DaCROZofHB vs A.K.A.
 

10-15 lines

no crew
d/r


u spit first

iight iight playaz rippin each otha apart i like dat good luck on da battle 1

checkin in

dawg i ain't got nothing today so i'll do it tomorrow

wtf, this isnt supposed to be prewritten

Yo with a gun to the face this dawg aint gonna bark he gonna skeel//
and this bullet gonna put him in the chalk forreal//
I'm straving and you a full cousre meal//
so of couse i'ma eat you//
and when it comes to battling i'ma beat you//
My ryhme style made king and you just a jester//
cause your style amuses me, but go a way cause it time for me to get brain like hannabel lecter//
you ain't even got a knife so how you talking a violence//
dude in this battle i could merk you even if i was using silence//

i only need nine 1

Aight check it

Dis guy keeps throwin n missin like he's Shaq Punchen/
Niggas rhymes like da Titanic, Shit just kept Sunken/
Straight Thuggin,Spittin SHELLZ all over ya body call me da Fuckin Dirty DOZEN/
Croz drop dat dangerous shit that leave ya feeling Weak and Weary/
Still spittin Virgin lyrics, Dawg Ima have to Pop ya Cherry/
Startin beef wit me just wasnt smart, I shoot nuthin but Calibers/
Bullets hittin ya from all over, One go Pierce ya Prince Albert/
Nigga joins Boy Scouts, gains a Pocket Knife and thinks hes Hard as Fuck/
Got 6 in da Clip sendin ya telegrams like "Let Me In" Signed Young Buck/
Gaspin for air like you in a Tornado of Dust, Like da Sayin goes Nigga you just "Out of Luck"/
Cant contest my flow it 'Glides' like Clyde Drexla/(Drexler)
Stop pretendin to be hard, I put 9 in da Secta of Hannibal Lecta/
Lyrics like Drunk Drivers, its just a matter of time till these votes begin to Wreck Ya/

votes now dawgs.......hit it up leave a link if you want

Well, to me this was a pretty even battle. Y'all both had strengths and weaknesses. AKA ya flow was cool, except some of the rhyme in the middle seemed forced "but go a way cause it time for me to get brain like hannabel lecter" should have been a shorter line and it woulda flowed better. Overall it was straight on simile, weak on metaphor.

DeCroz, your verse had a lot more strong punches, but also some extremely weak ones. "Shit just kept Sunken"...sunken should be erased from your vocab. But this line was off the chain: Still spittin Virgin lyrics, Dawg Ima have to Pop ya Cherry

I gotta give it to Croz because spitting is about the hard punches and he had the metaphor and personals on lock.

v/Croz

uppin

what the hell is that some you vote for me i'll vote for you shit if so you ass gonna get dqed

This was a good Newb battle you to went for each others heads and that was makes battling fun is when it gets hot like that word but h.b. came harder on this one sorry a.k.a his verse was better he just shut you down ok


v/ HB

RTF links in the sig

ur a faggot a.k.a i didnt say vote for me you dumbfuck im just sayin leave a link if its the only way you'll vote on dis battle....

uppin

keep talking kid i no what you really doing oh by the way what HB in you name

keep uppin

dacross fucked aka up

uppin

krusty is drunk
 

yo
Krusty don't no shit so he just goes wit da shit he likes.
AKA you started off strong as my maddog 20/20
than faded out. Still enough to take this one.
It was close. You both got skillz. Yo can I get some change?

:cussing:

:cussing:

2 MUCH HANNIBAL LECTA

Check out my battle against Lil AJ
Peep dat and I'll share my 40 oz

aka had a good flow and it went well but the punches werent there, they didnt hit like they shoulda. croz you need to work on the structure but ur punches hit good and i think thats what made ur spit. overall both of ya can work on somethin

vote goes to croz

aight this is easy as hell, a no contest battle goin to crozzy. croz had better punches where i didnt see any from AKA.
Croz came with it harder with the rhyme sceeme and the flow was on lock. yo AKA no hate bro but elevate big time dawg if ya gonna play wit da big boys.
good battle over all but Crozzy smacked dat azz.

VOTE= DACROZ