad potential and i think more effort into ur rhyme and you would've got this, it was jus too basic word of advice...never underestimate your opponent and i think you did that Ketch sorry.

V/Phantom RTF on my sig

y Blows, their more Overbearing than ya Damn Mom,
Don't know ya last name, but I can tell ur a Fan-Tom.
7...gud opener, funny and nice play off of his name!!
& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
6...gud meta but weaker than ure opener!!
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend,
6...nice wordplay, pretty average punch!!
If you tellin people u good,no biggie, your decieving at most
It's not that i have faith in U, I just don't believe in a ghost.
7...gud closer, another play off his name...clever!!


take a look somebody from MT is decent Kids...
cause he likes 2 KETCH 22 punches 2 his ribs....
5...weak opener, ure glorifyin ure opponent in the 1st line.
trust me dogg ya techniques arent metaphorical...
tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....
5...weak again and played!!
MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces...
6...better but still cud be better!!
You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....
nigga left his own house cause he clostraphobic...(scared of small places)
5...wtf?? another weak punch!!
u like a dead preacher not even nuns can reach you....
ma burna caught u...now fo rappin u shud let BIG PAC n PUN teach you...
5...a weak punch and fucked up structure!!

POINTS TOTALS
ketch~22 - 26/40 65%
Phantom01 - 26/50 52%

V/ - ketch~22

aiight phantom took dis...he came harder wit punches and personals....ketch had no personals, altho he had good punches....everything elese was a tie bascially...

Vote:phantom

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^^drop a vote

who ever cancels all my votes betta cancel this shit^^

This battle was way even. Nothing that unique about it, you were both consistent and had decent punches. I think this one line helped tip the scale: "my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts"...that was ill.

v/Phantom by a hair....keep ya game up y'all

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u mean ketch...lol..w/e

Ima have to dis-agree with Mad-Dog here, I think Ketches lines flowed better, I felt his punches more- and I think his structure stayed very consistent as opposed to his opponent, here are my fav lines from both of you...

& even if it was McGuire, ya wouldn't get High-Marks,
my knifes-start, ta cut U up in sections like Pie-Charts,
Think U ballin like And-1, dog i'll teach ya whole team,
if ya Pick n Roll, i'll Smoke ya Screens like A Dope Fiend, - I really felt the punchlines, you display really good wordplay on the second bar. Your opener and closer weren't killer but neither were your opponents.

MT prolly gon lose so we gon have some Blue faces....(Sad)
Leave da lead in ya mouth like u got some new braces... - This was my favorite bar from you- decent punchline... I think your opener had a very basic punchline off your opponents name, decent but nothing great... This was a pretty close battle but I think Ketch won this... And neither yall gotta return the favor cuz I aint got a link to send... ez

Aiight, 1st off, Phantom...

You had good flow, but not very good punches. Da punches you did have seemed forced, like these 2 lines especially...

tonight hes losin his virginity...cause he just 'met a four year old'.....

^^VERY FORCED

You think u 'off da hook' cause u lost ya fone bitch....

^^A LIL FORCED, BUT MAINLY LACKKS COMPLEXITY...

In all dawg, your verse lackked da complexity and wittiness dat Ketch had.

Ketch you had some nice wordplay, and killer punches. Da type of shit niggaz like to read, coz you know niggaz don't like to read unless it's worthwhile lOl...

VOTE=KETCH

Yo i ain't gonna write a wohle thing about the battle i'ma just keep it short and sweet

Phantom
yo phantom readin your shit i can see your comin with forced punches which just ain't good to read

Ketch
yo ketch those punches were ill and the shit flowed hella good you had good wordplay to

Vote=ketch